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Posted: 8 years ago
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I wouldn't know how much this "issue shall be discussed.

It's hard to write in Past Perfect Progressive tense. Well, so I'd have to put all my grammar skills in to use to keep this post appear not so complaining.

If I mention Saumya, it would be termed a complaint. If I mention why Bhavya doesn't fit in the story, it would be termed name-calling. So how else do I share my opinion on a public platform? There are enough "in-love supporters of an actor or the character. I do understand. Been there. But one has to understand that there would be some who would be interested in a storyline.


Premise of the brother's stories was introduced through Dadi in the first episode. Shivay believes in NKK; a partner without one(NKK) and the conflicts therein was panned out . It's ongoing.
Omakara hates lies. A partner who doesn't speak truth/speaks lies would bring the conflict in their story. It's happening I believe. There is not much difference between his current lead Gauri and him. It is not that he NEVER supported lies. He did in that accident case that the bro-sis duo did. That story is left open without a closure.

Rudra's love story next. Rudra had been shown as one who is judging people by their looks. His story then should have been towards the realization that it is not external appearance that counts; ultimately it's the inner beauty of a person that is imperative. From the premise of the current love story that is being considered by makers as an exquisite masterpiece, how can Rudra as a character evolve? The writers have been finding a contrived way to deal about physical appearance and mental faculty issues in gender. This could have been put to use when Saumya was kidnapped by Kamini. The conflict could have been shown that Rudra's dependence on showing off the physical prowess in front of "goons lands them in further trouble and Saumya's smartness saved both of them.

The Rudra who was the voice of reason, a feminist once upon a time is suddenly being presented as someone who wants to be "the protector in their relationship. He was the most affected when Priyanka's alliance was considered to Dev and said he wonders why women have to leave their household when men stay back home even after marriage. When Mallika had voiced her concern over equal rights, he was the first to agree that there is discrimination. That Rudra is now being presented as someone who can't accept even when his brothers point out that a lady officer cop, a woman can be stronger than men. His one-upmanship in a relationship is out of context.

If every week is going to be new stories in TRP gaining trial, I am pleasantly surprised why they had been credited with 2 years of research in making this show.The show makers are continuing to run behind ratings from a skewed population. They only have this so called meter installed in a meager 7% of the TV viewing household. They are chasing imaginary figures in a vacuum.

Disclaimer:
My intention is not hurt viewer's sentiments and not to have this as war-inciting post.
I have no complaint against makers. This is an honest feedback.
I have not involved in any name calling.
The writers are being paid for writing sub plots in stories. So it is only a feedback to help them consider doing their jobs a little aesthetically.
All disclaimer notes are heartfelt and anything that appears familiar in terminology is pure coincidence.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good points raised, but I doubt the CVs even care to give a logical answer
This is one of the reason people are finding it difficult to accept bhavya. It's not as if we hate her or the actress, it's just we aren't getting what was promised where Ru's growth is concerned.
Anyway I won't say more, because it's pointless now.
Otherwise your disclaimers are very good😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Exactly my point. The boy who was the first one to support Mallika and Priyanka, is now a male chauvinist pig. Can't take it. CVs need to have their priorities clear and their tracks clear. Where is the conflict in their story ? Atleast Omkara and Gauri are not the same. Gauri believes in getting work done by hook or crook. Omkara doesn't believe it , though he has lied to save his sister. Omkara was becoming darker and Gauri came as his sunshine. Rudra believed in physical beauty and continues to do so after 300 odd episodes of IB and 100 episodes of DBO. That's how much his character has grown. Sad. Pathetic state.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I think rudr n OM were ignored in IB n they decided to give SS to OM in dbowhile rudr is still used to fill scenes..
We need to accept the makers aren't bold enough to show a dashing boy and overweight gal angle...

I also can't accept rudr bring so chauvinist but using his ego as an angle is a good idea if handled well...

I think they are aiming for TRPs with 3 love stories
One the love hate angle which gul is expert at
The normal TV couple angle for rikara to help all TRP audience connect
The young love story for youth audience aka ruvya..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashti1234

Good points raised...


Otherwise your disclaimers are very good😳?...

Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: zooni.blue


We need to accept the makers aren't bold enough to show a dashing boy and overweight gal angle...


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They are the ones who presented it initially.
Now they chicken out.?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Avatarana_

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They are the ones who presented it initially.
Now they chicken out.?

Becoz TRPs audience dint accept?
I dint know how got this idea that audience did not accept soumya...
Star plus has a show called dhai kilo Prem running right?

BTW I think makers weren't bold enough n this made rudr loose SS resulting in him putting down papers

To save obros equation they sacrifice soumya n bring a normal love story for him
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well worded. I agree. The concept of the bothers is good and everything else feel apart.
TBH the two years research must have been to decide how to ruin the show and characters to fit TRP. I don't think there was a proper planning on what the story should be. Vanvaas sounds interesting and so they used it for promotion.

Two years must have been spent deciding budget, writers (fail), editors (mediocre) , stylist (disaster. Just let the cast style themselves) and other such things.

ShivIka, IshKara and RumYa fit the takkar wala love concept but we call all see that only ShivIka still stands. IshKara was a beautiful concept which was ruined and RumYa was neglected and so badly written.

The whole point of this show is lost and with IPK3 Gul has almost forgotten this show. Hence, giving us TRP tracks.

I feel bad for the cast and who ever is behind cinematography and music. All their efforts are being wasted here.

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