Shivika FF-- TAKING BACK MY LOVE ( Dark FF.) Part 2=page 3 (15/06).

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________PROLOGUE_________
Shivaay Singh Oberoi's POV


Annika Malhota...for U it's just a name. Actually a girl's name. But for me this is the name of the biggest strom of my life. A girl who came roamed and... DESTROYED my entire being. BROKE my heart into PIECES. SHATTERED my HEART, my trust, my heart felt emotions, my believes to an extent that can't go back... Never...
Annika...In sort Anni...
A beautiful girl whom I thought to be an Angel. My angel... Only for MINE.
Whose smile used to brighten up every single thing, every corner of my heart. Whose presence used to make me feel safe, protected, wanted, loved, cared.
The Diva of our University. A sweet, soft hearted, helpful, bubbly, chirpy girl. Whose eyes were full of innocence, full of love care & tenderness. Who could make anyone fall in love with her & every one used too. All used to get attracted to her like a moth to the flame. Which can call for a destruction of course.
And there's no prize to guess that I was one of them. Actually I was their gang leader. I ended up destructing my life. Cause... Cause I loved her. Like crazy. I was madly in love of her.
I was in love with her innocence, her child like behaviour, her glittering Smokey eyes, her soft musical voice, her helpful nature to others.
A love which was higher than Everest, deeper than any ocean. I never touched her even accept holding her palm as she didn't like to. I never forced her too. My needs wasn't more important than her wish. Never. But...
All was FAKE. Her innocence, her love, her sweetness, her, care, her helpfulness all. ALL WERE FAKE. A trap. A facade. Using which she used to have fun. My love, my emotion, my feelings, my care, my protective ness all were mere time pass for her. A game. A b****y GAME which shattered my life, my heart, my emotion & ME. She just walked away breaking my heart into pieces to an extension that I had no escape & looked back. She went throwing some stupid excuses which were as fake as her.
She cheated on me & then blamed me for her betrayal. Made me feel low. So low that was ashamed to look at my own self. Made me feel like a loser. A b****y loser. Everyone made fun of me. None was ready to consider myself as their close one. Everyone treated me as a stranger.
And all cause of her. All cause of Annika. My first love. & probably the last one as well. After all how can I love someone after all this.
After all the girl whom I loved the most was my 1st priority for everything just wiped me away like dust in her hand. Who was like the Sun of my Life said I mean nothing to her. A girl for whom I didn't think twice to oppose my parents said I'm selfish. A person who thinks about none but himself. Care for none but himself. How????? HOW COULD SHE SAY THAT?????? TO ME???? Who didn't think twice before going against our V.C. to protect her & got suspended for an entire semester said that me was selfish. How pathetic...
But she did. She just walked on my heart squeezing it under her shoes. Blaming me for every single mistake. Called me a stalker. Even he fade my friends with so many lies about me that they even denied to know me anymore. And I was left alone in this vast cruel world.
And now... She is back. To make my life miserable a leaving hell again.
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But this time she can't... I won't let her do that. And that's a promise from the Shivaay Singh Oberoi, the CEO of Oberoi Industry.
Yeah. This industry is mine. The whole Oberoi Empire is created by me.
I founded it. By myself. Pouring my heart&Soul into it. After a lot of struggle I'm here today. A self made Billionaire. One of the most successful businessman of the world. The same man whom she left saying I can't be like her. I can't fit in her society of etiquette, and pleasure. She can't walk into her clubs, parties, social programs with me. I'm like a waiter where she is the princess. Hence, no match. I begged. Begged to her a lot. To give me 2nd chance to prove myself to her. To make myself her worthy. But she didn't cared & left.
But see. Today I'm the Shivaay Singh Oberoi. The undisputed king of the business world. Who can move the whole damn world on his fingertips. Who possess the every power a human can. Every single thing like money status power glamour looks is with me today. I'm equally popular for my appearance today to the female world.
She can't defeat me now. I'm not that stupid emotional Shiv anymore with whom she played with. I'm a totally new person who resides in the same body but who is poles apart from the older one. I Am The Shivaay Singh Oberoi now who can play equally with someone who dare to do so.
And so...
The Game Begins...
Ms. Annika Malhotra...
This time U'll face me. The Shivaay Singh Oberoi. Not the Shiv U played with. I'm back now. And I. Don't. Play. Fair.
Waiting for U Annika my Darling ex Girlfriend...
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So here's go the prologue of Taking back my love. Characteristics of the both Shivaay & Annika would be different. So don't wish to she a good cute Annika here. Cause I love dark friction with grey characters but in every dark story the male are grey & women's becomes the victim. So I thought to bring a difference. Here Annika is the manipulative one. Hope u would like it. And yeah U need to decide whether U want longer or regular update??? If regular I would update once in a two days but if long then I don't know. According to my scheduled. So just tell me that. & about MU to LOVE. That's on the way. Just editing is left. I'll post it tomorrow. So bye. Take care. Drop likes & comments. Constructive criticisms are welcome until u r bashing me.
So good bye.
Cyao.
Signing off...
Pri...



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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is very interesting.

I just read the last bold lines and this indeed sounds dark
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Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

This is very interesting.

I just read the last bold lines and this indeed sounds dark

OMG!!!!!! Harshada commented on my FF... Dil ki arman pura ho gaya... LOL.. ssly... I'm so glad now... That U commented & liked it... & indeed it's dark. But mostly without adult scene. Hope U'll continue reading.
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i love dark ff and trust me this one is awesome eagerly waiting for nxt update.
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It's really nice and interesting start.
Looking forward to the story.
Thank you for the Pm.

Lots of love,
Sakshi
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Interesting start dear. It's really nice.
Looking forward for updates.
Update soon...
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Originally posted by: Rishiak47

i love dark ff and trust me this one is awesome eagerly waiting for nxt update.

Thank you dear... Keep supporting...
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Originally posted by: SassyQueen

It's really nice and interesting start.

Looking forward to the story.
Thank you for the Pm.

Lots of love,
Sakshi

Thanx a lot Sakshi... For Ur love & support..
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Amazing Start.. and we want regular update
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Hey Pri
This is so interesting
A completely Dark story
And for a change we have our Heroine as a manipulative one here
Awesome
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊

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