Kaise manaoun iss laki ko! Last part pg 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys !!

I really wanted to write something on Shivika !!
Let me know if its good enough to continue !!

Here is the epilogue !

Shivaay didn't know how to get the old Anika back. Its been 3 days that he was trying. After the Daksh incident, she was hurt . He could feel it. But what was disturbing him even more was that now she was indifferent. She was not even looking at him. He tried hard to get her attention, but all his effort did not pay off. He actually started to feel like she was her college crush and he was trying to impress her. But no , She was his legal wedded wife. Anika Shivaay Singh Oberoi.

He knew whatever he did was wrong. But Daksh planned everything so perfectly and showed him whatever he wanted so neatly , even though his heart couldnt accept the fact that she slept with Daksh , but as they say eyes don't lie. He couldn't deny what his own eyes witnessed.

Anika on her side, she was hurt. In fact , she was tired of getting hurt all the time from the person she once loved, or maybe the person she still loves . She was behaving normal with everyone, but deep inside her, she was broken , she needed support . For the first time she needed support. Being an independent girl, she never seeked for someone's support but all the incidents in her life were getting too much too handle.

She used to go in the room when Shivaay was sleeping and used to wake up before him and used to leave the room. Its been 3 days that she is avoiding him and that he is trying hard to get her attention. He is trying to talk to her. But she didn't wanted to hear any of his excuses. He , the great Shivaay Singh Oberoi, Only knew how to hurt people.

But deep inside, she knew he was trying hard, because since 3 days whenever she entered the room , he was sleeping in a sitting position, and it was obvious that he doze off while waiting for her. She needed some time before she could forgive him.

Shivaay couldn't take this anymore. " I never took more than 24 hours to crack a deal and now its been 72 hours, I will speak to her by hook or by crook said a dedicated Shivaay


Do give your feedback for me to continue or not !!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nyc...
Thought of writing an TS on this track too... but seems like urs is more intresting...
Continue sooon.

Love Sharmi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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great part
the part abut deal cracking in 24 hours was hilarious
hehe
shivaay beta shuru ho ja
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome. Waiting for next update.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

great part

the part abut deal cracking in 24 hours was hilarious
hehe
shivaay beta shuru ho ja
please do continue
bye sumi


Haha !! its just crossed my mind
so i wrote it !!
i will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey!
It's a good one.
Keep going please...:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys !!
Thanks for the response !!
For those who wanted me to continue here is the first part !!( Hope i dont disappoint you )

Part 1

Shivaay made his signature step because he had a master plan. He wanted to talk to her and he will do it. It was time for him to execute his plan. He knew he was again playing with her but he promised himself that this time would be the last time.

Anika received a call on her cell from an Shivaay's number, she didn't answer it but after several calls she thought it might be urgent ,

Anika: Hello , apko samaj nahin athi main apse baat nahin karna chati

Caller: Are u Anika?

A: Yes app kaun ? or yeh to SHivaay ka number hai

C: Yahan kissi ka accident hua hai , unke call log mein apka number tha to I decided to inform you.

A: what ? Is he fine ? kahan ?

C: I don't know , the car and the phone were there , but there is no body. I think he might have fallen in the jungle.

The guy informed the exact location to Anika, and she rushed as her life was dependant to it. Shivvay has met an accident and he was no where to be found. She was angry , but all her anger melted into concern. She reached the place and started to look for shivaay like crazy.

Anika: Shivaaay !!! Kahan ho ? she kept screaming and tears kept rolling down her cheeks

After searching for a while, she found his watch. His blue watch that he always wear. She was sure he was nearby .and she finally saw a hand under a lot of leaves.

"Shivaaayyy" She screamed and went near him.

She analyzed him , there was no injury on him, but he was unconscious.

Anika: Shivaay , please wake up !! but he was not moving and he was not even breathing

Anika: Please talk to me !! u cannot leave me alone. Please !! You have to talk me to ... weren't you waiting for me to give u the time to speak to u !!

As soon as she said that , Shivaay opened his eyes and said , yes I want to speak to u !!!
Anika was stunned by his sudden action, he looked perfectly fine.

Anika: Shivaay , App theek ho she said touching his face

S: Nahin main theek nahin houn. Pichle 3 dino se , main andar hi andar hi gut raha houn, mujhe yeh natak karna para, to bring you here

Anika: Natak? How could u fall so low ? Main jaa rahi houn .

He held her hand. "Tum meri baat sune bagair nahin ja sakti "

A: Hamesha apki nahin chal sakti and she struggled to remove her hand from his grip

His grip was strong, that she couldn't free herself.

Anika: Mujhe kuch nahin sunna , main hi pagal thi jo apse ... She realized she was about to confess , she diverted the topic:

main to bohat expensive houn na , ek middle class ladki ke liye, jo daksh ke saath soyi thi ek raath ke liye, bass itna hi samaj paye mujhe aap. You know what Mr Shivaay Singh Oberoi, I have never hated someone as you... She continued !

Shivaay : that's why u came running after hearing about my accident news. And those tears he pointed out yeh kiske liye hain

Anika: Mujhe aapse baat nahin karni , she again struggled to leave

Shivaay pulls her closer and she falls on his chest. He rolls on top of her.

S: Now Mrs Anika Shivaay Singh Oberoi .. You will listen to me

A: Leave me !! I don't wanna hear your lame excuses about Daksh fooling you, Apka dost , apke jaisa pagal, dono ke dimaag main kissi ne baseball ball mara hoga, isliye satke huye ho...

Shivaay was losing his patience. He wanted to say something else and this woman kept on going , on a different tangent.

Shivaay : Shut up or I will make you shut up

Anika: I wont, kya karoge , darao ge, maro ge


He couldn't hear her nonsense anymore, he sealed his lips with hers. She couldn't talk anymore, and her big eyes popped up . She was shocked. Shivaay started to kiss her passionately. Its been a while he haven't kissed someone so good. . He wanted her so badly, but she was not responding at all. He broke the kiss abruptly. He thought : he was again wrong and he shouldn't have kissed her.


Anika was shocked, but since it was her first kiss, she didn't know how to react, and she didn't wanted to show him that she didn't know how to kiss . He would tease her. But she was upset that he stopped. She wanted that moment to stop.

Shivaay: Wo Anika, Im really sorry, I didn't wanted to do that. I just wanted you to stop talking

I mean I apologize, im feeling really bad.

Anika: Shut up !!



Im sorry for stopping here !!
Have a good reading !!
Do give feedback

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow it's so awesome and so romantic😳. I can't wait to read more. Plzz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ktlovers

Hey guys !!


I really wanted to write something on Shivika !!
Let me know if its good enough to continue !!

Here is the epilogue !

Shivaay didn't know how to get the old Anika back. Its been 3 days that he was trying. After the Daksh incident, she was hurt . He could feel it. But what was disturbing him even more was that now she was indifferent. She was not even looking at him. He tried hard to get her attention, but all his effort did not pay off. He actually started to feel like she was her college crush and he was trying to impress her. But no , She was his legal wedded wife. Anika Shivaay Singh Oberoi.

He knew whatever he did was wrong. But Daksh planned everything so perfectly and showed him whatever he wanted so neatly , even though his heart couldnt accept the fact that she slept with Daksh , but as they say eyes don't lie. He couldn't deny what his own eyes witnessed.

Anika on her side, she was hurt. In fact , she was tired of getting hurt all the time from the person she once loved, or maybe the person she still loves . She was behaving normal with everyone, but deep inside her, she was broken , she needed support . For the first time she needed support. Being an independent girl, she never seeked for someone's support but all the incidents in her life were getting too much too handle.

She used to go in the room when Shivaay was sleeping and used to wake up before him and used to leave the room. Its been 3 days that she is avoiding him and that he is trying hard to get her attention. He is trying to talk to her. But she didn't wanted to hear any of his excuses. He , the great Shivaay Singh Oberoi, Only knew how to hurt people.

But deep inside, she knew he was trying hard, because since 3 days whenever she entered the room , he was sleeping in a sitting position, and it was obvious that he doze off while waiting for her. She needed some time before she could forgive him.

Shivaay couldn't take this anymore. " I never took more than 24 hours to crack a deal and now its been 72 hours, I will speak to her by hook or by crook said a dedicated Shivaay


Do give your feedback for me to continue or not !!


Love the start! 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10
Waahwaah
Kya dhasu plan bnaya
Nd that kiss was hot

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