happy family SHIVIKA( sorry but i am sropping my ff NOTE ON PAGE 5) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Superb part of os,lvd it
Waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Adorable. does anshi has blue eyes like daddy?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 4
Every one is waiting to see that whom will anshi select


And they all were not happy except shivaay because thay know that anshi will come to shivaay

Anshi was coming to shivaay in between he receives call of khana and he was talking to khana

Shivaay: khana yes back per 5 guards honay chaiyay hai yes ok ok haan our who

(and still anshi is sitting in his shoes she tries her best to gain his attention but he is was talking to khana she finally and shivaay is doing this purposely because he know that anshi cant bear his ignorance and she will call him baba to gain his attention and he was right )

Anshi:ba---baa

Shivaay just throw his phone and take her in his arms and walk away

Pinky: yeh lo mammi ji anshi hamari toh kuch lagti hi nahi hai .hum subha say koshish kar rahay hai our yeh 5 min ousay ignore kar kay sabit kar gaya kay anshi sab say ziyada pyaar shivaay say karti hai
Anika: kuch nahi hota mami ji baas mujhay daar toh is baat ka hai kay shivaay mujahay anshi ki shaddi tak tanay maray gay our tadi dekhai gay

Pinky : haan anika teri toh o my maata ho jani hai

Rudra: bhabhi app sab na om ko danto yahi tadi dekha raha tha 5 din ka time hai bhaiya yeh sart 5 min mai hi jeet gai

Om: chup kar cheater anshi ko lai kar bhaag gaya .acha dadi mai ishana ko ous kay parents kay ghar say lai kar a raha hoon ok
( ishana and om have 2 little twins samar and sahil and they are 2 months old and ishana is daughter of mr agarval biggest business tycoon after tej and shivaay andmt agarval and ishana mom don't like anika , soumya and anshi because they want shivaay and rudra to marry there daughters sumana and naina )

In between om recives call of mr agarval

Om: yes pappa

Mr agarva: mein ishu our samar sahil ko om drop karnay a raha hoon ok

Om : ok pappa I am waiting

Shivaay just take mr and misses agarval to dinner along with family after dinner soumya and rudra want to take flight because they are going to meet soumya s mother so om insist mr and misses agarval to spend night with ishanna because she can not handle 2 kids at a time and they agrees.
After reaching home
Anika: app nay anshi ko kiu sula diya tha abb puri raat jaag kar tang karay gi mujh ko

Anshi was continusly saying baaba"baaba which is irritating misses agarval so she just shouts on her

Prouble kya hai tumhari jab say ghar ai hai baaba baaba chalai ja rahi hai 1 saal ki bachi nay puray ghar ko sar paar utha liya hai.
Shivaay was about to burst but anika just holds her hand and anshi starts crying loudly

Ishana: kya mom why uou scold her she is just kid and she was just comforting anshi but shivaay come in between and say koi zaroorat nahi hai I will do it my self and just walk away holding anshis hand
and anika just follow him



Bold[Precap anshi goes to sahil and samar room to play with them and no one was in room... accidentally the door close and mr agarval ... Slaps anshi...shivaay reaction...shivaays shocking decision...om shivaays fight ...mr and misses agarval to live in oberoi mansion for 7 months

Edited by Aqsa707 - 8 years ago
thisissmansi thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Omg!!!
Itna happiness ke baad why such depressing precap!!
Koi nahi..still waiting for the next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Anshi is so cute❤️
I want to see more of shivaay and anshi scenes
With what right is this lady scolding anshi😡 she is just a kid
And why slap a choti bachchi😡
Om and shivaays fight? For what😕
Eagerly waiting for the next one
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
aww so cute..
daughters tu dady ki princess hoti hein..❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Ok guys jo mainay perevap main likha main who nahi kar rahi hoom story main because I want to make my story fuuny and light I don't want to much drama in my story so sorry I just change my mind
part 5

Shivaay just walks towards his room and anika follows him shivaay just make anshi sit on bed and place pillows around her .

Anika: kya shivaay app nay misses agarval ko itnay ghusay say dekha kay main to daar hi gai thi kay kahi app

Shivaay just intruppts in between by saying mujhay is topic pai baat nahi karna mujhay mera laptop daina.
Anika :ok baba

she gives him his laptop place her head on his sholder shivaay was just working on laptop and kisses her forehead after some time he observes time and its 1 o clock now anika and anshi both are sleeping anika on his shoulder and anshi on his chest he just pass a smile close his laptop and make anika sleep properly on bed then he take anshi in his arms take her to her room next to there room turn on her room cameras then he come back to his room and found anika sleeping peacefully and look at his t.v screen found anshi sleeping peacefully and then he finally fall asleep


om and ishana goes on a night walk and ishana request her mom to go to her room and take care of samar and sahil and she do they same
In anshi's room anshi wake up at 2 o clock because she already slept in afternoon so she just come down from her bed and she is in no mood to go to her parents room because she knows that they will simply fall her sleep again and she was in no mood for another nap so she stars walking towards samar and sahil room due to some work misses agarval leaves room anshi enter and finds her brothers sleeping peacefully by mistake the door closes and get locked anshi just go near them and kiss there forehead .misses agarvaal enters the room and find room locked she instantly calls ishana and om and ordered them to come back

She shouts agarval agarval

By listening her voice shivika just run towards her and ishana and om also reach there shivaay founds that anshi is not in her room and tells every one that anshi is inside with kids now every one is shouting anshi kholo darwaza shivaay was trying to say something but due to so many voices he stops finally anika shouts
Anika : stop it every one itna kiu cheekh rahay hain app sab loog bhull gai anshi baghad billay ki beti hai hindi sahi samaj ati ous ko sahi say now every one plz keep quite
Shivaay : itni deer say yahi boolnay ki koshish kar raha tha but anyways anshi listen come near to door (he was saying and anshi was doing) finally the door opens shivaay was just about to praise and kiss anshi for her hardwork in opening door 👏👏but mr agarvaal stops him in between and shouts anshi mafi mango 😡

Om : anshi princess say sorry 😉

Anshi :no----no👎🏼
Shivaay: smiles and says in anikas ear tumhari beti hai kis ki jaan bhi lai li gi na toh mafi kabhi nahi maangay gi

Mr aggarval: suna nahi tum nay maafi mango

Anshi just moves her head on other side and foldes her head in full attitude😉

Anika : app ki beti hai sahi say bolna nahi ata paar tadi maarnay main app say bhi agay hai dekhain kaisay attiyude day rahi hai

Shivaay : I am sorry on her behave
Om:no shivaay its ok she is my princess

Shivaay :om kitni baar bola hai kay anshi ko princess meray ilava koi nahi bolay ga and as usual takes anshi kisses her forehead and walks away
Anika: sorry mr and misses agarval shivaay our anshi donoo ki taribaazi kay liyay

Mr agarval : what taribaazi
Anika: attitude


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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Haye...I liked this concept..shivaay NE camera fix liye anshi ke room mai..in all a protective dad and also a loving husband Jo raat ko anika ke saath koi disturbance nahi chahta?...l liked that sleeping part on shivaay's shoulder.. In all..a nice update!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Sorry friends but I will not continue my ff not because I am tired of writing but because I didn't get good response and this is natural ( mujhay khud bhi bohat kam ff / os passand atay hai its normal) so I am saying sorry to those people who have read/ like or have commented on my ff but I really don't want to waste my time and your time sorry if you people are disappointed and waiting for my updates but plz try and understand that I cant write for 5 to 6 peoples

Still love you all and special thank you for reading previous 5 parts
👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
If you get more response will you write?
Can you please write another one then? Please

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