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Poor Billu ji looked bleak. He stood like a hopeful young man, wanting to give his handpicked gift to the girl he fancied. He had never picked out an outfit before , felt the stress of it. How do you dress someone so beautiful ?

All Annika needs to do is walk by , and his heart would pound and all he can see is her. She may not notice him at all, but he always knew. He knew what he said before , it sounds dumb even to his own ears now.

She is everything he didn't know he wanted. Now he is addicted.

So he lingers by with his small box of hope . And spots her , but her attention is rapt upon another. A more bold and urgent man, seems to have spotted his prize and was determined to pounce.

The same prize he was refusing to catch for so long. Now with a competitor , he feels like a loser who wasted a head start .

He was suddenly on the spot. The gift becomes something important. Her eyes light up at the idea that he bought her something.

Is this for me? You chose it for me? How sweet... her eyes were saying. Her little smile made his heart float off the ground. Shyly he hands it to her but it's yanked by the interfering bull, stomping all over the sweet meeting between a shy suitor and his lovely butterfly.

The buffoon decides to give his gift to her.. and he felt his face fall in disappointment. His moment with her was gone. He was about to leave when she spoke softly.

Thank you .. for the gift . ...

Softly spoken , just for his ears. His face reddened with pleasure, as his heart swelled with a feeling he couldn't name..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That moment was so beautiful!! I felt so bad for him...he had wanted to give her that gift, personally and have a private moment with her and it was spoiled by that idiot!!😕
He even tried to cover it up by saying the gift was from hos family instead of just him! I absolutely loved Ani's shy smile and blush and her thanks to him really made his heart swell!!😳
(But seriously, the wrong brother broke someone's nose today!!I wished it were Shivaay!!)
Edited by chottekikhushi - 8 years ago
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So true. He looked like a diffident boy, not a mature man. So hopeful, so needy of an encouraging word, a sign that she liked him, was happy with him.
If the gift is the dress she was seen wearing in the spoiler, I wonder what was going through his head when he picked it!!!!!!LOL!

His shock when he saw Daksh holding her hand and complimenting her, his relief when she walked away, his total unravelling by the pool, his shock and disbelief at daksh talking of Anika having done magic on him!

I can almost find it in my heart to pity Billuji. LOL!

Awesome post. Loved reading it. Thank u.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Did you notice Shivay's disappointment that Anika took the gift from Daksh and not from him 😳 in his twisted way, she is giving the privileges he never got !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awww this was so beautifully written❤️
wonderful post👏
thank you😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You don't know how much I miss your daily updates of the episode with your famous Gifs you used to do in QH forum.

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Loved that ShivIka scene and your analysis too 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such true words... i also felt same...
Did u noticed before D saw the gift shivay was holding it tightly sgainst his heart... as if its a holy fragile box which shouldnt get touched even by wind... he kept it safe and sound for her.
Waisay agar D na dakhta tu teen ager shivay pata nahi gift day bhi pata ya ghabrahat main day hi nahi pata..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww that is such a beautiful write up 😛 ... that scene was just adorable and u penned it down so beautifully 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: chottekikhushi

That moment was so beautiful!! I felt so bad for him...he had wanted to give her that gift, personally and have a private moment with her and it was spoiled by that idiot!!😕

He even tried to cover it up by saying the gift was from hos family instead of just him! I absolutely loved Ani's shy smile and blush and her thanks to him really made his heart swell!!😳
(But seriously, the wrong brother broke someone's nose today!!I wished it were Shivaay!!)


Sorry for the delayed reply. It was past midnight for me 😊..

What struck me was Shivaay is really gentle on the inside. This feeling for Annika is making him vulnerable, and I wish it didn't. On the other hand, Annika is not a manipulator so she wouldn't okay with his feelings.

I hope he saw he discomfort she felt with Daksh, that she wasn't all mooney eyed over the eager beaver. In fact , she keeps untangling her hand and scampering away. He looks and appears dangerous, far too fast for comfort.

but what is Daksh doing really?

He appears to be playing a 2 prong plot: One for Annika and another for Shivaay. Superflirtatious and borderline harassing Annika, and badgering Shivaay with his so-called infatuation with her.

Daksh's target here is not just Annika, but Shivaay also. Some kind of a nasty set up is going on by Tia and Daksh. First Creepy flirtations, then Horror movie scares, with cameras around. I have a bad feeling about this all.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: smitar

So true. He looked like a diffident boy, not a mature man. So hopeful, so needy of an encouraging word, a sign that she liked him, was happy with him.

If the gift is the dress she was seen wearing in the spoiler, I wonder what was going through his head when he picked it!!!!!!LOL!

His shock when he saw Daksh holding her hand and complimenting her, his relief when she walked away, his total unravelling by the pool, his shock and disbelief at daksh talking of Anika having done magic on him!

I can almost find it in my heart to pity Billuji. LOL!

Awesome post. Loved reading it. Thank u.


Thank YOU smitar ..❤️
" diffident " was the exact word I was cracking my head for last night ! Spot on.

As much as it is endearing, I don't like to see Shivaay vulnerable. Now that hug in the SBS segments, is out of this world beautiful .....

Agreed, I really hope that revealing outfit wasn't what he chose for her.. Looks like what Tia would wear. Omkara had better taste I must say..

I hope his Shivaay's eagle eyes saw that Annika wasn't buying into the whole Daksh charm. She is not attracted in the least, and she's quite focused in completing her job (getting Shivaay married) and not trying to catch a husband.

Did you notice that Tia and Daksh are targeting both Shivaay and Annika ? Something's up there ..
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