(Updated) Chichora Piya - Part 2 /page 9 & Annika's Diary Jan 10th - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Asya...I had mushy mushy feeling while reading your update...I could not help but smile as Shivaay explores his new feelings and analyzes Annika's response to his flirting...he is out of his comfort zone yet very comfortable...In fact am still smiling --- aftereffects of very lovely story
Shivaay's "guess being ME, it is impossible to resist the fact that I have such a strong effect on someone" ...kya attitude and self confidence ...

Yet to see scandalized version of Annika on screen...but was easy to picturise after reading your story

"Turning up my nose at the patent 90 degree angle, ... as if I had given the best news of the day about a very dicey business merger. " --a smug Shivaay...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😳Asya I absolutely love both Shiva and Anika s thought process and,the way,u have written, their feelings and emotions. MUAH .Do continue, dear,as ur,writing really perks, up the episodes and,specifically my mood 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kasam Shivay Baby Ki... This was khatarnakly fantastic...
Shivay's thought process during these flirty moments is amazingly explained by you... 👏...
Cherry on the cake was Anika's diary... Her confusions.. Her innocence and naiveness...
Simply loved it beyond words..
Continue soon... Would love to know Shivay's POV during other scenes too 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear..this was really entertaining! Reading the naughty thoughts of Cheapde Shivaay or I say annika's Chichora Pati was amazing..! Never thought that these were the things running in his mind but you have beautifully penned it down and I'm loving this ❤️

Shivaay was a cheapda we know that but was at that level of cheapda I didn't knew 😆 But I must say I'm loving this shivaay.

And annika's dairy entry was cherry on top of the cake.. That MISS OCTOPUSSY just craked me up!🤣

Do continue soon..
Love yaa,
Anya 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Asaya as always fantastic piece of work!👏
Pls do continue writing!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I was, apparently, this Dreamy Romantic' guy, according to little Saumya, that put even our Home Grown Romeo - Rudra Singh Oberoi to shame. I could almost see the massive hit Rudy must have taken, to the king size ego he had, just to hear her say this.

🤣🤣

But surprisingly even I had not met yet this wonderful, tender, romantic and amazing guy she was speaking about yet 🤣and this was all, in her opinion, a reaction to the 'fire cracker' I married.🤣


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This is one of myfav se bhi fav scenes..!

nThe way he holds her bangles, there us something about that scene, whenever I see it I go😳 brush brush

And the look in his eyes


This woman could kill a man and not even know that she had shot the arrow through his heart.

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I had no idea what was happening to me or when this all started. All I knew was that I liked this proximity and her response to it.


It was a treat to read..!⭐️
Hilarious parallels u have drawn😆

Hungry for the next😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you for the PM Asya!

Loved our chichora SSO. You've created his thoughts so well to match with the scenes. I actually had flashbacks of every expression on his face from that scene while reading this 😆

And Anika's diary is too cute. I always thought Anika would be annoyed, yet secretly pleased and you've brought forth that secret pleasure very well with her thoughts about Tia. Haha.

Hope you continue this thread. Call it the chichora series 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You made me fall over once again for the Shivaay version 2.0.
Gosh!! The effect while reading his thoughts...snd me blushing!!☺️
Beautifully written👏.
He enjoying maybe the greatest Victory in the History of Shivaay Singh Oberoi was amazing.. like he was in the 12th cloud realizing that he effected her soo damn much!
And Anika's cheaper kahinke was also good.

I hope u put ur head into the scene where Shivaay asks Anika about romance and romantic poses... please...pls.. write on that... I am just getting excited thinking about u writing on that scene... I am grinning like an Idiot!!!!😃
Do write on it...its a request cum order...Kidding!!😉
This was as usual amazing...
Continue sooon.

Love Sharmi.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You write so so soo well dear loveddd it!!!" These Shivika scenes were GOLD ❤️ thnks for recreating these with ur writing! Missing Shivika now 😔 ...

Update it soon!!! Loving this story 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
So beautiful.. ❤️ loved Anika's "Kasam Shivaay baby ki" 🤣
Shivaay was simply amazing..very well captured.. loves all the details Shivaay noticed everything about his Anika..I really liked the way you described how Shivaay tested his newly discovered power over Anika 🤗
Keep writing more... ❤️

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