Shivika ff: Made for each other (Cast:pg1 chapter: 18&19pg-21) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
The update was Awesome...👏👍🏼
Om did come to share Shivaay's problem...he is really a superb brother...😃😃
So, Shivaay was in love with someone, but there is some tragic end or some mystery...what is Shivaay's past story?? 😲😲 Pihu, now I want to know...give some hints...😉😛😃
As usual Shivaay...he is hell bent to keep believing that pyaar kamzori hai...koi nhi, Anika samjha degi, so Om ko tension lene ki zarurat nhi...😉😆😛
Rudra bhi apne bhaiyon ko acche se samajhta hai...😊
Om ne Rudy ko pareshaan nhi karne k liye baat chhupa li...👍🏼
I liked the PinKara bonding...😃😃
(Ru: ok...par main aapse naraaz hu

Shiv: really matlab ab mujhe teri girlfriends ki story nhi sunni padegi

Ru: hawww...bhaiya ab main aap se sach mein naraaz hu

O: isse pahle jhoot mein naraaz tha

Ru: shut up O...

Shivkara in Unison: shut up Rudra yeh hmara dialogue h)-------- I loved this portion...Obros together & that fun...😆😆
Om's dialogues crack me up...that "Tujhe manane k liye speech likhni padti" was really funny...😆😆
Rudy k drama karne ki wajah se Shiv maan gaya Anika k ghar jaane k liye...cheers to Rudra...😎👍🏼
So, finally Shivaay got to know that Anika said yes...& OmRu were so happy for their brother...😃😃
Shivaay was shocked...😛😆

Continue soon...😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: lifeiscrazy

Hey Pihu Thanks For Your Pms😃
And Sorry For The Late Reply
Just Read Ur Story
Its Just Mind Blowing😃
Bahut pending work diys tune i read all updates in one go
uff thag gayi😆


sorry... lagta hain kuch zada hi pending kaam de dia...thanx for reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
The update was Awesome...👏👍🏼
Om did come to share Shivaay's problem...he is really a superb brother...😃😃
So, Shivaay was in love with someone, but there is some tragic end or some mystery...what is Shivaay's past story?? 😲😲 Pihu, now I want to know...give some hints...😉😛😃
As usual Shivaay...he is hell bent to keep believing that pyaar kamzori hai...koi nhi, Anika samjha degi, so Om ko tension lene ki zarurat nhi...😉😆😛
Rudra bhi apne bhaiyon ko acche se samajhta hai...😊
Om ne Rudy ko pareshaan nhi karne k liye baat chhupa li...👍🏼
I liked the PinKara bonding...😃😃
(Ru: ok...par main aapse naraaz hu

Shiv: really matlab ab mujhe teri girlfriends ki story nhi sunni padegi

Ru: hawww...bhaiya ab main aap se sach mein naraaz hu

O: isse pahle jhoot mein naraaz tha

Ru: shut up O...

Shivkara in Unison: shut up Rudra yeh hmara dialogue h)-------- I loved this portion...Obros together & that fun...😆😆
Om's dialogues crack me up...that "Tujhe manane k liye speech likhni padti" was really funny...😆😆
Rudy k drama karne ki wajah se Shiv maan gaya Anika k ghar jaane k liye...cheers to Rudra...😎👍🏼
So, finally Shivaay got to know that Anika said yes...& OmRu were so happy for their brother...😃😃
Shivaay was shocked...😛😆

Continue soon...😊😊
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i will reveal the mystery soon..
have some patience lady...
thanx for reading



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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
I am so sorry guys for the late update...

Oberoi mansion
In evening...
Everyone get ready for dinner and comes in hall...
They all were shocked to see Shivaay already waiting for them and from his face they can say that he was waiting for them from long and then Shivaay turns and see the whole family staring at him like they have seen a ghost...
Shivaay: what???
Everyone: aap/ tum itni zaldi ready ho gye

Shivaay was wearing this:

Shivaay: so what? Main zaldi ready nahi ho sakta
Rudra: agar hum kisi business deal ke lie jaa rahe hote toh of course aap zaldi ready ho sakte ho par...
Shivaay: woh..main..zaldi ghar aaa gya toh socha ready ho jata hu
Om: oh really Shivaay
Shivaay: haaa...annn
Dadi: accha thik h ab chalo warna hume der ho jaegi...Pinky tune gifts rakha die hain car mein

Dadi was wearing this:


Singh' s mansion

Mrs.Singh was busy in giving orders to every servant about dinner and how they will serve food or drinks or anything and Mr. Singh comes from back and said " Cool down Renu everything will be perfect...don't take stress
Mrs. Singh: hmmm...
Mr. Singh: Ani ready ho gayi
Mrs. Singh: are haan abhi check krke aati hu

Anika's room
Mrs. Singh: what is this? Ani tum abhi tak ready nahi hui
Ani: mom I am not going wear this saree please na
Mrs. Singh: oh god Ani yeh saari kitni sundar h tum isme bahut acchi lagogi
Shree: yahi toh Aunty main ise kab se samjha rahi hu par yeh maanne ko ready nahi h
Mrs. Singh: Ani please pehan lo
Anika: mommm...
Mrs.Singh: please. ..
Anika: ok...
Mrs. Singh: thank you my doll
Anika: hmmm...
Mrs. Singh: now Get ready..
Anika goes in her changing room to get ready...

Anika was wearing:

Shree saw Anika

Shree: O bete ki...Kya lag rahi h Ani tu

Ani: I know main bahut acchi lag rahi hu par mujhe yeh nahi pehenna please...yeh heavy h

Shree: itni achi toh lag rahi h

Ani: main shaadi mein thodi na jaa rahi hu

Shree: shaadi mein yeh pehen kar jaegi tu

Ani: tu...

Mrs. Singh: bas dono chup karo aur Ani thodi der mein neeche aa jaana

Ani: hmmm...


On road...

ShivOmRu were standing around car...

Ru was standing behind Om and Shiv was in his angry mode.

Shiv: yeh car bhi na iska petrol abhi khatam hona tha, kiska idea tha yeh car lane ka

Ru: mera (said making puppy face)

Om: tabhi yeh hua, tu car lane se pehle tank check nahi kar sakta tha

Ru: are O, yeh tank toh kal full tha aaj pta nhi kaise

Om: pta nahi kaise main batata hu

Om ran behinds Ru to punch him.

Ru: aree O kya kar rahe ho, bhaiya bachao mujhe

Shiv: ek do meri taraf se bhi maar dio Om

Ru: aap log apne chote bhai ko maroge

Om: haan, kyu ki yeh teri wajah se hua h

Shiv: aur ab hum late bhi ho jaenge dinner ke lie

Ru: Dinner toh bahana h O, bhaiya ko Anika bhabhi se jo milna h

O: aree haan Shivaay tujhe aaj har kaam mein badi jaldi rahi h (he winks at Ru)

Shiv: guys yeh time mazaak ka nahi h zaldi se koi aur car maang wao

O: haan main call karta hu

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I am so sorry guys for late update

I will give regular updates from tomorrow...

Do not forget to tell me how this chapter was?

It will help me to improve my writing...




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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Interesting update...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Awesome story
i read all part in one go
plzzz countinue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Awsum update...
Lol Shivay was so eager to go to Ani's house...
But poor him...the car ran out of petrol!!!
Continue soon
Thnx fr pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Haiyeee shivaay k besabri to meet ani.. Om ru teasing shivay...
Lovely update...

Plzzz cont soon

And thans for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Awesome story dear..
Read all in a go..
Totally enjoyed reading...

Update soon n do pm me..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80

Chapter 14


Singh's Mansion

All Elder Oberois had reached there.

Mr. Singh: hey Tej and Shakti...(he goes and hugs Tej and Shakti) Namaste Maa kaisi hain aap (took blessings of Dadi)

Dadi: hat Khotey...kabhi yaad bhi nahi aati h tujhe toh meri

Mr. Singh: aisa nahi h Maa

Dadi: accha mujhse kabhi milne bhi nahi aata tu

Mr. Singh: bas bahut busy tha islie nahi aa paya Maa

Dadi: accha ab apni Maa k gale toh lagega (Dinesh smiles and hugs Dadi and Mrs. Singh took blessings of Dadi and hugs Pinky and Tej)

Mrs. Singh: aap log baithiye...

Prinku: aunty Anika bhabhi kaha h

Mrs. Singh: use main abhi bulati hu, aao mere saath main tumhe uske room mein le chalti hu

Prinku: jee..Mom main jau

Jahnvi: of course jao beta

Prinku and Mrs. Singh goes from there...

Tej: yeh bacche abhi tak aaye kyu nahi, hamare saath hi toh nikle the

Shakti: haan, main call karta hu abhi

Dadi: haan jara puch toh abhi tak aaye kyu nahi

Shakti calls Shivaay...and Shivaay tells him that they will there in 15-20 minutes.

ON ROAD

Shivaay: chalo ab car aa gyi h jaldi baitho

Rudra: toh hum kaha mana kar rahe h

Shiv: haan toh baith

Rudra: haan

They sits in car.

SINGH'S MANSION

Anika's Room

Mrs. Singh and Prinku enters..

Mrs. Singh: Ani dekho tumse milne kaun aaya h

Ani: kaun Maa

Mrs. Singh: yeh Priyanka h Shivaay ki sister

Anika looks at Priyanka and smiles..

Ani: hii

Prinku: hello bhabhi

Ani: bhabhi...

Prinku: aap meri bhabhi hi toh ho

Shree: haan woh pehli baar suna h na toh awkward sound karega and main hu Shree Anika ki bestie

Prinku: hii

Shree: aao baitho

Mrs. Singh: accha tum log baat karo main aati hu

AniRee takes Prinku with them.

Prinku: waise aap bahut beautiful ho

Anika and smiles and says Thankyou to Prinku.

Ani: waise tum bhi bahut acchi ho

IN HALL

Tej: lo Shivaay, Om aur Rudra bhi aa gye
Pinky: kaha rah gaye the tum teeno

O: woh choti maa car k saath kuch problem ho gyi thi

Pinky: okayss...



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