Rikara FF: Heal my Soul (Updated conclusion part in Pg 60) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
I liked he smalloment you described the way I'm was falling in love and explained glad they are.movin gnda in good direction


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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
super
gauri scared of family reaction
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Superb
what will be family 's reaction and jhanvi reaction
plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Superb. Please let gauri herself clear mu of she only being chulbul before anything. Whatever reaction om might give I don't want another mu between them specially now when gauri knows how much om hates lies n how close he has come to chulbul.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
awesome Loved it
Poor gauri is worried about the family reaction
hope that jhanvi accept her
gauri should reveal that she is Chulbul...otherwise he will be devastated when he comes to know that
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Posted: 8 years ago
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<Part 6> :

Car entered O. Mansion and Gauri's heart was racing against time. She was petrified about what happens from now. Little did she know Buamaa had almost convinced Jhanvi about the reality and had given her about the choice of the girl she wants in OM's life. Jhanvi was in splits. She couldn't accept Gauri's lies but she was convinced that all she did was for the good of the family. Other side is Swetlana, who is greedy about the money and oberoi surname. She was determined, no matter what happens, she wouldn't allow Omkaara through hell another time. Her life was already shattered by this women. She wouldn't let her affect her son's also. He needs a new lease of life.

Omkaara entered the O.Mansion along with Gauri. He never knew Gauri and Buamaa had idea of their marriage before. There were only few people in O.Mansion. Pinky & Shakthi went on a religious trip to Haridwar. Tej was out on a foreign trip. Only the brothers were there with daadi, Jhanvi and Buamaa.

Shivaay and Rudra came to the living room to see OM and were shocked to see Omkaara coming along with a girl.

Jhanvi and Buamaa who were there by then was shocked to see Gauri. They believed she had confessed everything to Om. Jhanvi made an eye gesture asking her has she said it all. Gauri replied a no gesture. Buamaa and Jhanvi exchanged glances.

S: Om yeh ladki..??

O: Shivaay, it's a long story. Let's sit and discuss. Rudra & shivaay still dint think there could be a connection between them.

O: I know everyone has lot of questions ki yeh kaun hai, kaisi mere saath ayi hai. Let me clear out everything. Yeh Gauri Sharma hai from Bareilly. Humaari shaadi hui hai on complicated circumstances, ek goonde se isko bachaane ke liye mujhe shaadi karna pada.

S: Whaat? Yeh sab kab hua..?

O: 1 month before.

R: Par O, aap humse kuch nahi bataaya..? Kyun? Aap dono pehle se hi jaante ho?

O: Nahi rudra, Bareilly me Kaali taakur isko zabardasthi kidnap kiya aur shaadi karne ke liye arrangements kar raha tha. Jab main Bareilly gaya thaa naa.. humaari land deal ki wajah se, tab mila tha isse. Who situations kuch aise the, Kaali ne gaaon walon ko instigate kiya and Gauri pe shak dala ki woh usse phasana chathi thi.. Wo log isse marne lage toh yeh mere paas ayi and usse bachane ke liye, maine isski maang pe sindoor bhara dhi aur phere bhi le liya..

S: Sirf bachaane ke liye, tumne shaadi kar diya Om. It is highly unlike you. Joh Omkaara jo hum jante hain, woh relationship mein choti cheeson ko bhi deere deere accept karta. Toh aise mein, shaadi is just a very big step", saying so he looked at Gauri.

Gauri was sitting with a guilty expression. She couldn't justify their marriage. Only Omkaara could do it that why he got the idea to marry her at point of time. She herself doesn't know why.

Omkaara turned towards Jhanvi. This was getting awkward for her. Neither can she express to Om that she knew all of this before. Neither could she react plainly.

J : To bolo, agar yeh shaadi hui aisi circumstances mein, to itne dino baad ab kyun lekar aya tume Gauri ko??

O: Wo, mom I am sorry ki maine yeh baat aapse chupaya. Par truth ye hai ki, jab yeh shaadi hui main nahi manta tha. Maine Gauri se bhi keh diya ki yeh shaadi sirf ek naatak thi usko bachaane ke liye. Gauri ne bhi kaha ki woh mujse zabardasthi kuch nahi chahiye thi. To main aisa chalne diya. Par kal shivaay bataraha tha ki Kaali is back. I am sure woh Gauri ko definitely harm karega. Issliye dobara usse bachakar maine yahan lekar ayi, Gauri ko.

S: O, clearly batao, Kya tumhare liye iss shaadi ko koi matlab hain ya nahin

Omkaara knew this question is the most difficult one to answer. He didn't want answer yes or no. Both answers hurt his ideals or heart. He looked at Gauri.

Rudra and Shivaay looked at Gauri as well, who was sitting like a statue just having her eyes filled with anticipation at Omkaara. Her expression was that of an entire world was hanging around the answer.

O: Pata nahi. I am not able to decide. Mujhe manna hai, jab do logon ke beech mein pyaar and understanding ho, usse shaadi karna chahiye. Humaari shaadi bahut alag circumstances mein hui hai. Par ek baat to hai, mein Gauri ko wapas khatre mein daal sakta hoon. Uski safety bhi mere liye important hain. Isliye yahaan lekar aaya. Omkaara spoke his dilemma clearly.

Shivaay understood Omkaara's dilemma. He is a very soft natured and emotional person. He will never want to hurt anyone's feeling unknowingly. He understood his stance.

Shivaay turned towards Gauri.

S: Gauri, aapka kya khayal hai iss shaadi ke baare mein?

Gauri looked at Jhanvi. She gave a reassuring nod. Gauri felt that may be her Jhanvi had understood what she was trying to explain earlier. She looked backed at Shivaay.

G: Wo, Bade bhaiyya.. hum.. she was stammering to gain strength. She looked at Om who was having this inquisitive expression about what she was about to say. Gauri got strength.

G: Humhare liya iss shaadi humari sankar ji ka ashirvaad hain. Omkaaraji ne iss shaadi karke humhari izzat aur jaan dono bacha liya. Hum soch bhi nahi sakthe the, agar ye nahin hain to kya hua hota. Par humne inse keh diya, wo shaadi to nahi mante hain to teek hain. Hum uski maan rakhenge. Wapas mein hume kuch nahi chahiye. Rishta bhi nahi. Humaare liye Omkaara ji ne itni badi ladayi ki. To badle uske balayi hi chahte hain. Agar usko lagta hain, ki yeh shaadi ek shaadi hi nahin, to teek hain hum chale jayenge uski zindagi se, Gauri finished off looking at Omkaara.

Rudra, Shivaay and Om exchanged glances.

<to be continued>

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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
awesome Loved it
wat will happen after this
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Here Gauri is so submissive and knows om very well but Om is right too he really needs time and also he has to know the full truth to accept sometime people past are too deep that they need time...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Hi buddies,
How y all.. Thank you all for your sweet comments/feedback as always:)

I have tried to keep the story intact as much possible with the track thats going on currently in DBO.
Looking for ward for your comments for this part..
Here you go

Part 7 : More than what you see

Shivaay was clear that Gauri wanted to stay in this marriage. Trusting someone doesn't naturally come to him. Being a businessman that he is, he was also thinking whether Gauri is really pure in her intentions or she is acting like this to impress Omkaara. He had witnessed Omkaara falling for Ishaana in the same trap. He wanted to let things play out before he decided upon Gauri.

S: Waise raat Kaafi hogayi, I think hum sabko rest karna chahiye. Hum sab iss ke baare mein kal bhi discuss kar sakthe hain. Jo Om ko teek lage, wohi main support karta hoon.

R: Main bhi. O ki khushi hi sabse important hain.

Both said this looking at everyone. Gauri felt awkward. Where would she stay? Till anything is decided, staying in Omkaara's room would make things awkward before everyone. Buamaa understood it instantly.

B: Jhanvi, mere kamre ki left pe ek kamre hain na.. Make arrangements for Gauri to stay there. Rest we'l discuss in the morning. Aaja puthar..

Gauri gave a thankful expression to Buamaa. She went along with her.

Omkaara was seeing her go. Shivaay and Rudra held him.

S: "Toh Om, we have to talk"

O: "Haan, we have to". In Omkaara's room...

R: "Toh O batao, aap bhabhi matlab didi. Nahi.. Gauri ji se kaise shaadi ki, bina jaane?" Rudra came out of his dilemma to call or not Gauri as Bhabhi, asked straight question.

O: Pata nahi Rudra, When she came running shouting for life, uske peeche 4 aadmi the, talwar lekar. I saw them, woh uspe talwar chalaya. I couldn't control myself from saving her life. Aur woh village ki logon uspe accusation dal rahe the, ki she is characterless, woh kaali ko phasake shaadi Karne ki plan kar rahi hai.. and etc. etc. Wo log use pattar bhi mar rahe the.. Mujhe ruk na raha.. I was standing in between her and them. Mujhe na uss waqt aik power chahiye thi. Aise power which will give me control over her life more than anyone else. Taaki mein use bacha sakoon. Toh us waqt I could only think of one thing. I didn't even think and went and usko maang mein sindoor bhar diya. Gauri se bhi nahi poocha aisa karne se pehle.

Shivaay thought Om got impulsive and emotional in the moment and took the decision. Om he knew would take years to commit to a life long relationship. He doubted this impulsive decision of his, would not be better for his future. He should not have regrets about having to save a life, later. He may have saved her life, but he doesn't want already messed up Om's life to mess up more. Life is not a deal for OM. He can't ignore the imperfections of life and move on. He needs everything perfect. Shivaay doubted whether a girl like Gauri can really match up to him.

Rudra was in deep silence too. He was trying to analyze Gauri's point of view and how much Om felt for her. He was sure there were some more unspoken feelings from side, than what they are seeing. Om would definitely not take a big step of bring her home, unless his heart said so. He felt that Om does have a soft corner for her in his heart.

Omkaara was in deep silence too. He told his brothers what was evident. He didn't tell his brothers the way he thought and treated her, after marriage. He misconceived her to be characterless at that point. He din't even want to tarnish her image a bit by saying that he doubted her once. He simply couldn't do that. Ever since he left her on the road in Bareilly, images of tormented Gauri flashed before his eyes several times in day and dreams. He felt bad about doing such a terrible thing, wondered what her condition would be, given that the man who married her dumped her on the road. He remembered the pain in her face, when she said in train, that before judging someone so harshly one must understand their situation. May be she was a victim, he always thought. Omkaara was having a disturbed life because of Svetlana already, but nothing disturbed his thoughts more than tormented Gauri's face. He was going through hell this one month after returning from Bareilly. He told a jist of it to Chulbul once, he never dared to even tell him more.

<To be continued>

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Posted: 8 years ago
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WOW yayini am so glad u r back with a new story.🤗
am sure u will rock it.👏
I am a big fan & regular reader of ur previous work SOULMATES
LOVE U FOR UR FREQUENT UPDATES❤️
Keep writing Dear.👍🏼

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