Jalkuda| A Jealous SS| Ft. Advay Singh Raizada Epilogue on pg 15 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Awesome update
O god it's so funny
Everyone is jealous
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Fantastic story
So hilarious
Loved to see jealous ShivOmRu

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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Obros burning with jealousy is a treat to watch 😆😆. Thank u for pm.
Hope everything is fine in ur personal life
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
This update turned out to be my personal favourite yaar.
It was hilarious.
Om's introduction of Gauri to ASR, advay bhai. Seriously?
Oberois are burning 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
awesome update dear
loved itt soo much...
thanks a lot for pm
very well written whole part...
waiting for next update ;
pls update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Nice update
Jealous obros...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Hahaha.
That was awesome.

Thanks for rhe pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
That was perfect!!!!! The Obro's died of jealousy!

😆 😆 😆

I seriously cannot wait to read what you have for us in the next chapter 😆

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

PS Thanks for the PM! 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59

Part 4


Recap:-

Obros Trio were dismissed from the conversation. All of them are burning in jealousy.

A treat to watch. I will remind my secretary to make my Mumbai trips more than usual. Playing with fire is my game, with Obros fire, the game is more interesting.
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Now O' Bahus are smitten by me. Oh Great! Advaay you're the best!(*Winks* Don't die ladies soon, I'll be visiting your house soon)
Now O'Bahus First Generation left.😆
Hmm...whom shall I start with?
Sexy N Bold Jhanvi Aunty or Oh My Mata Chanter Pinky Aunty.😆😆😆

I saw Khanna passing by.
I called him. Handing him some money, I asked him to bring something for me.

Umma Ummahhh Advaay you're the best!

I've just played with embers. Now let's play with the real fire err volcano.

As I was thinking, I saw Jhanvi Aunty pass by. She was wearing a sexy black dress.()

Hmm Jalkukda TSO!😆😆😆
Kya nishana lagaya re Advaay beta?

Just then Khanna came with a flower bouquet.

Taking the bouquet in my hands I went to Jhanvi.I saw TSO entering from the corner of my eye.

"Will the gorgeous and sexy lady in Oberoi Mansion will reply my gratitude?" I asked her in a gentleman tone with a smirk on my face.

Beta! Yeah TSO hai! Zara Son Zone se bahar nikal na padega.

Jhanvi aunty came and hug me.
I hugged her too tigtly.

Ah! What a smell! I can smell the most beautiful fragrance in the earth aka fuming of TSO.

"Advaay, pleasure to see you here!"

"Janu Darling, I missed you so much." Saying this she kissed my check.
Another Nandi Bell Oberoi Sr took birth.
"Adu, go and sit in the dinning table. I'll cook myself your fav Gajar Ka Halwa."Jhanvi guided him to the dinning table.

Jhanvi went to kitchen.
Pinky came in.

"Oh My Mata! What a surprises! Mera Advaay handsome is here." Saying this she went and kissed my cheek.

I've seen SSO Sr was noticing the exchange and was fuming in corner.

Ah! Poor Oberoi Males!

After sometime...
I was sitting on the dinning table and hearing some music, then I saw all the Oberoi female population occupying sits near me and all had made something special for me
Janu Darling's Gajar Ka Halwa, Pinky Aunty's kheer, Annika's Aloo Puri, Gauri's Palak Paneer and Soumya's paratha placed on the dining table.
Ahh HEAVEN!!!!!!
I can smell a strong burning smell from the table itself.
All the O'Bahus were feeding me with their hands.
Shivaay and Tej uncle were murdering their foods. Om was eating but more like making floor consume his food and SSO Sr and Rudy were doing keema of their plates with fork and knife.

I was feed by all the beautiful ladies.
Ummah! Just heaven!
Heaven!
Burnt smell of jealousy laced with delicious food was a treat to savour.
I won. Volcano cannot erupt now.

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How's it?
Only 1 part left.
I typed it with my phone.
Hope you all like it.😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Amazing update
Advay didn't even leave senior Oberois
And all ladies feeding him and jealousy of Oberoi males was hilarious
Update soon please

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