Shivika OS: A Closed Book 10-07-17 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is the intensity of their love which neither do they realise nor others.
I liked it very much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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fabulous piece of work. i had tears reading with all the feels. Thanks for the experience ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Ah..this is so lovely.
The past and the present combining to draw Shivika together, to help them to overcome the hurt of the separation.

Felt good reading it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Iam speechless after reading this os.
You beautifully portrayed the whole journey of shivika in few words...
But missed Anika's thoughts...
Shivaay was a open book for Anika.she know how to handle him.she can read his eyes.They had a soul connection.
The moments you described were the most memorable part in shivika's journey .
If this way the story progress...it will heart touching and beautiful.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome.
U wrote it so beautifully nd perfectly
Phenomenal
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's so so so beautiful!!!! Love ur writing so much.. All ur stories are just amazing ❤️
Wish we could get something as beautiful as this in the show.. Sigh..

Thanks for this nonetheless ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was so intense. It evoked strong emotions in me. The turmoil, anguish, desperation, loss of Shivaay was palpable. This is great work. Congrats.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fabulous writing
Comparing Shivay with the closed book and the past was fantastic
Reading it was just amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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one of the best os,in recent period.how beautifully u connect the past with present.take a bow dear.
do write more plz.👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Aashti...this was beyond beautiful!! And the excerpt from "Storm in a teacup"...so perfect. That is another one of my favorite stories!!😃

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