RIKARA SS: SYMPHONY part 2 up 14aug - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Fantastic update

Really nice & fresh concept
We both are on same page regarding Rikara
Wish CVs had the sense

But prologue looks dark & intriguing
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon



Thank for liking
Mutual thoughts in the forum...
I wish that too..
Hope you find intriguing further too..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ..dtd...

Prologue look promising!!
looking forward further update!!



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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
wow! what a terrific start! brilliant word play!👏 you have definitely got my attention! please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: perfictionist

wow! what a terrific start! brilliant word play!👏 you have definitely got my attention! please update soon


Thank you..
Hope I will able to span your attention till end
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Fantastic update
Omkara has feelings for her
But something happened in past
That makes him hate her

He is punishing her
Made her his mistress
But Gauri has learned her lesson
Not to show how hurt she is

Eve though Omkara hates her
This possessiveness of his for Gauri
This anger
To hurt her too
But in all this one things is clear
He can't stay away from her
Gauri means a lot to him

Wonder why he accuses her of going to other men
May be something happened in past
Or it might be another MU

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
and they fall in love amidst the misunderstandings...
each being the others undoing.
love the concept! please continue👏😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Totally in love with quote..
Wonder what happened years ago..
But are they friends that time.. What you mean by hukum????
Kaun se village ki story h
Can't wait to unwrapped the story
Do update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Fantastic update

Omkara has feelings for her
But something happened in past
That makes him hate her

He is punishing her
Made her his mistress
But Gauri has learned her lesson
Not to show how hurt she is

Eve though Omkara hates her
This possessiveness of his for Gauri
This anger
To hurt her too
But in all this one things is clear
He can't stay away from her
Gauri means a lot to him

Wonder why he accuses her of going to other men
May be something happened in past
Or it might be another MU

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon



Oh my god! M flatter with the length of your feedback.
Its more feel like your favourite..
Yes they have summoned feeling for each other..
Thank you for taking out time for this one..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: perfictionist

and they fall in love amidst the misunderstandings...

each being the others undoing.
love the concept! please continue👏😃



M already flatter by your pm girl..
Thanks once again no there is no love between them at least from omkara
Though he is somewhat there only but still they are not on same page
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: -lake-

Totally in love with quote..
Wonder what happened years ago..
But are they friends that time.. What you mean by hukum????
Kaun se village ki story h
Can't wait to unwrapped the story
Do update soon


Hukum word plays a important role here.. M surprise no one point it out when I clearly mention

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