RIKARA OS- SOULMATES (Updated 18 on Pg 11) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here you go

<Scene 8>: Surprise Visitor

Gauri was lying in bed deeply lost in thoughts. She still didn't change the clothes and was still in the saree. She was recollecting all what happened in the morning. She touched the maang and felt the sindoor still there. She was wondering if his act was intentional or unintentional. She couldn't buy that he was considering that non-marriage as marriage. Whatever it is, her secret wish to her sankar ji has been completed.

Omkaara was restless and he wanted to meet gauri once again. "She will think am a mad person to meet her at this time", he thought. He came near the room to found the window slightly open. He controlled his temptation to sneak through the windows. That's not manners. Door was also open. He knocked the door and opened fully. There lay gauri in the same white saree which had his red err..whatever prints.. His heart gave a rejoiced tone thinking she didn't change only to keep his nishani. Gauri quickly got up and stood by the bed..

"Omkaaraji, aap is wakt...?"

His eyes were still going through the finger prints near her bossom and hips.. She was waiting for him to complete his glancing. Finally he landed on her eyes.

"Oh, mujhe kuch chahiye.. nahi kuch baat poochna tha.."

"Pehle yeh batao.. tumhe kyun nahi change nahi kiye??"

"Aap bhi batayiye, aapne apni kapde badal dhi.. par gale saaf nahi kiya??"

Om was caught in his own trap. He avoided the question with a awkward glance.

"Mujhe pata hai.. mere ko koi hak nahi banta.. par pir bhi.. tumhe kuch help chahiye.. tumhari mom ki treatment ke liye.. yar fir kisi cheez keliye zaroorat hai tumhe..?" He asked with a hidden message.

Thinking of Sankar ji, "Jee nahi.. Mere liye help karne ke liye koi hai.. woh pal pal mein humari khayal rakthe hai"

OM was lost in thoughts.. he was confused about the mixed signals she was sending.. one side she dint change the saree.. other side she says there is someone..

"Koun hai woh"

"hai koi jisme humhe pura viswaas hai..Uski wajah se hum zinda hai aaj"

OM was almost convinced that she indeed has someone in heart.. She has moved on.. That unconditional/unrequited love has all gone... How could she tell words which are as heavy as life and suddenly leave all of those in a short span. This is bad. OM suddenly his soul has become heavy on himself.. His life has always thrown on harsh realities on him. He was deprived of the affection from their parents wholeheartedly... of honest love from woman he loved wholeheartedly and stayed as one woman man.. and now his last hope is gone too... It's not that she is the only girl in the world came the defensive reply from his heart.. But she is special came an offensive reply.. Alas, he is not the one who is keen on going after women...

Gauri was totally unaware of the conversations both the faction of his heart was having.

"Omkaara ji, aap ki ek cheez rahi gayi thi.. humhare paas.. ek minute wait keejiye.."

"Kya"

She took out the rudraksh mala that he used to wear always.

"Aap humhare paas ey mala diye the..Sultana madam aur aapki shaadi ki ek din pehle.. Phir aap bhool gaye. Jab hum chal rahe the.. yeh humaare paas aagaya.."

"Yeh mala mujhe kaafi pasand thi.. mein isse doond raha thaa.. teek hai meri ek request hai.. kya tum karaogi..??"

"Kya hai"

"apni haat se pehnao.."

She was wondering why his behavior changed suddenly. When she came to O.Mansion, she was expecting that same hatred betrayal filled looks from him. She never thought he would give her love vibes.. She was controlling her heart from getting over excited and reacted blank to his request..

"Yeh kya baat hui.." She turned back..

"Agar yeh mala dena hai. .toh mujhe pehnao warna nahi chahiye.."

She saw the smiling moorthi of her sankar ji.. "Yeh kya kar rahein aap?? Har waqt mujhe iski or keech keechne wapas phek dete aap..Ab is baar kya karne ke liye yeh sab kar rahe aap"

Omkaara moved closer to her only an inch apart.. She could feel the warmth of his body from this distance. She closed her eyes and tried to control her feeling.. "Jaldi pehna de Gauri.. pehan kar.. isse yahan se nikalwade.. yeh teek nahi hai.." she was talking in her heart..

She turned back only to stare at his chest. She didn't have courage to look into his eyes.. she was clutching the mala so tight that the rudraksh might actually tear apart.. Without lifting her eyes. She raised her hand.. OM was in a middle of a rush of feelings.. He wanted to tighten that face towards his chest.. she was so petite and tiny in front of his well built structure. He inclined towards her shoulders to be easy for her to put the mala around his neck.. she was not able to take this.. he is breathing her up literally and her hands were shivering... She gathered courage somehow and draped the mala around his neck.. He was breathing inside her soft hair and would not lift his head up. She could feel the pricky stubble brushing against the chin.. "No" She closed the eyes and pushed him aside.. OM was feeling very disappointed as if his beautiful dream has been stopped in between..

<To be Cont>

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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
awesome
will they have simple conversation?
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Preview: Alok is a work colleague of Gauri in her "Green Shades" office. He is infact her direct boss and is a chief planning engineer there. He was fond of Gauri and had once expressed himself to her.. He hails from the same Bareilly as her.. Gauri had ignored alok's interest till then.

<Scene 9>: Shades of Green

Gauri had a surprise visitor. Alok came with some changed plan from management on the layout design. Alok was discussing these changes with her in the lobby. He sat close to her even when she tried her best to stay away. After about an hour, their work got finished and alok asked her to join him for the lunch since he would have leave past noon. Gauri couldn't refuse and they were dining at the area meant for workers. Alok felt Gauri was looking beautiful in this plain lavender suit of hers. He was trying to involve in a interested convo with her, using this opportunity.

"Gauri, kya socha hai tumne mere bare mein?"

Gauri was literally in dharmasankat. Opposite was Omkaara walking into the dining area and this person is trying to get close to her.

"Kuch nahi"

"Kya kuch nahi.. Agar tumhe aur time chahiye main wait karne ke liye tayyar hoon.. Par kya mujme sach mein interested ho??"

OM eyes caught the closeness with which the stranger was sitting towards her. He was never the one to overhear the conversations of other people. But his curiosity is killing him. Was he the one she was hinting yesterday??

Alok now held gauri's hand..

Gauri gave a petrified look at both of them and took her hand away..

"Alok sir, please abhi sahi time nahi ase baatein karne ke liye"

Omkaara called sternly "Gauriii"

Alok saw Omkaara and thought maybe she is hesitating in front of a stranger. Gauri now had to introduce the two men standing before her. They shook hands and alok left the place after finishing the lunch. Omkaara could not bear it anymore

"Kya yeh tumhara boyfriend hai??"

Gauri tried to leave the place ignoring the question. He held her hands.

"Batao Gauri.. kya yeh tumhara boyfriend hai.. ??". He was desperate to find the answer.

"Aapko kya lagta hai?"

"Maine poocha tumhe kya lagta hai woh??"

"Pehle apne aap se poochiye aapko kyon iss savaal ki jawab jaan na zaroori hai. Jawab mil gayi tho bata deejiye phir mein bataathi hoon"

"Har roz kisi na kisi bahaane doondhke tume milta hoon.. hazaar baar maafi mang chukka hoon.. Help karne ke liye pooch chukka hoon.. kya tum dekh nahi sakthi in sab ko.. ya fir dekhna nahi chahthi..??"

"Aap kyu mere peeche pade rahte hai.. Chod deejiye humhe.."

"Kya sach main tum chahti ho ki main tumhe chod doon??".

She didn't want to answer this one in negative

"Aapki bahut ameer ho.. bahut bada naam hai aapdi khandaan ka.. Isme muj jaise ladki ka koi jagah nahi.. Bahut ladkiyan honge aap jaise bade log se barabar.. Usme se ek chunke shaadi keejiye.."

"Ghumake jawab mat do.. pehle keh rahi thi.. pyaar nibhane ke liye hum akeli hi kaafi hai.. main mano ya na mano.. tum is shaadi ko manthi hai. Kya woh sab joot hai..?". He finally asked what he had to...

<To be Cont>

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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Woah...the story is going exactly the way I want to see Rikara in DBO. I am loving this. 👏👏
Can u update soon and pls do not stop with their reconciliation. Thoda romance tho banta hainna😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Oh ... it's wonderful...it's just what I want to see in DBO...and i know will never happen...but one can always wish...u should be made d scriptwriter... waitingfor gauri's answer...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Nice update please continue
I want to know what Gauri will answer to Om' s question.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Wow omkara is feeling jealous seeing alok & gauri together.
Finally he asked the oh so important question.
waiting for her reply.
By the way u r sucha awesome writer .
Only if u were the writer of DBO what a beauty the show would have been.
Love u for updating the story regularly.
& providing my Rikara shipper heart some relief after all the torture of Svetlana in the show .
Thank u for Writing this awesome piece of art.
A Big fan of ur story
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Amazing read all in one go.
Plz pm me next time.
N up soon
Luv
Aru
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Here you go...

<Scene 10>: Outburst

"Omkaaraji, humhare haath chodiye. Yeh humari kaam karne ki jagah hai.. main nahi chahthi mere naukri is tamaasha ki wajah chali jaai.. Meri maa ki ilaaj chal rahi hai iss naukri ki wajah se.."

OM was going to the frustrations end. He has to find it out today. Period.

"Teek hai.. aao meri sath... He almost dragged her clutching her arms.. She was feeling the pain since he was clutching with a force that could crush her arms... He dragged her in to his room and locked the door..

"Abhi.. jawab do mujhe.. Kya abhi bhi woh saare cheesein manti ho, jo tum batayi thi??"

"Mein manoon ya na manoon.. aapko kya farak padtha hain.. aap ko shaadi ek naatak thi.. aur main ek giri hui ladki hoon.. ?" Pain ducked up in the heart erupted like a volcano...

"Main us galti ke liye baar baar maafi mang raha hoon.. aur maine poocha tum kya sochthi ho...?"

Both were standing opposite each other with endless anger which raised out of the helpless situation they are in. Little they knew they both wanted the same thing but backed off thinking the other doesn't want it.

"humhare liye shaadi ek khel nahi hain baar baar khelne ke liye.. Aap sahi kehre the.. Shaadi ke liye phere se zyaada ek doosre ki soch maine rakthi hai.. Aap kaali Thakur se humhe bachakar humhari izzat bachayi thi.. humhari jaan bachane ke liye shaadi kiya.. humhare liye wohi khaas baat thi yeh shaadi ki maan rakhne ke liye.. aur phir.. meri maa ne vachchan le liya.. humse.. ki hum iss shaadi ko poore dil se sweekar karne ke liye.. Par aapne humhe chodiye humhari maa mein bhi shak dala.. ki hum dono woh kaali takur ko phasanae ke liye aisa ghatiya harkat kar rahe.. Aap ki galti nahi.. jab aap sultana madam se shaadi karne ke liye tayyar ho.. aap sab ladkiyon ko aise hi nazar mein dekhenge.."

"Alok ji pichle hafte humhari maa se milne ke liye gai, aspathal.. Unhone maa se humhari riste ki baare mein baat khi.. Maa bol rahi thi.. Tum jo bhi faisla legi.. main teri saath hoon.. Soch rahi hoon.. haan keh dena chahiyae".. She lost her control and temper in anger and was speaking something else which was not intended to be..

Omkaara lost it.. He was not able to digest the very fact that she could be someone else's..

"Toh bol kyoon nahi rahi ho.. Kitna hypocrite hoon tum.. keh rahi thi.. eh shaadi sankar ji ki ashirvaad hai.. akeli hi pyaar karke kushi reh jaogi.. pati hoon mein teri.. abhi kisi ache ladke mil gayi tho ashirvaad, viswas.. oh sab doob gayi paani mein.."

"Aap ki mooh me yeh sab acha nahi lagta hain, Omkaara ji.. Jo khud sultana madam ji se shaadi karne wale the.. mere sath naatak hi sahi.. shaadi karne ki baad.. Agar main nahi hoti.. aapki shaadi bhi hua hota.. aur najane.. o abhi pregnant bhi hoti.. aise mein humhe kya karna chahiye.. aap ko us chachi ke saath dekhar kush hona chahiye ?? Kya aap yeh sab bolte tab bhi??"

"Tumhe kya laga mujhe koi aur ladki nahi mili.. isliye tumse beeg mang raha hoon?" Ego crept up.

"Aapko main kya de sakthi hoon.. Aap itne oonche hain.. mere paas kya hai dene ke liye..?" Gauri was into almost tears and controlled herself..

Omkaara could not ask her love even though he badly wanted to ask. She is talking about rishta with someother person who could give her a simple and peaceful life that she wanted. How can he come in between that..

There was a 2 mins silence in the room..

<To be continued>

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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
awesome
These two are crazy...
both want to be with each other but wnt say it

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