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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Oh my god this was sooo beautiful ❤️

5 year old Priyanka wanting to discover Atlantis is probably one of the sweetest things I have ever read.

The whole OS is just too beautiful. I wish they showed something half as beautiful as this on the show instead of the garbage of anti hero falling in love with a rich damsel. It's over hyped, especially when GK seems to be on a mission to make each love story about Angry resenting guy falling in love with a gold hearted, helpless woman.

Anyway coming back, love love this OS! I can't wait for more on this thread xx

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emerald39

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: bworm
Wonderful OS.
Dark, angsty...hitso one right in the heart.
Brilliantly written.

Thank you! :)

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emerald39

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: dimpled.smile
How amazingly beautiful is this OS!!! Lovdd it!!!!

Thank you! ^_^

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: chottekikhushi
Anu, this was just bloody brilliant!!
This is the billionth time I have mentioned this but I usually dislike sad endings...I like my cotton candy wrapped tales or even angsty ones with picture perfect endings because who needs more things to cry about anyway?
But even though I am in the second berth of a train right now and weeping because I feel terrible for PriVeer, the tragic lovers having to part like this despite falling in love the way they did, I am in love with the way you have written this story! The realistic take on the couple, Prinku's guilt and Ranveer's resentment, even with the love between them, the way you showed how some wounds will never heal and the way you have incorporated that wonderful legend into your tale!!
Take a bow dear, because this was just fantastic!!

Anu! Thank you so much for this beautiful comment! And I am sorry this made you weep. I just wanted to write something believable about this couple, and I ended up with that OS. I could've avoided the tragic end, but who am I kidding, I somehow knew I was going to end up there😆 Again, thank you so much for reading and liking it, in spite of you not liking sad endings! 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

I was so engulfed in the story that I didn't realise when did it end. It was beautiful. Atlantis. I had obsession with Atlantis, Bermuda triangle and etc. So I was so happy to read some thing on it. Priyanka's Atlantis . Wah!! By the way happy to have you back dear. Missed you 😃

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emerald39

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: chashi
Superb

Thank you ^_^

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
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I hate sad endings but this is just perfect...
Ya sometimes love alone is not enough
The guilt was killing her from inside and somewhere in his mind he also held her as the culprit

Thank you! 😳 Also, @bold: Exactly!

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Posted: 8 years ago

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