O Mirzyaaa....... - A RiKara TS(Last Part: page 13; 25.11.2017) - Page 7

Your writing is beautiful. Please write more Rijara stories. Now this is the only option to fulfill the Rikara needs 😆

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice

Faye... You did it again 🤗

I'm back with my monologue... not as gripping as Gauri's or Omkara's... Just sending a quick prayer to keep you sane by the time you read it through 😆

I reread the initial part of the shot to get the Pheels and know what ??? Only the Jalebis that I munch know the strenght it takes for me not to write a comment on the previous part.. co I've already worded it earlier. Few Jalebis down my tummy, I make up my mind to stick to comment on the second helping of Jalebis.. Oppps!!! scratch that... I meant second helping of O Mirzyaaa... 😆

Summing up in one word... I would say... ummm... aaa... blleee...

Yaar when have I commented in one word? So here's is the onslaught ... As usual... Just writing it as it comes to me... no filters... And I know You will know what I meant through the muddled thought that are strewn down below...

And Haan... I LOVE YOU LI'L ONE!!!! 🤗

Have always loved the way you WORD the angst and vulnerability so beautifully. ❤️

To her long justified monologuess of what she is losing... He the man of words only has a few to his rescue... but the most befitting ones and longed for WORDS -

"And I stand to lose the only woman who has ever managed to touch my heart, my wife!"

And those words there touched my heart Faye... ❤️

Loved the way you used the words 'quiet' and 'authority' in the same breath, in the very next line after his one line confession, a beautiful antithesis where two rival words exists in harmony.

How much would he give up to have her back in his life?

His babies... the ones that he has come to love,

His life as Omkara Singh Oberoi, surrounded with his siblings

And then something so profound...

His truth that has been his core identity...a reflection of him.

And she is back home, right there where she belongs, holding on to him as he is-

Omkara Singh Oberoi- Her Soulmate,

The father of her children,

The Artist,

The Truth personified.

That he would let go of everything to hold on to her...

is something that only Her Omkara would do

That she would come bck to him no matter how far she wanders...

is something only His Gauri woul do

And that you will time and again warm our hearts with your play of WORDS...

is something only our Li'l Fairy.. Faye... will do.

Enough of my babble...I let the gifs do the honours... Picture This!!!

My Li'L Faye... as she sets to strike us with her WORDS.

Her WORDS leave a gentle mark on her, just as they will when they hit the target, with profound intensity.

And they do the magic ... the WORDS... pierce through the previous strike... right through the heart of the target... A bull's eye.

I just couldn't stop ... I had to... so here's a hug... hope it is as warm as your WORDS... Love you Li'l one.

Till we meet again,

Loads of Love and Hugs,

Sneha

P.S.: Please ignore the typos if any... My Lappy is too excited to mind the words 😆

Originally posted by: lovesick23

Totally worth the wait :D

Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer

Sigh!! This was dreamy. 😳

you write beautifully. I am kinda sad to let this story go. 😭 It touched something in me. Can u please post an epilogue of sorts. The names of the babies, and some DaddyKara and MommyRi too. 😳

The epilogue will be posted soon. It will be happy. Bohot tadap liye yeh dono, hai na?

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome...loved it totally...

it was beautiful story yar

you portrayed the emotions beautifully

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

God

U literally made me cry with this update

Both are fighting this battle

Which will lead them only to eachother

Loved when Omkara said he will let her go

She will go back to Bareilly

And meet omkara in her Shankar ji manadir

He wishes to rewind the time

Even if it costs him the kids

He didn't confess

But did more than that

Awesome job done

Hats off to u

Ifeel u have more content following this

Would love to read it

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Would love to read the continuation...it was superb as always..that cheezy line was like a dream sequence..

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Faye di, 😊
Brilliant update!! 👏 I loved Rikara's heart to heart convo. 😃 Finally they decided to give their marriage a chance!! 😃 Loved the chapter. ❤️ Can we get another chappy plzz?? 😳
Okk di I really have some question regarding the twins of Rikara. I mean unn logon k beech itni MU thi toh fir Ri pregnant kaise hui?? 😕 I mean MU hote hue bhi itne kareeb kaise aye dono?? U know na what I mean di?? ☺️ And I'm also lil confused with the mention of "7 months" in this 2nd part, which "7 months"?? Before Ri got pregnant (iska possibility nahi hai coz pregnancy mein hi toh 9 months lagta hai, but still asking) or after Ri got pregnant (9 months ki pregnancy n suppose Om asked her to leave her btw that period, 9 months mein 7 months to aata hi hai, but iss k liye kiddos ko less 1 month ki honi chahiye according to calculation😆) or after the birth of the kiddos (suppose right after kiddos birth Om asked Ri to leave n the kiddos r now 7 months), konsa?? 😕 How old r the twins now?? 😕 Okk enough of my rants from my gutter head, but plzz meri confusion clear kar dena di. 😆 😳
Okk n thanks for the pm di. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: rikara94

Hi faye

🤗

Thank you for this lovely part dear

It was very emotional han ...awesome..

Emotional hi ho gyi mai toh rikara ki convo se😭

Ek dum heart to heart wala connection hai dono ka😳

Finally she ready to give a chance to thier marriage

I love it when she said matalb ghum phir ke hume yahi ana hai😆

I loved each and every dialogue...perfect

Now cant wait for epilogue and mentioned 7 months ... thoda uske bare mein bhi bta dena😉

Oveall totally worth it faye

Plz update soon

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Faye. Hello. Man I love the way you play with emotions. A master at work. The whole pull n push going all through had me at the edge of my seat. There's so much love at stake that it's humbling n scary too. They are desperate to hang on to each other yet what must be done must be done at all costs. I could feel the intensity n passion emanating from these two as unsaid emotions found words. Omkara... what do I say about him. His anguish at losing his wife found transparency when he voiced that he was even ready to forego even the mother of his children. Yes that's pinching. But that was essential for Gauri to know that she does hold worth in his life. Brilliantly conveyed Faye. We are never gonna see this between RiKara on the show period but girl you can handle all the difficulties with this supreme ease n that's applaudable. N yea.. happy ending is just fine cause any other thing n it would have be destructive. Nope this works okay. Chalo waiting for the next part. Thank you for this .. :)