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sourmisery

@sourmisery

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ChannaMereya
It. made me cry mujhe sad ending nahi pasand sigh

Main kya karoon mujhse happy endings nahin likhi jaati 😆

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Wonderful shot
Their pain really touched my heart

thank you.

Originally posted by: SRKisLove
Beautiful writing, Mais 👏
Its too heartbreaking though 😭

P.S. Is Tereishqnachaya your blog? I thought Vishwaspur is your sole masterpiece. 😉

I knowww! I realized it after I posted it ke thoda zyada heavy hogaya 😆 tereishqnachaya is my main blog. But it's too multifandom for it to be about anything in particular which is why I made Vishwaspur as my sideblog :P

Originally posted by: TheInkMistress
I had goosebumps. Where in name of Merlin did you bring all these emotions? This was so so so beautifully written. Hands down

thank you sooo much! Actually, the inspiration behind this OS is a vm my friend made long ago. But I'm literally incapable of getting over the feels it gives me. Last night those feels just made me want to give them words. Hence, this.

Originally posted by: HamiSky
I am going to take some extra time to get over this... !!! Its like I want to write more but not finding a single word.

I found that AU very beautiful. I felt a tug in my heart.
Mais... tthis is magic.

The note in the paper...sheezz... smwer inside my heart, I cried.

but the melancholy was soothening too.

Thanks a lot Hami! Finally someone who isn't outright mad at me for the sadness 😆 But honestly in my defense...people remember sad endings more than happy ones. Or maybe I'm just making excuses for my sheer inability to write happy things.

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer
I really don't know what to say. I have tears streaming down my eyes while I type this.

This was so beautifully heartbreaking. Something heavy just settled inside my chest. Gaah, I will go eat some chocolate.

Ouch! I'm sorry That really wasn't my intention 😆 But thank you for the dil se nikalne wali comment 😳

Originally posted by: meLuvsParul
I love saddd painful love stories...

about u,,bohottt baar bolaaa tumhari fan hooo...aur kya bolu...

THNX for this.

jakey writer banoo behen.

Ayeee Promaaa!! 😆 Thank YOU for the constant love you shower on me 😳

Originally posted by: haalim_
U are a saahira for real. It caused a spell on me. This is something else! Loved it!!

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: jhumjhum
Mais what an emotional & unique OS 👏 👏
I can feel every pain yet peace in #RiKara's heart 😭 💔
U make me sad 😭 but still I just ❤️ it 🤗

Awww! <3 Thank youuu! Pain yet peace..that's just the right way to explain the Omkara of this oneshot.

Originally posted by: pt311288
Aw so blissful
Om living in her memories
This was soulful

thank you.

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Oh God..!! I can't find words to explain my feelings after reading this one...it was beautifully heartbreaking...I want to scream and cry... 😭

ohmygod! No! Please don't show that extreme emotion! I already feel bad for making it so sad and this comment isn't helping :((

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: writergenie17
Mais yaar...
Why would you do this to me? You write so beautifully... I've used up half a tissue box trying not to bawl like a baby... 😭 Like you said on tumblr about yesterday's RiKara scene, dil pe zor ka ghusa pada hai.

Dard hota hai ye soch kar ki is duniya mein wo donon saath nahin ho sakte... zinda to hain, magar zinda nahin...

Thanks for sharing this beautifully written piece...

Can't wait for more

Awww! Come here! Let's hug it out! 🤗
But kya karen yaar? Ye jahaan unn ke liye bana hi nahin tha I had honestly tried to minimize the pain, I did show them at least living their life peacefully. But aaah...har kisi ko mukammal jahaan nahin milta and all. InShaAllah the next piece won't be this heart wrenching!

Originally posted by: priya_86
Awesome...lovely...i love these stories...👏

Originally posted by: Shru77
nice !!

Originally posted by: DeewaniMastaani
This is so heart-breaking! 😭

Originally posted by: ..dtd...
Short and very heart wrenching update!!
superb awesome...
rikara moments

Thank you.

Originally posted by: lovesick23
It made me sad. I know there is sonething beautiful about sad endings but can't you write anorher os on the same grounds but with a different ending?

Yes! Sad endings tend to be more memorable than happy endings for me. Hmm...a companion fic for this? Why not? The way I'm feeling guilty for all the sadness I inflicted with this OS, I might end up writing a fixit! Thank you!

Originally posted by: mailanchi
One of the best works on Rikara I have read. U made me cry😭 8 years since Gauri got married...
And the last 4 lines of poem was so heart touching...

Hayyeee! Best hai? 😳 😆 Thank you!

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Awesome...loved it yar

you portrayed it beautifully...

it was superb

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Elation

@Elation

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

This is fab :) thanks for the good read. Can we expect more!

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Zarmina

@falala333

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

In love with this❤️

I guess it doesn't help that I'm listening to romantic songs as well while reading but😆

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lizzy110

@lizzy110

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

no way it was sooo sad but still beautifully written!

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Era

@Memorable_ERA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

OMG! I just witnessed one of the most amazing works of art which i have not seen in a while.

I was left in trance with a pool of feels.

Thanks for writing this as am deeply touched by it...& when am deeply touched by anything the shayar in me Awakens & i end up saying some lines.

So, these lines are a thank u note from me..🤗👏

Mai shaheed hun teri tehreer ka jisne bezuban hokar bhi hazaar lafz bol diye

teri tehrrer ne be nishan ho ke bhi meri rooh pe nishan chod diye

Mujhe acchi tarah se khabar hai tu ne Lakhoon dil tod diye

Lekin tera Shukriya ke tu ne Dard-e-Dil se mere Rishtey jod diye

i know this is nothing in front of ur poetry but still a small thank u

Thanks once again & keep writing more.

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
Awesome...loved it yar
you portrayed it beautifully...
it was superb

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
so beautiful

Originally posted by: lizzy110
no way it was sooo sad but still beautifully written!

Thank you.

Originally posted by: falala333
In love with this❤️
I guess it doesn't help that I'm listening to romantic songs as well while reading but😆

Technically the song inspo behind this is Channa Mereya (reprise) but romantic songs bhi chalenge 😆 Thank youuu!

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: _era_
OMG! I just witnessed one of the most amazing works of art which i have not seen in a while.
I was left in trance with a pool of feels.
Thanks for writing this as am deeply touched by it...& when am deeply touched by anything the shayar in me Awakens & i end up saying some lines.
So, these lines are a thank u note from me..🤗👏
Mai shaheed hun teri tehreer ka jisne bezuban hokar bhi hazaar lafz bol diye
teri tehrrer ne be nishan ho ke bhi meri rooh pe nishan chod diye
Mujhe acchi tarah se khabar hai tu ne Lakhoon dil tod diye
Lekin tera Shukriya ke tu ne Dard-e-Dil se mere Rishtey jod diye
i know this is nothing in front of ur poetry but still a small thank u
Thanks once again & keep writing more.

OH WOW! I'm touched and honored that my writing could bring about such a poetic response from you. It's really a compliment of the highest regard. Thank you SO MUCH for these words and feelings! <3

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