Dil Bole Oberoi-The EARLY CHRONICLES-18th December (Chapter 3 Page 6)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Wow now this is nayi soch for the oberois..

Loved all the updates!!

Cool and awesome! please continue with the next chappy soon already waiting to know more about what will anika tell

Quote

idolovestories

@idolovestories

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Woah!

I am absolutely speechless! This is amazing writing. I admire your writing style a lot. The way humor comes through effortlessly in these lines is simply brilliant. You know the right dosage of everything, dont you? the humor, the emotions,the character descriptions, everything.

To be honest, I really didnt like the Annika of DIl Bole Oberoi so much because of the way others were treating with deference, as though she were sacred, kept on a pedestal and all that.

But may be now that I will get to know why she was being treating like that , I might change my opinion.

Anyways, hats off to the brilliant conceptualization and storyline.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

shanry

@shanry

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

This is the most fabulous idea and I'm so glad it was one mooted by a fabulous writer.

Excellent prequel given the questions that must be at the back of the minds of all DBO readers, "how did Shivika reconcile their differences and accept their love?" "how and when did Ishana become Om's love of his life?" etc etc.

And thus far, you have done such a wonderful job structuring the entire lead up to DBO. Even how you've tied up the lose ends to give Prinyaka & her ACP a chance. Brilliant! Wish CVs would take a leaf out of your book of creations and instructions.

Can't wait for the stories to unfold.

I especially thank you for this now because your chapters(episodes) would be such a great respite from the actual IB that's becoming farcical with the advent of the witches of OMwick

Quote

pal81

@pal81

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Navin..with wats going on in the shos...this forum is my only respite.. it has become my fav haunt and yr stories r ny instsnt mood lifters.. plz update this soon coz i desperately need a pick me up.

Quote

shanry

@shanry

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Hi! Are we getting any new chapter(s) soon? 😭

Edited by shanry - 8 years ago

Quote

pal81

@pal81

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Update this soon navin... pleeeaaasseee...😊

Quote

Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Amazing
I always wanted Anika to take her own decisions
The way marriage happened and all the shit happens after that
No one considered her choices that what she wants to do with her marriage
Sabne decisions uss par thop diye
Good one
Continue soon

Quote

dimaag

@dimaag

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

The 1st chapter- Totally was laughing hard to imagine the confused look of ACP of making a note on missing Champa 🤣 Hilarious.
2nd Chapter- That portrayal of PriVeer was fantastic. Thanks for describing such little details regarding the third perspective. It was so much needed. Bang on!! 👏 👏
3rd Chapter- Priyanka truly became Prinku Pehelwan 😉. I loved that part where Rudra was like yes! I know these vile things are coming from your ACP only and then when she explained how Om reacted. The last part was so full of suspense. Anika standing there? 😕
Navin! U need to update the next part soon. It was incredible to know when Ranveer actually gave Prinku a thought if she would have been forced to marry him. It was mind blowing. The CVs have spoilt the PriVeer track so badly. Liked them here.