Ye Dooriyan :A shivika SS ,part 10 updated on 26/7/18 (37)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Hi dear waiting for your further updates and finished reading all the chapters again and loved them again so commenting again. Please update soon...

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jindalsuvidha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

An interesting please do update more parts soon

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jindalsuvidha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Interesting story please update soon

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shamina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: water9786
Hi dear waiting for your further updates and finished reading all the chapters again and loved them again so commenting again. Please update soon...

🤗Thanks a lot my friend for your words.It means me a lot.

Sorry for late update and reply.

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Himanshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

its awsm... cont. soon
thanks 4 PM

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Nohsin10

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Wow fantastic update

I can't see Shivika in pain.

I hope everything will be fine soon

Thanks for pm.

Update soon

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shamina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: water9786

Sorry dear for not commenting earlier asI have to go somewhere and was in hurry andI do not want towrite anything in hurry for this lovely and amazing piece of writing. sorry😳
Totally loved this to the core dear👏. Pinky ...do not want to say anything about her asI do not want to spoil my and may be yours mood too .
Shivaay and Anika in their separate rooms and their thoughts were so emotional and heart touching... do not how they will go through all this as both are not together but yes their souls and hearts are together. Om Ru and Shakti helpless. Dadi was not there at that moment when Pinky's truth came out in front of Om Ru and Shakti. so sad. Shivaay need to know everything what his so called mother has done to him. she slapped him...how dare she? totally hate her even hate is small word to describe my feelings. butI know Anika and Shivaay will be together in last and will become more stronger. so Pinky can do anything but what she do not know is she is going to make everyone disgusted of her and hate her. Sure relationships will change some will become more strong and some will break. Cannot wait to read more please update next part no all parts as soon as possible.
Totally loved this story dear. Hats off to you for such an amazing piece and thank you for giving this piece for us to read and love.
With Loads Of Love
-Chhaya

Chhaya my friend...
Really sorry for my late reply. I wanted to portray pinky as a mother who was always selfish and possessive. Shivaay missed his childhood because of his mother's dream. She made him a person who follows his brain. She was sure no one can change him. But Anika changed him. He loves her unconditionally. She has the power to influence him. For pinky it is unacceptable. She is losing the control.she didn't know the depth of their love.
Thanks a lot for your words.