SS-Bhandan (Part 4 Updated 6/7) Pg5

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PART 1-




Shivaay pinched the bridge of his nose between his fingers, sighing in frustation at the intense migrane occuring in his head. It had been a horrendous week. The stocks of the oberoi business had taken a hit and the stupid investors of the company were taking recoils, shivaay'd had to spend hours in boardroom meetings over the last week, convincing them and repairing the stocks that finall stabilized. On top of all that, matters werent any better back at oberoi mansion. Bade papa had started subjecting the family to svetlana excessive presence. This had taken the toll on Badi maa, who had taken up the bottle again- seeing his parents at the same situation again Om had lost the little mental peace shivaay had worked for years to achieve. A few days ago shivaay had received word from his security that om had met a shoddy person and a fear had established in the back of his mind of om restorting back to his old poisonus addictions. In the back of his mind, he worried day in and out for his Rudra. He was sill innocent, he worried of the mental state of that poor child. To top it all off, Tia had become almost unbearable, her presence seemed to further aggravate the already present disturbances in the family. Dadi's smile dissapeared every time tia touched him, rundra scowled at her voice and his mother beamed whilst badi maa frowned. Shivaay sighed again, reaching for his painkiller bottle, popping a couple in his mouth and sighed as he waited for the pain to dissapear. As he closed his eyes another face flooded betwee his eyes. Hers. Annika.



Ever since that fateful day when he'd married her, it was as though something had died inside her. Gone was the happy, smiling, cheerful, tadibaaz annika he'd fallen so hard over. Now the woman he saw everyday was a silent, douless reflection of her. The hazel lifeless orbs only exhibited that lively joy when sahil's letters would arrive once every week from his boarding school. Shivaay made sure to personally collect those letters and hand them to her, only to witness the momentary glow on her face as he handed her the envelopes she desired. The two of them lived in the same room, were legally married, yet barely a few words were spoken amongst them. Annika followed all the duties of a wife, she spent all her days trying to keep the frayed oberoi family together, but shivaay somewhere deep down yearned to have his paanika back. Shivaay sighed again, reflecting on the broken aspects of his life, his shoulders felt weighed down with the burdens of a family. He loved them all, but he was tired, tired of always being the one responsible, the one who had to deal with everything. Just then shivaay phone buzzed and he picked it up.



"What! Ok, inspector I'm on way! He exclaimed, allready in the car, speeding to the police station.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is really interesting!Please continue soon, and pm me if possible :)
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This is so good! Absolutely loved it! <3
Please do continue soon. And do PM me if possible.
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Welcome to the forum dear 😊

Loved the update.
Waiting for next one.
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Welcome to the forum dear
It got me nostalgic..thinking about the old episodes
This is intresting and loved it.
Continue soon.

~Maha~
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Hey there everyone! Thanks for the awesome support! I was so touched by the encouragement that i wrote the next part now! Please please please comment on your thoughts/suggestions! Hope yall love it!

Part 2-

"Oh my mata! Annika yeh kya rooke sooke khana kila rahi ho tum meri tia puttar ko? Kitni duble ho gayi hain woh, jaa kar thoda makhan le aao Pinky ordered as Annika stared baffled. She couldn't belive this woman, Pinky aunty never even gave two damns whether she'd eaten, and yet all this affection for a woman who never cared about her. Annika shrugged off the thoughts and got the paranthas requested and started washing up the dishes when suddenly a pair of arms hugged her warmly. Annika smiled affectionately ruffling rudi's hair.

"Bhabbbi! Aap guess nahi karoge ki aaj kya hua! He said excitedly.

"Kya hua Rudra? She asked, wiping her hands and untucking her sari pallu from around her waist.

"Bhabi main exams mein top kiya! Thank you aap ne kitne acche se padaya! He beamed, feeding her a sweet from his box. She beamed at his news, as he hugged her as she hugged him back.

"Congratulations rudra! Main bohot kush hoon! Yeh sun ke sab kitne kush honge! She smiled. Rudra marvelled at his bhabhi, his family had given her so many troubles yet she only thought the best for them.

"Bhabhi, kya aap jaante hain ki shivaay bahiya kahan hain? Mujhe unhe batana hain! He smiled.

"Woh abhi office se vaapis nahi aaye hain, shyad der raat ko aajayenge, tum kal bata dena She smiled, glancing at the late hour and wondering where he was right now.



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Shivay singh oberoi strode into the station, barging into the commissioners office.
"Mr Oberoi! Aap?" He asked standing to greet him, as Shivaay ignored his outstretched arm and got straight to business.
"Mera bhai kahaan hai?" He asked.
"Mr Omkara toh oberoi mansion chale gaye sir" the timid man answered immediately. Shivaay nodded and turned to leave when the commissioner stopped him.
"Unki bag humme lena pada" he murmered, not meeting shivays hard grey eyes.
"Kyun, aise kya tha isme" Shivaay asked shocked.
"Woh... aap khud dekh lijiye" the inspector said uncomfortably placing a bag on the table.
Shivaay strode to the table and flipped open the bag only to have his heart stop immediately and the dozen packets of marijuana packed into the briefcase.

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Annika had served dinner to the household and had cleaned up the kitchen and glanced up anxiously at the clock worried at where he was. Rudra had told her that his phone wasn't connecting increasing her concerns significantly. It was now well over midnight and yet he hadnt shown up.
Just then the main door opened and Annika's mouth feel open at the sight of him. Shivaay Singh Oberoi was entirely and completely inebriated.
His shirt was crumpled, his usually sleek hair all messed up and his tie hanging loosely around his neck. In his hand he clutched a black label scotch bottle, half empty as he stumbled through the door fully drunk. Throwing all heed to the wind,Annika rushed to support him. As she clutched on to him and helped him regain his balance she heard him murmuring something entirely unintelligible, his voice slurred.
Annika struggled to support his weight as she led him upstairs to their room, his arm around her shoulders. Upon reaching the room, she lowered him to the bed. As she shut the door of the room, lest anyone see him in this state, he reached for the bottle taking another swig of the alcohol that burned his throat.
"Bas!"she commanded taking the bottle from his hands as he reached for it.
"A...annika de do...mujhe peena hai" he slurred. Seeing the great powerful Shivaay reduced to this weak shell of a man brought tears to her eyes. She tried to not feel anything for him, but she could barely help herself- this was not the man she gad learnt to hate, this was a broken man, a man who had accepted defeat.
"Aapko hua kya hain Shivaay?" She asked, as ge gazed at her in earnest at her words. Suddenly she felt him throw his arms around her waist and bury his face into her stomach and clutch her tight as he broke down entirely. Her hands flew to his head, as she held him to herself, trying to comfort him, to shield him. Annika had never thought that the day would come where she would have to comfort him, he had always seemed so powerful, so independent, yet today he was a lost man. He clutched her hard, his arms coiled against her slender waist, as she gently stroked his head.
"Shhh...shivaay" she breathed, caressing his silky locks.
"Main haar gaya annika, main haar gaya" he broke down, as she felt his tears against her thin sari.
"Shivaay, hua kya" she asked her heart tearing at the sight of him this weak.
"Main ek bhai hone par fail ho gaya" he confessed.
"Aap kya keh rahe? Aap toh itne khayal rakhte hain omru ka, toh phir aap fail kaise?" She consoled him, pulling his face up to look at her. His azure eyes were broken as he spoke directly from his heart.
"Om ne phir drugs leia, main fail ho gaya" he breathed. Annikas eyes widened, before she reached out and took his hand in hers.
"Aap sab thik kardenge, sab thek hoga" she said, faith resounding in each of her syllables. Shivaay's breaths calmed at her unwavering faith and he nodded at her words. The alcohol took its toll on him and he slumped against the bed, unconscious. Annika covered him with a blanket and stood up, wiping her tears determined. She strode out of the room fury in her veins, heading straight to Omkara Singh Oberoi's room.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Woww
Superb
Sooo much better than current track
Luvd it
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Absolutely loved it!Thanks for the fast update, and the pm as well.
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woow...it's awesome...superb...amazing...
both parts (1n2) of this story are so perfectly written...
really like this concept...its so interesting...
eagerly waiting for next update...continue soon
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Interesting...bringing back old memories...pms pls...

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