SS - Darkhast - Chapter 1 Page 3 - Page 3

Wow, I'm really curious as to the arrangement Shivaay and Annika have . . what turn of events saw her giving him a loan?

Honestly when i read the prologue i was really interested to know how the story goes from shivaay changing his ideology from the Naam koon khandan thing to accepting her as she is...

Loving it!! You write humour and romantic chemistry/intensity both so very well! Heart gave a leap at picturising Shivay tease his beloved so...

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

will do... or at least will try... to.. i am not very good at this... though i suppose it is like cycling. It may just come back to me..

Superb starting .
Love the concept.
I want to know how shivaay lose everythung and what tht deal is mentioned.how tia and shivaay part.where is the family?
So,pz continue soon.
Thanks 👏

Originally posted by: itzanya32

awsm update...

loved there fight and at last sahil's words...hahaha...

just loved it...

do continue soon...

Thank you so much

will do... hopefully i shall update with regular frequency.

@ Arhiipkknd - i do like to create mystery whenever i can. How he lost it something i shall go in reverse..

For those who have not figured out I have gone 5 years ahead and i see questions popping up... so yes i shall provide logic to my reasoning as well..

I shall be working backwards or forwards or jump from flash back to current... i am not known for my linear writing . hope you all have patience to take this journey with me.

I do have basic plot line and of course i am taking my cues from the series. I may add my bit or other characters. Also, will bring in family.. and what is happening to them in my parallel world.

Background story will come out as part of a flash back or incident remembered or i dont know yet. I write as I feel the story.

Some of you might know me in that space as well.

I want to thank each one of you who has taken time out to read and comment.

It feels good to write again. Will definitely try an entertain you all. Do leave your feedback with what is working and what is not.


@jarir2010 - Thank you... stick around i shall be giving answers to all the questions you have in your mind slowly and steadily.

Just read this!

@ Twerping.. thank you will try and infuse humour as much as i can. and chemistry intensity is something i always have done... infact sometimes it is difficult to curb.

@ isensedyou... thanks... for me that khoon khandan bit is something of the conflict i am going to address in my FF/ss. Also will deal with her conflicts inner and external. that is what this is all about. I am just giving my twist to the tale created by Gul.

@Annzsageflower7 you know what happened to the curious cat... it killed it and my line is that satisfaction brought it back.

so i shall be trying to appease your curiosity though not too quickly

@Meetpremeet - i shall be unfolding the layers for sure. hope you stick around to find that out.

@mystic river - Thank you... do read and give feedback going further as well. I dig that.

@yeh kya ho raha hai... well to answer in your style yeh... woh hai.. aur woh i hope aapko pasand aaye.. it is a my take on what I see story giving me and the conflict there in which i resolve in my head and then share it with you guys.. hopefully that will entertain and engage you enough to interact with me.

Originally posted by: geet.a

Just read this!

Liking it loads Vrush!

hey thanks for coming here and reading this. do give feedback going forward as well.

i believe i have rusted. And you are not disappointed at my efforts to start writing again.