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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Brilliant and superb title
Both resembled fire and ice

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moon99

@moon99

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Only if it actually happened on screen

But Anni, as usual perfection ⭐️

I think loved the portion where Shivaay explained it was okay for him to be lifeless, but for Anika to be the same ... no way, she has to be ANIKA
This portion just melted my hear

Waiting to read more 😃

Loads ofLove,
- Sims 🤗

P.S Thanks for the PM 😛

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Divya

@princessdivya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Anni

This is such a beautiful one

Thanks for the PM

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Beautiful OS! Loved it. ❤️

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Zarmina

@falala333

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

This was so deep & emotional it brought tears to my eyes...

I loved it❤️

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Priyanka2020

@Priyanka2020

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

awesome os dear
thanks for pm...

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1012277

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Oooh Anni. This is such a beautiful piece of writing. Really well written. ❤️ Loved the way you've shown their inner turmoil.

Thanks for the PM. :)

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Gopika

@itsgops3010

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

This was so touchy, emotional, well written, beautiful piece of writing...(so many adjectives, lol)

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

awesome os dear
loved itt soo much...
whole story is beautifully written and explained
thanks alot for pm sweets
keep writting more...

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tareyfan

@tareyfan

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

*takes a deep breath *

*tries to come out of the aura that your OS built around so I can finally think of words to comment 😆 *

Trust me hon, you've rendered me speechless.. to call it amazing would be such an understatement ! The emotions were just so palpable.. We all must have thought about the scene in our heads , but to bring it put in words and that too so beautifully , take a bow girl ! You've painted a colurful picture in everybody's minds with those black and white (n also red 😆 ) words of yours... fire and ice has always been intriguing and a lot talked about as well and yet to present it with such freshness is beyond words..

" he was frozen ice after she left. She needed the coolness to calm her wild flames that would soon perish her "

" the world saw fire and ice as contrasting concepts. Only they knew how much they completed each other "

Beautifully penned.. can't get it out of head.. it'll probably stay there for a while 😆

Keep writing hon.. ! Lots of love ❤️