Rikara SS - Guroor - Chapter 4 pg 6 UPDATED 28/04/17

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Aradhika23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
I am confused yar...whom does om actually want...
ishaana or gauri...from his talk i think he loves ishaana...but the comparison of sati and parvathi was really good

Yeah I mean, its kinda like bajirao, he doesn't really know. Ofc the difference is that in that time period, bajirao had the choice of having two wives, but here omkara doesn't... So the entire point is to see who ends up choosing, the girl who he just met, is kinda married to, and is incredibly attracted to against his own will, Gauri,(Mastani) or the girl who he's known for a while, who loves him a lot, and who he was supposed to get married to, even tho she lied to him before, and because of that he could never get as close to her as he should've. Like Ishaana's the one that family chose, after finding out about the whole ordeal, and he always thought of her a best friend who he will fall in love with someday, after marriage. And gauri's more the love at first sight type of thing, where even though he wanted to hate her, where even tho he knew he was supposed to get married to someone else in a day's time, he couldn't help but help her.

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Christy

@....Anabella...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Interesting... Loved it... But whom does Om want?? I mean he feels he has responsibility towards Ishana and Gauri both... But what he can't understand is is jamne mein polygamy nahi chalti... He is so confused ... Uske confusion ke chakkar mein both girls are getting hurt... This story is so.complicated ..Thanks for the PM... And nice vm

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Aradhika23

@Aradhika23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: smrithy14
Loved it dear
so om and ishaana was going to be married
something happened om and gauri married
and ishaana run away ffrom OM when she come to know about om gauri marriage
but I was thinking om and ishaana was best friends only
om really in a mess what he really want ?????
Plz update next part very very soon dear

Honestly om is just super duper confused about whats the right thing to do. He doesn't want ishaana to run away, just because he's guilty, but the truth is that he married gauri, and thats not gonna change. Ishaana notices this confusion and thats why she told him to never talk about her again, even tho her heart would want for everything to go back to normal and for herself to marry him. So she's being sati, and sacrificing herself so that om can have a good life with gauri, and he doesn't end up being like hi father in some ways. basically, the love triangle will simply itself out in the next twoish chapters

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Aradhika23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...
Interesting... Loved it... But whom does Om want?? I mean he feels he has responsibility towards Ishana and Gauri both... But what he can't understand is is jamne mein polygamy nahi chalti... He is so confused ... Uske confusion ke chakkar mein both girls are getting hurt... This story is so.complicated ..Thanks for the PM... And nice vm

Lol yeah, he's doing things very impulsively rather than thinking them out. He noticed that Ishaana left, obviously upset, so in his guilt he went to go follow her. He didnt think about what he was gonna say, he didnt know any answers to what she was obviously gonna question him. Like he wanted to set things right with her cause he obviously hurt her and our omki shomki can't deal with hurting people,but there was no solution to the problem. Like ishaana said, theres no place for her there anymore, he can't change what he did, and so when she noticed how confused he was between the two, she knew she had to do something to fix it. The only thing she could do was leave his life entirely, and so even tho she didnt want to, she had to tell him to forget her...

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maivelli

@maivelli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

read the 3 chapters in one go

liked it alot

but all the chapters were about Ishana n om

, I am a Rikara sipper I wish too read next chapter based on them 😳

hope u wil listen to my wish plz plz plz😛
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Aradhika23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: pt311288
read the 3 chapters in one go

liked it alot

but all the chapters were about Ishana n om

, I am a Rikara sipper I wish too read next chapter based on them 😳

hope u wil listen to my wish plz plz plz😛
I

Aww yaaar thanks so much!! I love when people comment cause this is my first story and I don't really know how I'm supposed to go along with it. Like I'd like to say I'm good at English but short stories idk?
Yeah man I'm a rikara shipper too but so far in this story ishaanas side was a much more intense and I couldn't help but wrote all the angsty stuff first. I'll be getting to Gauri soon, because she's his wife, now she's pretty much there forever, but I needed to finish off with Ishana and show her sati like sacrifice first you know? Anyways thanks so much for commenting, it really helps!!

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Aradhika23

@Aradhika23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: loveangel94
Love it

Thanks so much for commenting, and liking the story obviously, but more so because it inspires me to write more chapters when I know people are liking it. So thank you very much

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maivelli

@maivelli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Aradhika23

Aww yaaar thanks so much!! I love when people comment cause this is my first story and I don't really know how I'm supposed to go along with it. Like I'd like to say I'm good at English but short stories idk?
Yeah man I'm a rikara shipper too but so far in this story ishaanas side was a much more intense and I couldn't help but wrote all the angsty stuff first. I'll be getting to Gauri soon, because she's his wife, now she's pretty much there forever, but I needed to finish off with Ishana and show her sati like sacrifice first you know? Anyways thanks so much for commenting, it really helps!!

you need not to worry about comments u will be getting plenty,
coz ur way of narrating the story is good more to that u write beautifully this forum is blessed to have a writer like you. will be waiting for new chapter anytime soon😃

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Pamalo

@Pamalo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

I feel very bad for Ishana but i guess Om should choose Gauri bcz for him Ishana is his best friend and when he has not developed romantic feelings till the wedding, how can one expect him to start loving her like a life partner now?

Even though Gauri has just come in his life he feels a pull towards her which with time can develop into love after all opposites attract and Om and Gauri are as different as it can be.

Just my thoughts and waiting eagerly for the next update.

Anya.

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Aradhika23

@Aradhika23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Pamalo
I feel very bad for Ishana but i guess Om should choose Gauri bcz for him Ishana is his best friend and when he has not developed romantic feelings till the wedding, how can one expect him to start loving her like a life partner now?
Even though Gauri has just come in his life he feels a pull towards her which with time can develop into love after all opposites attract and Om and Gauri are as different as it can be.

Just my thoughts and waiting eagerly for the next update.

Anya.

Yeah that's pretty much the way the story's gonna go from now on lol. It is a rikara ss right so it is definitely gonna have some rikara in it, and thanks so much for sharing your thoughts they really help me decide what to do next with the storyline.

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