RiKara OS - MOH MOH KE ... DHAAGE - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: yayini

Mere bina sanskaari baat.. 😆

Pooru. loved this so much.. after all dori scene is only saving grace after 3 days of torture.. kaash show mein bhi aise hota jaise OS mein likha hain.. Omie and Gauri dancing. Kiss Me? Waise Gauri sometimes closes eyes indirectly encouragin him to do whatever he wants.. Bas omie stops short. I hope aise scenes dekhne ke liye mil jaaye..

Keep coming up with aise hi sanskaaripan behna.. Only respite in this pagal circus of sorts.. Merger ki joke banake rakha hai.. 😆

I agree karthi .. These people put the word writers to shame ... Audiences KO let down karte rehte hai ... Baaki about my sanskaaripanti for this one woh toh tabhi jaag gai thhi ... Jab Maine doriwala spoiler dekha 😆 ... About Romantic Kara ... Let's see what happens in the show ... I am trying to redefine the word merger
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: lakshmi32

Pooru 🤗


Tu meri dil todiya yaar.. Better write dua wala os asap..

it is too hot and sensual . ek dum sanskaari os😆. Chepade Singh oberoi is full on attack..

He gifted her dress but he can't give her directly. Om bhi na. He is teasing her so much. Gauri can't resist his pati.. Aag dono side se Barabar hai..

Dori wala scene is too hot and he is tying mangalsutra is my fav part..

So Mr. Oberoi is possessive abt his wife.. He want to choke everyone with buamaa 's powdered medicine 🤣 this sentence cracked me up..

And atlast he untidy her dori which he tied some hour before..

Thanku for the pm. Iam looking forward of more and more sanskaari os from you 😆


Your most welcome lakhshmi ... I will continue to write such sanskaari stuff 😉😆 apart from everything else my favorite part was ... Poosessive Kara 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Pooru-- yet another masterpiece. This one is brilliant and I loved every bit of it. Naughty-Kara, caring- Kara, jealous- Kara, romantic-Kara.. wow all in one OS? And I love this Gauri who is not shy to know what she wants and feels for her Om. Beautiful update as always 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pooru this is soo sensuous n dreamy.. I loved it yaar.. it just keeps going from one aweee moment to another n I can't stop drooling.. give a few tutorials to our writers please.. they need help.. seriously Pooru.. this one has everything going for it.. romance every line. Loved it.. n I just can't wait for the dhuan part.. how rocking will that be.. I am extremely sorry to be so late in my response but was kinda caught up in work.. but man totally my loss.. this stuff is supposed to be lapped up asap.. super enjoyed it .. :).. thanks for this
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome os!!
Loved it.
Very well written.

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