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Deepu T D

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Superb OS
awww romanticrikara❤️

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sarroo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Nice OS .. thanks for the pm

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perFICtionist.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

hey poorva! another amazing piece of art as usual. the refreshing bold gauri and an understanding omkara is like a fantasy!

why are you signing off though... your writings give us the much needed respite from poor execution afflicted upon us! please have mercy😕😭

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Neha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Pooru.. what a smooth read this is.. utterly enjoyable .. no bumps .. no hiccups .. just plain love .. two of them are putting Kala teeka types amazing .. had a lot of fun reading this yaa.. taking a break from this show is what I have done so m not surprised about you doing it really .. better take time out rather than breaking your head over Non existent story .. anyway .. till then this is a great fall back.. n I loved the second concept .. thanks for this

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Era

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Such an amazing piece of art ...absolutely mind blowing...

Waiting for ur other concepts ...they are amazing...

Plz write soon

Lots of Love

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Fabulous OS
With no MUs & taunts
Just pure bliss and happiness

Loved how u showed them bonding
Omkara accepting the marriage
Giving them a chance
The family accepting Gauri

He even took her shopping
Cuz he wants his Gauri to be simple
He took care of her
Before his own needs
Same with Gauri
She is possessive
She claims her rights
Loved she said u should have married Khanna

Hey Vrinda 🤗

I am so happy that you liked it

After the high voltage Marriage drama ... I wanted a simpler romance for RiKara which I know is quite not possible on Indian television ... All thanks to dhoom tananana ...

You know so many relationships begin with just a mature acceptance, here again Kara did so ...

They are adorable ... Falling in love a little by little ... Both of them are affectionate and possessive

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: rikara94
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Hello my sweet si behna 🤗how are you??
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Awww again fabulous OS without any misunderstandings
Nice concept poorva
Love the way you showed their bonding.. no family drama no MU no ladayi jhagda..only happiness between them and family..pure bliss..rikara giving a chance to each other by accepting the marriage..even family accept gauri as a bahu
And gauri take care of family members very well..loveed it how she loves his family specially jhanvi and took care of her
She is about to going with anika for shoping but kara thought anika's clothes like table cloth and curtain hahaha🤣
He took her shoping bcoz he wants her to be simpel woow..haha she does not ask him what to choose or not.. my god kya kya shoping kiya😆he also very caring.. he took care of her
Huhh very romantic and hot update
Love each and every part yarr specially when she wore his kurta and he said it suits you better and he is surprised when she wore his shirt next night and she said you told me its suits me better😆
And loved when she said apko khanna ji se shadi kar lete haha😆😆😆she claims her rights
Loved it
Loved it
Awesome yarr
And same with me i am also very unhappy with rikara treatment
All three concepts are seems to be very intersting poorva specially raabta i like it plz update all 3 concepts..i am waiting for this
Gud luck..

Jyoti 🤗

Yeah I managed to keep things super simple because after so much of sci fi and super natural drama ... RiKara fans deserve some peace of mind ...

About the moments ... I just keep recalling our discussions of AT and script them to be dialogues ... Maza aataa hain!

Thank you so much for loving the effort so much .. I wrote about the husband wife relationship which I want to see for RiKara ... Cute sweet romantic hot ... Every element of it

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
loved it ❤️

Thank you afrin 😳

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: krazykaju
This is soo beautiful. Expressing of emotions was soo amazing.
Just loved this os and so much eager to read other concepts.

Thank you so much 😳