Originally posted by: Aparikshita
this was brilliant,harshada...seriously,donno how to express my love for this story n u...as i'm speechless right now...
Thank you so very much Sandjida my dear🤗
Your comments always manages to make me fly high in the air
So much appreciation, too much to handle for me😳
Thanks a lot for the pm,dear...it's really a great pleasure for me to read ur stories...todays update was the best...u conveyed so many emotions here...i loved it...
Shiv was so rude today...but ani was trying to talk to him the way they talked to each other yesterday...
You are always welcome for pms dear. You don't need to mention about that😊
And its a pleasure reading your feedbacks. Thats a motivation when people enjoy your work and they even let that know despite of the hectic life. Means a lot😳 This story is all about emotions my dear and there are lot more to come. Glad you liked them.
She tried to bring him little out of his shell.
He was ignoring her and she was ignoring his rude behaviour towards her but not him...as she subconsciously fell in love with him...though she herself doesn't know it yet...
N also we can't blame shiv or hate him for his behaviour...as he is not wrong...waiting to know about his heart breaking past which is still haunting him...n not letting him to move on in his life...
True! She is ignoring his rudeness towards her and he is trying to stay away from her but that's quite difficult, you see
Ohh thats too early to say that she is in love with him😳 But she surely feels something for him,
His heart breaking past will break everyone reading it...Just few more updates to go and I'll reveal everything.
Bhindi...lunch time...those scenes were too good...ani's eyes searching for shiv here n there...she didn't argue with him at all today...wooow,for the first time he ate from her hand...awe,lovely...such a cute moment...this made shiv emotional...uff...this part was brilliant...
Omish scenes were also good...om wanted to tell her but ish denies...as they can't lose a friend like shiv...
Glad you liked those canteen scenes. I just tried to show one more silent outburst of Shivaay there. She simply wanted to make him eat, at that point. She made him eat😳
Bhindi made him emotional and why, that I will let you know soon.
Ishana denied as she knew Shivaay and somewhat about his past.
Terrace scene...wow...such a emotionl scene...the way she soothed his pain...loved it...but at last,oh no,he again insulted her...uff,this scene...donno when he will realise that she is not selfish n of course she is different...
This was brilliant...
Continue to read the next soon...
I was quite emotional while writing that terrace scene as my heart breaks for that guy and his pain He will soon realise dear, I'll make him realize like real soon.
Thanks a zillion times❤️
I'll update today...
Loads of love
-Harshada