AnShi TS 'Roiyaan' Last Part page 20 [19/12]

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

amazing update dear

i loved it very much

plzzz do continue soon

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Kaash storyline in the show was as logical...liking this a lot...please continue.

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wafa.M

@wafa.M

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

That was one beautiful update... ❤️

Do continue soon... Will be waiting 😉 😊

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ShanÃ© Pillay

@MorningStar01

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Thank uUu Thank uUu Thank uUu for the p.m 😊

Part 1 is brilliant!! I like that Anika has majority of the family supporting her 😃 I don't have any hope for Pinky because she is just as bad as her son 😡 (who even tho' I'm having right now, I still love, hahaha)

So Anika hasn't told Sahil err'thing, I can't wait for when she does because I know that lil dude is going to attack Shivaay like a lil rottweiler 🤣 (I won't feel bad for Shivaay when this does happen, he deserves it).

You cleared the misunderstandings, YES YES YES 👏 It was rude of his to eavesdrop but I'm glad that he did. And I'm extremely happy that he feels the way he does. He should feel the same pain that Anika went through and more. He doesn't deserve to have someone like her in his life 😭 Buhhht I do want to see him try and do err'thing he can to win her forgiveness (which I hope she doesn't give in to easily) 🤔

Brilliant start, can't wait for the next part. Please do continue to p.m (sowii for the blabbering)

-Shan'e

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Mishal Manisha

@gudiyanrani143

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Awesome update. Good on Shivaay for being an idiot :/

Update soon. :)

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Oh thnk god ONS misunderstanding got cleared.
Loved the update.
Waiting to see Shivaays redemption

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Awesome. But it's too late Mr. Oberoi. continue soon

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Arohi

@arohiarsh16

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Starting Is Awesome...waiting fr next update...

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Your story's shivaay is much intelligent then IB's shivaay...

Atlist mist of MU is cleared now...But damage is done shivaay and yes he can't repair...it's must be difficult for him now with guilt...awesome update...I like this one...