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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

@Richa
The description u had given of Priyanka is beyond words. It is some what similar to what I wanted to watch but couldn't. So thanks for this OS. It meant so much. Just how, I wished to watch her with these monologues at some point. Rather than gasping and wiping. It brought so much on the surface 😃.
@Twerping
Such a cute pair are these two are na!! Whenever there is Rumya, there is cuteness. Twerps u also used other emotions. Beautiful is the OS. I'm happy to read these two stories on a Sunday. Thanks for such a meaningful and at last cute to the core OS 😃

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Twerps,

This was such a beautiful take on Rumya and I love the timeline that you chose to write it in...the old golden epis of IB..sigh...

I loved the dynamics between the two, where you explored what actually went on behind both of their masks, and how both of them connected,understood, genuinely cared and found solace in each other ...it wasn't love but some other emotion all together and their acceptance of each other and Ru's appreciation of her was simply beautiful!! Loved this story and I am finding something new to praise every time I re read this!!

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982548

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

My dear Richa,

I'm really sorry for getting back to you so late. I hope you will overlook and forgive my tardiness.

To say that I loved your OS would be an understatement of epic proportions but I'm afraid the English language has no other higher accolade to offer and to I must settle for the world love! The insight that you gave us into Prinku's character was beyond amazing. What a wonder it was to be finally able to feel and acknowledge all her shades. The whites, the blacks and yes, the grey's.

What I loved the most though was the fact that you made her human, selfishly so. For don't we all want to be loved with our sins and imperfections? Don't we all thirst for that one someone who will think that we are perfectly imperfect? It's a human need, isn't it? One that doesn't go away no matter how you may wish for it to do so.

And your Ranveer. Dear say, I liked him too. For he was right. Love without respect, without honor, without sacrifice is a meaningless, selfish emotion that just takes without giving anything back. It's a black hole that sucks away at everything.

But ultimately, what I loved the most about your OS was the fact that she made the decision to go to prison for herself. For her own salvation. Because had she done it just for her brother or even just for Ranveer, she would have turned bitter and resentful in the years to come. But the fact that she made this decision to save herself will keep her going. Human will reaches the heights of resilience only when your own survival is at stake. And so Prinku will be able to move on now.

However, curious, isn't it? That she freed herself by going to prison but imprisoned him forever by freeing herself? The ways of love are too weird to behold...

Thank you for writing this gem. It both, unraveled and mended me, all the same time.

Lots of Love,

A.C.

Edited by A.C. - 8 years ago

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982548

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Oh Twerps, you darling soul!

What did you just do to me?! That gem which I just read, it made me laugh, cry, happy, sad, angry and rejoice all at the same time! But first and foremost, the one thing that I want to say to you is thank you. Thank you for giving Soumya's backstory the closure that it so desperately needed. Thank you for making her conflict about something that is real and poignant. Thank you thank you thank you!

I swear to you I'm still kind of speechless right now. Some stories just have a way of breaking you heart and mending it at the same time. This is what yours did to me. Will a piece of my heart rejoiced at the delightful workings of our beloved Agent Rudy, another part of it broke for Sumo, Ankit and Shaurya. Some wounds never heal and there's surely hasn't. To loose someone so unexpectedly, so senselessly... it leaves a void, a hollow within you that can never be fulfilled. And their pain was crystal clear for me to feel as I read through.

And then for Rudra to come and do what he does best. Accept with open arms and try to provide relief. It's a wonder no body ever sees that man for the balm that he is. He's like the living embodiment of a First Aid Box - one that heals emotional wounds. And you brought that all out in the most poignant way possible. I'll confess, I think I cried more at the ending part. And oh, that lantern scene was perfect. I could see it happening in front of my eyes.

All in all, a beautiful rendition of one of my favorite couple and romance trope (best friends to lovers). Thank you for writing this! I was in desperate need of this!

Lots of Love,

A.C.

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twerping

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Oh lord, Ayesha! This was absolutely brilliant! I love the shades you brought to the relationship between this much neglected pair.

You know what I loved most about this? The fact that you've made Rudra so very self-aware. It really adds such poignancy to the way he is presented in the show. The fact that he is so very conscious of the impact of his actions on those around him, the fact that he can use their perception of him to make them behave in the way he wants them to, shows the depth to this character.

As for Soumya, I love the fact that she can be so honest before him. Btw what is going on with the guy in the hoodie? I smell a story brewing right there! I was trying to imagine what it must feel like for someone like her to be in the mansion, and I totally see why she would feel that way. Her jeaolousy is so very natural, so real.

This pair has such potential and you really explored that magnificently. I feel like there is a lot more that I will be able to.unpack when I reread it.

Thank you for this amazing take on RuMya!

Love,

Twerps.

P.S. and thanks for that super generous comment.

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Ayesha...loved loved the Rumya story.

So kuch depth in their characters.

I don't have words to express...what joy it was to see the natural progression of this relationship.

🤗 Thank you

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982548

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: twerping
Oh lord, Ayesha! This was absolutely brilliant! I love the shades you brought to the relationship between this much neglected pair.
You know what I loved most about this? The fact that you've made Rudra so very self-aware. It really adds such poignancy to the way he is presented in the show. The fact that he is so very conscious of the impact of his actions on those around him, the fact that he can use their perception of him to make them behave in the way he wants them to, shows the depth to this character.
As for Soumya, I love the fact that she can be so honest before him. Btw what is going on with the guy in the hoodie? I smell a story brewing right there! I was trying to imagine what it must feel like for someone like her to be in the mansion, and I totally see why she would feel that way. Her jeaolousy is so very natural, so real.
This pair has such potential and you really explored that magnificently. I feel like there is a lot more that I will be able to.unpack when I reread it.
Thank you for this amazing take on RuMya!
Love,
Twerps.
P.S. and thanks for that super generous comment.

My darling Twerps,

Thank you so much! I was actually really worried about writing this one. Mostly because I couldn't make myself to come up with a typical lovers jealousy OS. And RuMya's relationship has so many shades. Shades that remain unexplored.

The way these two behave with the people around them makes it impossible not to believe that the two of them more introspective than they let it seem. But alas, that prospect of their personality remains uncharted to this day, as does there friendship. But like I said, I was a little dubious about writing this one because I wasn't sure everybody will be able to resonate with this kind of jealousy. So I am glad you did because it makes me feel that I I accomplished what I had set out to achieve when I wrote this.

Thank you for reading.

Love,

A.C.

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982548

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: bworm
Ayesha...loved loved the Rumya story.
So kuch depth in their characters.
I don't have words to express...what joy it was to see the natural progression of this relationship.

🤗 Thank you

Thank you so much!

I am glad you liked it. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Love,

A.C.

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Awesome

The emotions were portrayed very beautifully

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dimaag

@dimaag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Ayesha this was amazing. You brought out the much needed confrontation RuMya should have long ago shown. Each couple has so much potential which is being wasted only due to mindless plots by CVs. I just loved the way both these two were being jealous of each other 😃

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