Shivika SS : 'The Raven And The Rambler.' Epilogue.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#401

Hii RitzzAmazing update dear..

Loved it.

It was an amazing journey and I never thought that end game will be like this..

Don't know what to say...

Come soon with a new story..

Waiting.

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EuphoricDamsel

@EuphoricDamsel

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: pritzz
Why do u do this 😭
I am in love with the Rambler and I can never get over the raven 😭❤️

BEAUTIFUL !

Because I wanted to.

Nour one can get over Raven.

She's so pure.😳

Thank you so much I dedicated this one to you. 😃

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#403

you know wat i can't take sad endings...because if I read something like that it will be imprinted in my mind like that...I hate that feeling so I always try to stay away from that type of stories...but i really loved this story and after reading the end the only thing that came out of my mind was it's beautiful especially the ending when she called the baby shivaay...I really loved this story...its mindblowing...

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1012277

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#404

RES!!

Will unres soon. 😳

I get to read all the parts together. 😈😎

UNRES!

I'm so so so so so sorry for not having unres'd this earlier. I seriously couldn't find time to read this whole fiction in one go. Cause I wanted to read it in one go. So I can type my comment after every chapter I read. I'm weird that way. So when you read this it'll be hell weird. And it'll even look dumb. 😆😳

Prelude! 😭 Shivaay dies? But why? Really interesting prologue. <3 Also, beautiful banner. Absolutely love it. ⭐️❤️

OMG OMG! I'm so happy. It's not Shivaay. 😃 Wohoo. So will it be a happy ending? 😳

Anika is suffering so much. I feel so bad for her. There are so many questions in my head already. 😕

Ahh. Omar. 😡 He's such a ... 🤢

Ooh ooh ooh. Shivaay? Anika loves Shivaay?? They have a past????

I love how you're going so slow and steady with all the suspense and stuff. But its killing me too. 😆😃

Also, I absolutely LOVE RIVERDALE. ⭐️❤️ I'm go glad to listened to my friend and watched it. And Betty and Jughead. 😳

Oooh. Shivaay. 💔

NKK always comes in the way. 😭

I'm still hoping there's a happy ending? *fingers crossed*

Oh. Fate. But dude that Omar. I'm gonna kill him. 😡😡

No no no no no! 😭😭

No sad ending please. 😭

Oh Ritzy. I'm crying reading the note before chapter 11 itself. 😭

Oh my god. I can't read anymore. The letter. I'm literally in tears right now.

Wait. Is Shivaay gonna die or something? Cancer and all? Ugh.

It's not necessary to be together to love someone, 💔

There are actually many things I want to quote. But then there are too many. Some sentences sound so normal but really deep.

I still can't get over the shock. But such a beautiful end. The message conveyed through this fiction is so deep. ❤️

Oh Ritzy. You're a great writer. And I'm so glad that I received your PM that day and I read this fiction. It honestly is my favorite right now. Even tho I love happy endings, I totally understand the importance of sad endings. Cause most of the time it has a realistic touch to it. This fiction is just perfect and I absolutely love it. It's just beautiful. ❤️

Great job and you've written this fiction beautifully. I could really connect with this story.

PS - I'm sorry about the whole chapters this. I hope you understand what I'm saying. I would proof read my comment but I'm still really emotional about this. :')

Lots of love,

Rhea

Edited by -Rhea- - 8 years ago

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Pritha Roy

@pritzz

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#405

And what have u done? U stole my heart with Something I did not know I would love ❤️

I have found a good writer cum friend to look forward to beautiful world of her own kinda Shivika Happy ending or No.. I bet myself I am gonna love Whatever u write ..

I am Overjoyed and Content... Because I ended this FF with a smile on my face. 🤗

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#406

Res

Unres

From the very first update u had created a mystery around them. We were getting more and more curious with each passing line...!! This story had a steady and ascending arc ! Beautiful!

The ending is what touched my heart ! She found someone who won't let her go back to the darkness again ! Her baby ! The rambler's most precious gift to the raven "Strength, courage" ! Loved how Anika confessed she was equally at fault, shows life is gray ! Cheers to a new beginning!

About ur note completely agree that with or without men every woman deserves to be happy !!!

❤️

Edited by preity_d - 8 years ago

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#407

What a beautiful end.

What I love was anika acceptance when shivaye went away. People come and go away but life never stop moving forward and it is better to move on with life instead dwelling or cursing the past.

I love these lines

And just like that a Raven had learned to live.

A Rambler had given her love and freedom to fly and so she did grab the opportunity to find someone who'll fly with her.

And Now The Raven Will Run Across The Earth , For A Little More Than An Eternity .

Looking forward to read your next story

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KashiTessa

@KashiTessa

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#408

Hey Ritzz,
You rocked at the end.

It was an amazing journey.
And your ending lines loved them.

Waiting for next storyyy

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pri12

@pri12

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#409

It was an amazing journey...I loved it...Last part was so emotional 😭 I dont have words to explain the feeling after reading this update

But I m happy for Anika..She learnt to live for herself and her love and her little baby Shivay...

P.S. Thank you for writing this one and making me part of beautiful and emotional journey

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mahalaxmik

@mahalaxmik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#410

A very fitting end to the story!!!! Annika gets back Shivaay in a baby form. That was the most unexpected and most welcome surprise.

I am in two minds about Annika blaming herself partially for how Omar treated her. It sounds like the victim syndrome. Nevertheless, it is also sounds typical Annika/ always ready to forgive everyone and move on in life.

The 25 lakhs cheque and the opening of an NGO is a nice touch of closure to the end of the story.

A very fitting end to a rather unique love story. Happy, yet sad!!

Very good writing!!! Hope you choose to continue to write.

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