One Shot:Before And After-Shivaay, After The Fall (Completed-8th Feb) - Page 2

I meant it as a compliment. You're writing reaches the heart. Zyaada is good i suppose. I love your writing skills. Also please update your other stories. Look like I'm the only one still keep hope for "Night of the wedding"😭

P.S. No panic from Shivaay's side makes me think Shivaay is in on the plan😉

But now after reading this, i see the whole thing from a different view.

This was hearbreaking, but so so so necessary and true, I feel.

The actual implication of his action, and i truly feel he is not really part of the plan.

I'm actually reallly happy with the track, finally and hopefully we will be able to see Billu do something in their relationship for a change.

I loved it how u depicted the entire sequence

The familys reaction

Shivay s realisation guilt torment everything

How i wish the CVs had shown even 1% of the guilt uve depicted. They just sweeped it away as if it was inconsequential as if her life was inconsequential. Just 1 min of a stammered apology and thts tht. Lets move on to the fun part. I know a lot of ppl are looking fwd to tge return of the old Anika but smhw its leaving a bad taste in my mouth. Inspite of doing this to her.. Shivvay is shown as berating her, threatening her at knifes edge, blaming her for driving him crazy. Wheras he cannot even say the words husband and wife. Are u freaking kidding me? And the moment we catch a glimpse of the old Anika her wings are clipped. Her husband threatens her life unless she obeys his commands. Not to mention the pati parmeshwar dialogs. Ok wat century are we in again? And we r spsd to swoon over this bloody sadistic self centred MCP. What is wrong with the makers?

I wish they had depicted a miniscule amount of pain that Shivaay goes thru whn she falls that you have so brilliantly captured . Or even a hint of OmRus and Prinkus reaction . She cud hv died. But then she's replaceable coz he's got Tia standing on the side waiting to become Mrs SSO... arggghhh... isnt there a thing like conscience or are ppl with NKK exempt frm such triviality.

*Rant Ends*