Shivika FF: Resilience, Chapter 9 Part B, 19/08 UPDATE (pg 69)

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lamz325

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Posted: 8 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..
Amazing update dear!!!
It was amazing!!!
Superb!!!
Loved it dear!!!
The way you portrayed Shivaay and his thoughts... mind blowing!!!

thank you so much, dear!!! I always look forward to your comments because you're always soo sweet! :)

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lamz325

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Posted: 8 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: preity_d
I remember you said Shivay knows Anika is adopted ! I hope he doesn't react too bad knowing her past! The gradual progress is WOW!!! ❤️

yes!! and I left hints in this past chapter about how Shivaay knows about Anika's adoption! He did "research" and we'll see how Anika reacts when she finds out about this! Thank you!!

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#523

There are so few stories where Shivvay's perspective is ever offered...and even more rare is an exploration of his thoughts...so I love this chapter. He is so sharp and so observant, that he picked up on Anikka's complacency in expecting Shivvay to be a NO SHOW for their date...GOD I wish we could get a glimpse of this SHARP, ASTUTE man in the show! I believe this chapter will setup and shape the coming chapters...so I wait...not so patiently...but will wait because I love reading this story!! Looking forward to reading more!!

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Tadibaaaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#524

Amazing update
Wating for next part

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lamz325

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Posted: 8 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: Seema84
Interesting update dear ... well written for shivaay's POV... he z now so confused by annika's behaviour but he z the one who wanted a wife only for the name shake moreover the lady has to be there in his life but without any expectation from her so called husband... the best parts annika z completely behaving like that because she knew it's a marriage with business deal... now when they both started to know each other so they both r confused by each other behaviour... I hope shivaay has no issues with annika z the adopted daughter of mr n Mrs Chaudhry... otherwise annika will shatter... btw nice update after a long time dear... try to update soon the next part n thanks for the pm...

thank you!! yes that's exactly the point! they're kind of at a crossroads in their relationship and they're both confused by each other! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

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Abhilasha Sharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#526

This sort of Shivaay's POV is really refreshing. IMO Normally we do the analysis of a person in our mind in private in 2 cases - 1. If the person is very important to us 2. If the person is very intriguing.
Now this is interesting

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lamz325

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Posted: 8 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: Tremors
Hiii...
Oh my god how much i missed your updates!!
Brilliant update as usual!!! Loved shivaay's insight on the problem...
Please continue soon!!

Much love
Aakriti

thank you!! Again, I'm so sorry about the long delay! I'm hoping to have at least one chapter out per week for the next 3-4 weeks. I really want to progress the story. I'm glad that you liked the update!

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rarefan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#528

It was thoughtful. Being a perfectionist, it is important for him to avoid mistakes and rectify them in case he has made one. It is really difficult to rectify a mistake if you don't know the extent of it and the impact that it has made. Beautiful.

Write the next one soon.