Os||Comprehend||[Shivaay realized his mistake]2.6

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 8 years ago

Eee... Here also Anika forgave easily !

Beautifully written and the emotions were so raw, still right now not in a mood to forgive Shivay ! Hope you write something where Shivay works hard to win Anika back !

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Archie

@_SilverLining_

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank you! Thank you so much for this! This is how I wanted it to turn out too, infact I was going to write something too but then I'm just too annoyed at the current track, and decided it was not worth the time. But you did a great job, I loved it!

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travelholic

@travelholic

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Posted: 8 years ago

this is beautiful, oh can u please replace harneet as the writer - kuch toh acha mile dekhne ko 😉

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EnasZ

@EnasZ

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Posted: 8 years ago

Anya😆😆😆

i am stalking ur stories every where😈

at least Om is here... i miss him less now in the calming silence😆

can u talk to harneet please?? tell her this is how great shows are made & beautiful stories are created

did i tell u that i love Rikara's equation with Shivaay?? i loved it ... & loved every bit of ur Os

since the scene hasn't actually happened in the show ... i wonder how will Shivika meeting go tomorrow

if {by any chance} shivaay tries to apologize to anika in the show {then remember me ...i would be saying yup harneet ... u're reaching Anya's level of amazing heart warming plots❤️} else just don't think of me i would be cursing so much 😆😆😆

Anya have u thought about writing an ss,ts or even an ff about Obros???

u really really do portray their relaion beautifully ... u can even add the pain u seem to enjoy in this one too😈

anyhow ... loved it ... thanx for this

lots of love🤗

enas

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EnasZ

@EnasZ

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NYCForever
this is beautiful, oh can u please replace harneet as the writer - kuch toh acha mile dekhne ko 😉

i just suggested the same thing😆

damn harrneet is winning a lot of enemies with this plot

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

this was lovely n awesome.

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travelholic

@travelholic

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: EnasZ

i just suggested the same thing😆

damn harrneet is winning a lot of enemies with this plot

its not even because the plot is bad, its because she is too full of herself - mocks fans who give her constructive critcism and writes nonsense to prove she is in charge

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

awesome update yar...I really loved it

the way om and gauri made him understand its superb

but in the show i really felt like punching him...

He believed ranveer over Annika...he is not going to change...why every time Annika needs to prove her point...why she is being accused...his trust is like this

it can be broken easily

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KashiTessa

@KashiTessa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#10

Awesome update.
Wished they had shown something like this in the show.
Shivaay has given away his brain, don't know how he got business man of the year.
Every time when his family comes he will believe some other over Anika.
Their relationship is based on trust but each time he breaks her.
I really wanted to punch him on his face.
At least Shivaay in your shot is not like the one in show. He has some sense.
Loved the update Anya

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