Rikara FF: Heal my Soul (Updated conclusion part in Pg 60) - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
intersting
hope gauri clears chulbul story with om fast
so that she can be guilt free and om understanding her
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Awesome update. Hope Gauri reveal Chulbul's truth herself to Om.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
awesome Loved it
Rudra is the smartest...he gets every thing very fast...
he understands that om had deep connection with gauri...like shivaay had with Annika
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Hi
New to the forum
Read all chapters in one go...loved it
Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Really nice update I like how Omkara said the truth... about how he got toknow and why did he help her and were seeing rudra's entry was awsome... update soon,,,,,
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Hello dear, 😊
Read all the 10 parts together. 😳 All the chapters were so beautifully written. 👏 U r such a good writer. 😃 I could imagine each n every scenes in front of my eyes. Thanku for sending the pm. 😃 Plzz update soon n pm me that chapter too. 😳
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Here you go:

<Part 11>

2 days had gone by since Gauri came to O. Mansion. Tej came from the business trip in the night and was shocked to know about Omkaara's marriage. He called them to his room. He was so furious and Gauri knees were shivering. Omkaara held her hand and gave a stern look towards him.

T: Yeh kya pagal pan hai OM, koi anjaan ladki se shaadi karke aise behave kar rahe ho, jaise ki janmon ki relationship hai uske saath.

Omkaara looked aside. He could feel Gauri's hand trembling inside his. He held her so tightly.

T: Tumhe kya lagta hai, tum koi bhi ladki se shaadi karke aaoge aur mein maan loonga.. Waise iss ladki kaa aukaat kya hai. Jhanvi se pata chala ki iski koi background hi nahi hai. Tumhe ehsaas bhi hai, tej singh oberoi ki bete ki shaadi kaise honi chahiye. Maine pehle Chaddhas ki rishte lekar aayi, usse mana kar chuke ho, aur abhi kisi gaon ki gori ladki ko bhagakaar lekar aaye ho. I really doubt tumhaari parvarish oberoi khandan mein hui ho. Eisi harkat, to ab middle class log bhi nahi karte. He glared at Jhanvi.

Omkaara got angry. He cannot question his ideals, that too not about his marriage. He doesn't even have the right to talk about the institution of marriage.

O: Really, jab tak maine jaana, aapki parvarish dadu ne ache se kiye the. Aur mom bhi ache se khandaan se hai. To kya aap apni marriage bahut successful bana diya? Aap jo bhi harkatein kar rahe the, kya daadu ne yehi parvarish de thi aapko? Aur main koi chota bacha nahi hoon, ki mere life ki decisions aap le lein. Mujhe jo sahi lage, main kar raha hoon, aage bhi karoonga. Isliye aap Gauri ko accept nahi karna hai, to teek hai. Mujhe koi farak nahi padta

T: Bachpan se, tum aisi hi bewakoofi karte aye ho. Business mein nahi padkar, mitti ki saath khelna suru kar diya tumne. Abhi ek sadak pe padi hui ladki se shaadi kar, tumne to hadh hi paar kar dhi.

Gauri was shocked to hear such words from Tej. Jhanvi looked horrified. Om lost his temper.

O: Mr. Oberoi, kabardaar meri biwi ko ek aur shabd kahe, he shouted in uncontrolled anger. Rudra came running in. He was trying to control OM. Tej was in no mood to budge in.

T: Biwi. Kya joke hain. Jis shaadi ki koi naam pehchaan nahi hain, poori thara se bhi nahi hui hain, wo shaadi nahi hoti. Chalo maan hi lete, shaadi hui. Kya tum iss shaadi ko poore dil se maan gaye ho. Nahi..

Kya tum dono ek kamre mein rehthe ho, wo bhi nahi. Kya tum jante bhi ho, iss ladki kya hai, kaise hai. Iski koi khandaan bhi hain.. wo bhi nahin.. Please iss tamaasha ko, shaadi ki naam mat do. Dimaag karab hogaya hai tumhaara"

Omkaara was fuming in anger. Tej didn't stop. He turned towards Gauri.

"Tumhaara naam kya hain.. Jo bhi ho. Kya umeed rakh kar, iss ghar aa gayi thi tum. Iss ne tumhaari maang jo bhar diya, to tumhari pati hua? Agar iski jagah, ek gareeb insaan aisa kiya hota, tab bhi aisa aathi kya? Tumhe jo kuch bhi chahiye, maang lo. Kitna chahiye, Bas lekar chali jao. Yeh aadarsh patni ki tamaasha mat karo yahan pe."

"Mr. Oberoi.. Bas kijiye.." Omkaara shouted at the top of his voice.

Gauri was in to tears. Tej hurt her self-respect. She could take a knife for Omkaara. But couldn't tolerate the impression that she was in his life for money.

Before Omkaara could speak, Gauri interrupted.

"Chali jaayenge. Hum jo kuch bhi kahenge, aap usse sach manenge nahi. Hum kisi ki zindagi kharaab karna nahi chahte hain. Khaas kar ke Omkaara ji ki zindagi. Aur aap jo keh rahe the na.. Jitna bhi maang lo. Duniya mein aisi cheesein hoti hain jisse khareedne ki aukat kisi mein bhi nahi hota.. Khushi, Shraddha, Pyaar, Maa ki ashirvaad, aastha, Shaanthi aise kahi cheesein hain. Agar meri chali jaane se, Omkaara ki aane wale kal roshni hogi, to teek hain. Chale jayenge hum. Badle mein kuch nahi chahiye humhe, hum gareeb zaroor hain. Par aap khareedne ki cheej nahi hain.." Gauri turned and went off.

Omkaara was looking at her shockingly. He was trying to figure out the zone in his marriage. But after his conversation with his father, he was determined to give it a sincere try. He was sure that he cannot bear Gauri leaving the house. He relieved himself from Rudra's clutches and went off in intense anger.

Rudra went behind him.

Gauri was packing her bags in hurry. She was unconsolable. She expected certain level of hatred but when she actually experienced it, she couldn't tolerate. She can be happy loving him one side in a remote corner of this world than living with him and screwing up his life. Let Omkaara live life as he wishes. She was not going to be a burden on him for saving his life.

Omkaara entered Gauri's room in a hurry. Rudra stopped by door. By this time, shivaay also got to know Tej-Om ordeal from Jhanvi and rushed behind Om. They both stopped by the door.

Om saw Gauri packing her bags. He tried to stop her from doing that.

"Gauri, yeh tum kya kar rahi ho. Tumhe kahin jaane ki zaroorat nahi. Listen to me, I can handle this. Ok" Omkaara felt bad since she was crying unconsolably

"Nahi Omkaaraji, Mere chali jaana hi teek hain. Aapki zindagi kharaab nahi karna chahte hain hum. Hum nahi samja payenge kisi ko, ki hume kuch nahi chahiye aapse. Hum aapse patni ki adhikaar bhi nahi mangenge. Iss shaadi ko manne ke liye, humhaari aapke saath rehna bhi zaroori nahi samajthe hain. Hum door rehkar bhi, aap ki khushi mein, khush reh sakthe hain. Koi mane ya na mane, humhaari bhagwaan ye rishta jod diya hai jisse hum poore Shraddha se nibhayenge, door se hi sahi." Gauri turned her back towards omkaara and started packing again.

Omkaara again tried to turn her, but she went on packing her bag. All that happened was too overwhelming for him to talk anything. He wanted to stop Gauri at any cost.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
rula diya tumne..
tej is a jerk..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Tez being Tez didn't accept and told her to leave really Gauri is right something is not bought with money... update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
tej is a jerk...the man who doesn't know the meaning of marriage is giving advice to om...I really loved gauri's reply...gauri is a girl who believe in devotion
sometimes people feels it as weird but girls like gauri are there but rarely found...one in 100000 million...
our om is like that so the girl who gets him also should be like that

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