The Kidnapping - Short OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi All,
I don't really like the rushedness present in the show right now and how the kidnapping was rushed, so I wrote this really small OS. I hope you all enjoy it, I'm still really new to writing. I know I still have the wedding drabble which I think I'll take up again because exams just ended. Thank you for your time!




The Kidnapping

"ANIKAA" Shivaay screamed into the shadows as he hugged her to his chest recollecting the last moment they spent together. It wasn't a moment of love, rather it was filled with hatred and the collapse of Anika.

A single tear fell from his eyes realising how terribly he had messed up, to even doubt her and then not bother to clarify the wrongful hatred and image he had of the woman that he had put through hell and back. No, he never even gave her the courtesy of asking to clarify his doubts, he simply just diminished her to being trash - roadside, middleclass trash.

He was brought back from his thoughts by the whisper of his name and he felt her chest rising against his. His heartbeat erratic, he didn't know how to react. His shrewd brain then took over, he needed to get them out of there and fast. He heard Daksh laughing behind him, and he wanted to end him right there and then in a water tank and watch him trapped and scared just as Anika was. However, Daksh was not important right now and he had already alerted Khanna to alert the police while he was driving. Just then the police burst through the doors, hitting Daksh with their rods and taking him into custody. Shivaay would deal with him later, he needed to get Anika home.

He carried her shivering, cold, and unconscious body to the car. Her breaths were still shallow and unsteady. He got Khanna to drive him home as he sat in the back with her, her head in his lap. He put up the privacy screen in his car, his tears flowing freely now with remorse, guilt, anger, and emotions he didn't even know he possessed. No sooner than Khanna had pulled up to the Oberoi Mansion, had Shivaay thrown the door open and carried Anika into the mansion, yelling for the doctor to go to his room and get his equipment ready.

The elders were asking questions left, right, and centre as they followed a manic Shivaay carrying an unconscious Anika to his room. He laid her down on his bed and explained to the family and doctor to the best of his ability, while trying not to break down, what had taken place. This is when Jhanvi spoke up about how Daksh had come by earlier and tried to convince her and Pinky about Anika and her "characterless ways". This is when Jhanvi told Pinky in front of the entire family to stop doubting Anika, and accept her as she has done nothing but good for this goddamn family who gave her nothing but sorrow. And this is when Pinky broke down crying, vowing to put Anika before her own Shivaay for the rest of her existence and making Anika her own daughter. It was Pinky and Jhanvi who changed Anika's clothes, dried her hair, fed her the medicine the doctor has prescribed, and made the rest of the family go downstairs and make Shivaay change and calm him down. Shivaay made everyone else go to bed as he watched over Anika all night, not closing his eyes even for a second.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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They cud have shown that episode like this 👏
Par nahi. They have to eat out heads!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much, this story filled the gaps on what would have transpired after Shivaay rescued Anika...this was beautifully written!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks dear story se hi sahi par dil ko santushti toh mili. Varna serial toh ghode ki tarah bhage jaa raha hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
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that was beautifully written ... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! It should have been there, that episode was so rushed. Thank you so much for writing this, totally loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wish it happened this way instead, great job!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: forumgirl

They cud have shown that episode like this 👏
Par nahi. They have to eat out heads!



Thank you so much for your kind words!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai

Thank you so much, this story filled the gaps on what would have transpired after Shivaay rescued Anika...this was beautifully written!


Thank you very much for your kind words! I wish they would stop rushing the show
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Areeba-

Wow! It should have been there, that episode was so rushed. Thank you so much for writing this, totally loved it.


thank you for your very kind words!

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