RiKara OS - Unforgotten (#2 of unforgiven)

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Awesome update

What an update

The way u portrayed the feelings

They just touched my heart

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

You know i loved this so much..amazing yar

She is in pain..she is lonely and helpless..its too painful..

He is part of her daily life but in her dreams..she is dreaming about him..she wants to live with him but she can't forget nor forgive him..you described her emotions and feeling perfectly

..heartbreaking...i really wish happy ending..you gonna cntnue this??

Thanks for pm

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Sakura .. this made me cry.. how deep is this love.. can they get back together please .. I just can't see them like this .. I mean it's beautiful beyond words. . He's restricted to her dreams but these dreams are her world .. omg .. it can't get better than this can it.. but I do wonder what happens when Omkara finally realises where his Gauri is .. can things take a turn .. they truly deserve it.. cause breathing they are but not living in the true sense.. chalo thanks for this take on Gauris feelings .. just too beautiful .. thanks a ton :)