shivikaa : few shots.chapter 1 updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This story is based on my imagination solely. It's a continuation
From current track with a bit of changes.am adding a new but
Very important character .his name is jai singhania.assume him as
Rithvik dhanjani.will describe his character along the chapters.
Chapter 1.
Anika woke up startled.but she could not find shivaay near her.i t was a rare thing these days.shivaay was always there pampering her after the gunshot.she was getting used to it.none of them put their feelings in words.but they felt,sensed.
Anika was starting to get comfortable with his proximity.infact.she longed for it.she loved him.with her heart n soul.and the romantic advances made by shivaay left her with hopes that may be... Just may b.. they were closer to it.. a normal healthy relationship as that of a husband and wife.
Since shivaay was not at home.she decided to rest by pool side n her thoughts drifted back to the days she knew shivaay Singh oberoi was stern believer of naam,khoon,khaandaan. When she over heard him talking to Om n rudra about how unfit she was for him.her mind n heart were on a battle.as per her usual routine.she called HIM.. to blabber share about her inner turmoil regarding shivaay.if anyone would have seen her then.would have failed to recognise her as the shaant n mature annika.. she looked like a child ,too excited to put each n every detail of her day in front of our silent listener.. one could not miss the joy n happiness that gleamed in her eyes.. at that moment.. she forgot her worries.. her nkk... Her turmoil her insecurities... She just looked like Annika.. more appropriately Anu.. as she was called by her family.. yes.she had one.bonds made by love.. cherished with time...
There was a lot that she never shared with shivaay.even though they had come closer.it just never come out of annika to tell him about herself... She never felt any curiosity in shivaay. Other than her favourite aloo poor.shivaay... The oberoi family knew absolutely nothing about her,her past..
When she was finished with her story telling... She heaved a sigh of relief.. n ended with... " chal,so ja,kal Teri meeting hai Na imp... Good luck meri jaan.. "





That is it for chapter 1.i hope to wind this up with in a few shots.. this is technically my first try seriously.i hope all the senior writers here will help me improve ,point out my mistakes.. ur comments and replies mean a lot for newcomers like me.thankyou.and sory if it was not worth your time.i promise I will try and improve.n no proof reading done.sorry.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Totally loved it dear.
Awesome👏
Waiting for next chapter please update soon.
Anika has some one else then Sahil with whom she can share anything.
Waiting to know about anika and jai's bond and her relation with shivaay...everything.
Please please update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thankyou so much.will try to update regularly.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing
Looks like Anika and Jai are very close
His entry might be interesting for Shivay
Update next part soon

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