FF: The Road to Redemption- Step 9- Negotiate from Nothing- Pg 38 - Page 7

Love d way u show shivaay trying to redeem himself without messing up d essence of his cjaracterisation...absolutely loving it...cant wait for more...

Ooo coolest update ever

Wow, this is fantastic👏
Love your wicked sense of humor😎
You write beautifully⭐️
This story is a breather with what we have to sit through and watch on the show. It puts a huge, goofy smile on my face😃
Kudos for taking this effort to write and entertain us🤗. Lots of members are going through writer's block due to onscreen events messing with the minds😒.
Eagerly waiting for the next part😊
Take care

Oh my god! I love how you are writing this! And honestly as much as I have loved Anika's struggle with English... I actually would have really loved it if she was much fluent in English too. I mean she could prefer Hindi - especially her own amazing words... but when it comes to showing an equal partnership I always felt that she would have totally nailed it if she could give him back as good as she got in his own language too sometimes.

Anyway!! Did I say I love this already? Yeah so I love it.. hope you continue it to an even higher high!

xx

i loved it !! ❤️ .. you write beautifully , and i was lost in your story wishing it didn't have to end. The build up is making me breathless . ..

I love this Anika so much. Like so many are writing about this kind of Anika in their stories and trust she is so funny she makes my day. Like they way she was making jokes near the staircase about Shivaay was so funny 🤣 and you no what she is right this new Shivaay means absolutely nothing and she shouldn't just run back to him b/c of what happened I mean he only realized b/c of Tia's lie about him even getting 36 crores it doesn't mean he is actually truly sorry for what he has done. Don't cave in Anika unless you actually feel he deserves you.

Its amazing dear !! ❤️ u write wonderfully!!!
How i wish we see these things on the shw but.. Well.. 😔

Continue soon!!

What a faadoo update

Simply awesome!! I love this Anika! Her sarcasm is top-notch! Read all 3 chapters in one-go. Sahil was the hero in Step 1. "The Incredible Sulk" was the highlight of Step 2! And Misra nailed it in Step 3! Even Shivaay's press conf speech was awesome! Why do they show Shivaay to be so dumb in the serial!!