OmRu OS- An advice

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys, this is the first time I ma writing an OmRu OS. Hope it's worth reading.
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OmRu OS- An advice

"What? You failed in Mathematics?" Tej Singh Oberoi's voice echoed in the room. Jhanvi looked at him and then at her son, and to her surprise, her 15-year-old son did nothing, just stood straight, eyes focused on Tej's face, and face was calm.
"Shivaay scored full marks in his exams, and you?" Tej said as he threw the paper on which the result was printed, in air. It fell near Omkara's leg. He picked it up.
"Say something you idiot." Tej wanted him to react. Guilty, sad, something, but not that "I-don't-care" attitude.
"Well, about Shivaay? Obviously, Dad, he is good at Mathematics. Thanks for your comments on my marks. Mom, I'll be back in some time, you sign the results for me, please." He said and kept the result back on the table and walked off. Tej looked at his retreating back in disbelief.
"Why does dad hate you, O?" Rudra asked, licking off the melted chocolate from his fingers.
"Maybe because I am too cool for him to handle?" Omkara said as he painted the white paper with bright orange paint. Rudra looked at him in confusion and burst out laughing.
"You love making fun of him, don't you?" Rudra asked.
"No Rudra, I like standing up infront of him and both things are different."
"How?" The 13-year-old asked in confusion.
"Grow older, you'll get to know." Omkara said. He hated his father for being dominating but he didn't want Rudra to do the same. He knew that Tej would start persuading Rudra in near future, but he also knew that till then he would become strong enough to protect that little boy and his wishes from (unfortunately) their father.
He sighed as he looked at his young brother, busy eating the chocolate. He kept the paint brush.
"Rudra?" Omkara waited for Rudra to shift his attention from the chocolate to him.
"Promise me, that unlike Shivaay, you will do what your heart desires. Never let your wishes succumb to someone's nonsense opinions. If you know that your decision will do no harm to anyone, go forward with that, ok?"
"Haan O. But it's bad to ignore their sad expressions when they see you enjoy the benefits of your decisions," Rudra said sadly.
Seeing him sad, Om immediately forgot the conversation that had taken place some 10 minutes back between his father and him.
"What happened Rudra?"Om asked him softly.
"I snatched the chocolate from Prinku and she cried. I took a bad decision O." Rudra said and pouted. Omkara looked at him in disbelief.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's very ,very cute and emotional Shivani 😃. And the last advice by Om was fabulous. You are right, we can't become someone else's replica because 'we are what we are'. And Rudra with his chocolate 😛 was a cutie pie. I can completely relate that Om &Rudra with the present ones. It's very nice Shivani 👍🏼.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww Shibu... Totally loved it. It's been long since I read one of your work and I have to say you have gotten better and better at this. That's how I have imagined young Omkara. Defiant and headstrong. And the goofy Rudra.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww Shibani.. Tht was such a cute OS.. I liked the fact that Om doesn't want Rudra to get forced and wants him follow his heart. I wish we had such a kind of scene between OmRu. And that last part 🤣 Rudra stole Prinku's chocolate 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dimaag

It's very ,very cute and emotional Shivani 😃. And the last advice by Om was fabulous. You are right, we can't become someone else's replica because 'we are what we are'. And Rudra with his chocolate 😛 was a cutie pie. I can completely relate that Om &Rudra with the present ones. It's very nice Shivani 👍🏼.


Thanks dear😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ila-

Aww Shibu... Totally loved it. It's been long since I read one of your work and I have to say you have gotten better and better at this. That's how I have imagined young Omkara. Defiant and headstrong. And the goofy Rudra.


Lachu😳😳 its so good to read your comment on my work😃
@bold, i blush☺️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AngelicTomboy

Aww Shibani.. Tht was such a cute OS.. I liked the fact that Om doesn't want Rudra to get forced and wants him follow his heart. I wish we had such a kind of scene between OmRu. And that last part 🤣 Rudra stole Prinku's chocolate 🤣


Thanks Deepi😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hahahahah!!!! Om was expecting Rudy boy to say something about decision making and all he was thinking was about chocolate. 🤣
But anyways!! OmRu are lovee!! ❤️


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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is the cutest OBro interactive OS I've read... do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: appynehra

hahahahah!!!! Om was expecting Rudy boy to say something about decision making and all he was thinking was about chocolate. 🤣

But anyways!! OmRu are lovee!! ❤️



Thanks Appy😳

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