||Mrs.Anika Shivaay Singh Oberoi|| An ShivIka TS, Part 3 uptd on pg:18

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz
Yay!! so cute n romantic..
thanks for the pm Sharmi.

Thanks Annika 😳

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND
Adorable...these two r so cute...

Thanks dear 😊

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: varala
Lovely update
Chapri dance...kiss...wow beautiful
Continue soon😛

Thank u 😃

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Gaurirane366
awesome..😊

Thank u

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sharmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: thisissmansi
Sooo cute...that dance sequence was awesome...and last prt also!!

Thanks Mansi 😃

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Roselind
The update was ...
You are such a superb writer Sharmi...👏👏
Shivaay leaned in to kiss Anika's lips...😳😳
Anika not letting Shivaay kiss her on the lips...Frustrated Shivaay...😆😆
Anika wants to dance before she let her husband kiss her...demanding wife...😉
Shivaay using Anika's language & Anika asking him to watch his lang...total role reversal...LOL...🤣😆
Anika's chhapri dance...we hardly ever got a proper glimpse of it in the show...thnkxxx you gave it hear...😆😉
Shivaay too doing the chhapri dance...that too over the bed with Anika...kya din aa gaye...ek kiss paane k liye kya kya karna padh raha hai...🤣🤣
The kiss was intensely passionate...😳
("Aur ye sirf mera haq hai, Mrs.Anika Shivaay Singh Oberoi!!"
Saying so he captured her lips in his. They kissed with equal passion. They indirectly claimed that they belonged to each other... Anika's Shivaay... and Shivaay's Anika.)----- These lines were awesome...so heavenly touch...romantic ShivIka...🥳
Shivaay shielding his wife from the sun rays...😊😃
(She unknowingly smiled and clunged to him closer whispering his name softly...
"Shivaaay..."
He hugged his wife back closely and whispered...
"ANIKA SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI!" Nd they smiled.
Yes he had accepted the fact that she was His wife... the wife of SSO...)----- These lines are pure ShivIka love...❤️
Finally Shivaay accepted that Anika as his legally wedded wife...too good...superb...😃

Write more stories soon...will be waiting...😃😊

Har baar dil cheenleti ho apni iss beautiful comments ke saath.

Love u Roselind for making me feel that i am a good writer..🤗🤗

Thanks once again dear😳😳

Yes will write one for u jaldi se...

Edited by lucky_princess - 8 years ago

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sharmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: MorningStar01
Hii 😳 I've been a silent reader of this TS but now I have to comment because I just have to tell you what an amazing piece of work this is

The first part had me in stitches 🤣 to my family, I prolly' looked crazy but they can't blame me, a drunk Anika is absolutely mind blowing && is something I would love to see in the show. The way you described it all was brilliant 👏 the Tia & the cockroaches was hilarious 🤣

The second & last part had me all warm&mushy inside 😳 the emotions that you had going there was just too amazingly written out you managed to add the right amount of humour with the right amount of passion. It's beautiful ❤️ &&& then they finally claimed their rights over each other

(I hope the creatives are scouting the forum and see this, I would love for them to add a drink Anika to the show)

Thank uUu for the p.m && if you have anymore updates please do p.m 🤗

-Shan'e

Hey... firstly let me tell u that i love reading ur comments... they r really really motivating and u make the writer feel soo happy... cuz i always read ur comments Shan'e...👏👏

So i happen to recieve a beautiful comment by one of the best commenters on forum... nd i am feeling soo happy about that.

I feel glad that u loved this piece of mine.😳

Thanks a lott once again...

Love Sharmi❤️

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ShanÃ© Pillay

@MorningStar01

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Hey... firstly let me tell u that i love reading ur comments... they r really really motivating and u make the writer feel soo happy... cuz i always read ur comments Shan'e...👏👏
So i happen to recieve a beautiful comment by one of the best commenters on forum... nd i am feeling soo happy about that.
I feel glad that u loved this piece of mine.😳
Thanks a lott once again...
Love Sharmi❤️

Heyy 😳 thank uUu so much, lol I'm the one who's supposed to be praising you but here you are making me feel all blushy 😆

Great work deserves praise Sharmi && you write amazingly, so there is no need to thank me 🤗

P.S. If you have other work written or have ongoing Ishqbaaz stories can you please send me the links 😳😳

P.S.S. Hope you had an amazing birthday 😊

HugzZz

Shan'e

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Neha Maurya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#159

first of all a very very big sorry for being so much late with comments...sorry..

and nw about the TS...

read all the part in one go...

oh anika got drunk..😆

and praised tej...

and then turn came of tia...i really loved that part dear...

whole tia-anika part was awesome..especiall this one..

Jo doosron ko girana chahthe hain...vo aksar khud gir jaate hain." And Tia was red with Anger. Anika pulled her up nd Tia took her hands away from her.
"Kitne badtameez ho tum Anika. Its bad karma."
She said and held Shivaay's hands once again.
"Accha... bad karma... aurjo tum kar rahi ho vo kaise karma hai??"
"Main kya ka rahi hun?"
"Kisi aur ki pati ke saath hamesha chipakthi rehthi ho, jabki tumhari khud ki shaadi hogayi ho."
"Chipku...Chipku... Arrey maine ye pwhle kyun nahi socha? Chipku Tia!" Nd she giggled and beamed like a kid.
"Chipku Tia..chipku Tia..chipku..chipku...cchhhiippkkkuuu" she kept on ranting.
"Waise ek baat batao...tum apni pati ko chodhkar meri pati ke saath chipakthi kyun ho?? Vo tumhe apne paas aane nahi dete kya? Shayad unhe bhi tumhe dekh ke michmichi hoti hai." Nd she chuckled.
"Anika..bas" Shivaay said.
"Chup...ek dum chup." Nd she went forward nd pulled Shivaay's arm out if Tia's hold and pushed him aside.

"Aur aap! Aapko iske saath haath mein haath dalte hue michmichi nahi hoti hai kya?"
She asked Shivaay.
"Shivaay baby! Ye sab kya hai? Ye Anika meri itni insult kar rahi hai aur tum bas khade hokar sun rahe ho?"
"Tia..." shivaay started but Anika cut him off in the middle.
"Arrey vo kyun kuch kahenge. Vo toh apni asli patni ke saath hi denge na. Vo bas tumhe jhel rahe hain. Inhone mujhe khud kaha hai. Kyun Shivaay?"
Tia looked shockingly towards Shivaay. Shivaay was like "when on the earth did i say that?" But its not wrong either." He internally slapped his head for those thoughts.
"Chup kyun ho Shivaay? Tell something"
Once again Shivaay was cut off by Anika.
"Inki khamoshi bol rahi hai..ki jo maine kaha vohi sach hai. Ab tum yahan se jaa sakthi ho."
"What??!!"
"Maine kaha u can leave!" She said raising her eyebrow..." aur vaise bhi itni der kisi ke ghar mein itne der nahi rehte."
Nd she started pushing Tia.
"Chalo...jao...bye..bye..bye.. take care." Nd she shut the gates of the Oberoi Mansion.
"Anika!"
"Yes Tia... main bhi apni khayal rakhungi ...bye...bye...aur kabhi vapas mat aana!"