Say No, Annika! 11.10

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Anisa

@AnnzSageflower7

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Posted: 8 years ago

"Shaadi karogi? "

Annika never expected that from Billuji . She was still reeling from the fact that he chose a gift for her. Not to mention that piercing look in his shining eyes these days.

Shaadi ? aapse, Billuji?

"Daksh . .se.. "

Pindrop silence. Her heart dropped to her stomach after all that frenzied fluttering. She couldnt believe her ears. Blinking repeatedly she stared at his face .

Here I thought he was leaning towards me. And he was just trying to get me married off. What a fool you are Annika . .

Shivaay stared at her, his every breath painful.

I just got forced into proposing to her. But not for me.

Say No, Annika !

Look at me, Don't do this, Dont think about it !

Say No!

Please just say No ! And let me out of this misery.

She stared at him with hurt eyes. And she turned and went.

She just... went.

Edited by AnnzSageflower7 - 8 years ago

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is so short but it is packing such a powerful punch! Those feelings - shock, disappointment and immense hurt! And the portrayal, the way it is written is pure WOW! Hats off woman!

Keep writing!

-V

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asya34

@asya34

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Posted: 8 years ago

... because I am sadistic and want Shivvay to know how it feels when the shoe is on the other foot, lets for arguments sake say Annika said,"Yes,I will", to Daksh 😉
What scene do you think would play out ?
Just listening to Daksh proclaim loudly that he loved Annika made him 'pitch' his phone so hard that it would have put the leading baseball player to shame.
Then his expression, upon asking her to marry on Daksh's behalf, was somewhere between wanting to watch the horror show and closing your eyes till that the scary scene would end.
Later in his room he resembled a caged lion - just the bars were missing to complete the look. I was surprised he was rubbing his temples not his chest.
So this plays out when she walks away in a huff without answering ... I wish I could see what would happen if she did say yes or at least that she would consider getting to know him better...
sigh! Stone Singh Oberoi is crumbling and how

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Anisa

@AnnzSageflower7

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: BookWormV
This is so short but it is packing such a powerful punch! Those feelings - shock, disappointment and immense hurt! And the portrayal, the way it is written is pure WOW! Hats off woman!

Keep writing!

-V

Thank you ! Nakuul's eyes does things to my heart really. What a scene that was.. ❤️

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Anisa

@AnnzSageflower7

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: asya34
... because I am sadistic and want Shivvay to know how it feels when the shoe is on the other foot, lets for arguments sake say Annika said,"Yes,I will", to Daksh 😉
What scene do you think would play out ?
Just listening to Daksh proclaim loudly that he loved Annika made him 'pitch' his phone so hard that it would have put the leading baseball player to shame.
Then his expression, upon asking her to marry on Daksh's behalf, was somewhere between wanting to watch the horror show and closing your eyes till that the scary scene would end.
Later in his room he resembled a caged lion - just the bars were missing to complete the look. I was surprised he was rubbing his temples not his chest.
So this plays out when she walks away in a huff without answering ... I wish I could see what would happen if she did say yes or at least that she would consider getting to know him better...
sigh! Stone Singh Oberoi is crumbling and how

I know we want to punish SSO , but they never said it would be painful for us too 😭

He felt awful to say those things , knowing half confidently that she has feelings for him. He may deny his own, but he didn't wish to hurt her. His expression showed his misery . 😭

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Anisa

@AnnzSageflower7

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: smitar
Beautiful!

Thank you ! ❤️

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Manonidz

@Manonidz

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Posted: 8 years ago

Shivay biggest sore point was ' she just went' ...😆...Yes, No or what ? she left it to his imagination 😆..the moment he said ' shaadi karogi, he knew it ...Raita phail gya hai 😆...samatane ka time Anika ne diya nahi aur ab Shivay ko michi michi hogi Anika-Daksh ko dekh ke😆

On a serious note, I wish Anika says 'yes' and Shivay breaks bit by bit like Anika was when he got engaged to Tia in front of her 🤢

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TheTroubleMaker

@TheTroubleMaker

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Posted: 8 years ago

Copy pasting from a similar pov I wrote on HS thread yesterday...he really did converse through his eyes yesterday😆

just rewatched dat scene n OMG Shivay's expressions 😆 Can't get over it 😆

He was asking Shadi karogi...Daksh se...will u marry...him but facial expressions were like No Anika No...m not serious,...just say No...u can't say a yes Anika...and just so that she doesn't misunderstand and ends up saying a yes, he clarifies Shadi with Daksh 😆 Billu is such a goner 😆

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 8 years ago

Haiyee that was so beautifully written❤️...sad to see billuji like this but really felt for annika...not again yaar she would hv been thinking...why does he always do this to me ...give me hope when i didnt even expect any and then to bring it all crashing down...again...but yeah this time shivaay had a taste of his own medicine too...but yeah i am partial to billuji n cant see him suffering like that either...but whether daksh is positive or negative i seriously hope shivaay n annika break out of their resigned state n fight for each other...

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swetha2010

@swetha2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#10

Justifies being silent and get bothered by hers

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