OMKARA FF TERE SANG YARA part 3 on pg 6 7/12 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb
Continue soon thanks for pm



thanks dear
will update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: kashvi19

awsm update didu

this girl dharvi is totally opposite to om
waiting for poles apart love story
update soon
thnks for pm



thanks dear
yup both om n dharvi is pole apart
will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: shdiksha

Amazing part...

Thanks for pm...


thank-you so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: grownup

amazingly awesome👏👏👏...loved the comparison you made between dadis wishes and the lifestyle of the girl instored for om...pls continue thanks for the pm👍🏼


thanks dear

i am glad u like it

will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 2

dadi invite pundit ji to fix date of puja n to show kundli of omru n anshi.

pu - bahut acchi jodi hai ramjine mila kar bheji hai upar se. puja ka muhurat 3 din bad hai.

shivika take his blessings

da - ye.rudra ki kundli hai.

pu - bahut acchi kundli hai. sabka pyar or sath milta hai or milta rahega,

da - ye omkara ki kundli hai.

pu - kundli se pata chalta hai ,ye balak bahut pavitra atma hai. par jindgi mai bahut utar chadaw aaye hai ,or aage bhi bahut kuch hone wala hai.

all get tesed.

pu - chinta mat kijiye jo hota hai uska koi karan hota hai. ye baccha har jung jeetega,

da - par om bahut seedha ya yun kamjor hai.

pu - kundli dekhkar lagta hai ye yodhha hai. shayad wo khud abhi kabiliyat nahi pehchanta. par jaldi hi pehchanega.

scene shift

one girl is standing in a room with a man of age 48.

gi - maine apse keh diya na mr kashyap mai india nahi jaungi. to nahi jaungi.

mr k - tum india bhi aaogi or jo mai kehunga wo bhi karogi.

gi - in ur dreams

she make face.,.

mr k - mujhe sapno ko hakikat banana accha se aata hai or baap hu mai tumhara tamiz se bat karo. lo ye dekh lo

he forward her a file.

scene shift india


dadi n trio ob bros

da - maine tum sabko ye batane k liye bulaya hai ki parso humne puja rakhi hai shivay or anika k liye.us din sab free rehna tum dono ko bhi puja mai baithna hai.

om - ji dadi. mai ghar hi rahunga.

rud - dadi puja k bad ek party rakhunga mai in my fav place

dadi hold his ear.

da - khotya kabhi to party ladki ya protein shake k alawa soch liya kar . teri padai khatam hone wali hai ab

rud - dadi aap par na us sumo ka bahut asar ho gya hai, usi ki tarah batien kar rhi hai, uski tarah moti mat ho jana

omshi - rudra shut up

rest part tonight


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Edited by sur1911 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
awesome part...loved it a lot... Adaa suits the character, good choice...
waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
part 2b

two days later

its puja in ob mansion

anika is giving instructions to event manager about puja prep n all things n also iinstructing caters

ani - or haa bhaisahab khane mai teekha kam rakhna dadi ki tabiyat kharab ho jati hai, or aap bhaiya ye peele wale ful lagao koi puja mai neele ful lagata hai.or

da - bas bas anika beta ,tu ab organizer nahi ob khandan ki badi bahu hai. wo apna kam kar lenge tu ready ho ja ye puja tere liye hi rakhi hai.

ani - dadi bahu hone ke nate hi to sab dekh rahi hu, or agar koi gadbad ho gayi to humare hi pariwar ki naak kategi. or aapko to pata hai billu ji ki naak kitni badi hai

both anika n dadi laugh

pin - ohh my mata anika tu abhi tak ready nahi hui

anika get shocked to see pinki talking with her, after marriage she first time talk with her like family member

ani - ji ji aunty abhi ready ho kar aati hu

pi - aunty nahi beta mere shivay ki tarah mom bula

anika look at her

pi - beta mujhe tujhse koi problem nahi hai. balki mujhe to tu bahut pasand hai.

n she tell all her doubts n worry

an - thanks mom mere bare mai itna sochne k liye. maine apni maa ko nahi dekha par wo hoti to apki hi tarah sochti.

pi - oye kisne kha teri ma nahi mai hu na. or mere hote hue tujhe koi pareshan to kare.

both anika n pinky hug n dadi look at both lovingly .

1 hour later

whole family except anshi present at hall where puja will be performed. all eye catch the view of newly Weded couple anshi. shi has wore a red n golden shervani and anika wore a beautiful golden n red lehnga. both are looking pretty n perfect togather.

omru join anshi n take them till puja.puja get start. anshi sit in puja with omrupri beside them.

after puja anika is introducing with all as badi bahu of ob family. tej call om. om ddon't want to go but its anshi function so he ddon't want to spoil it . so he go to tej,

tej - aao om beta. inse milo ye mere purane dost or ob empire ke business associate mr anand kashyap. london mai rehte the abhi india shift hue hai

om touch his feet n he bless him n glad to find om so sanskari,,

ana- nice to meet you beta. inse milo meri beti dharvi

om look at the girl.a girl in mid 20 . very beautiful . she has wore a pink salwar kameej with minimal makeup n accessories . looking very pretty .but her face show no emotion he think.

om - hii miss dharvi

ana - dharvi om tumse hi keh raha hai.

n he press dharvi hand.

dh - hello mr omkara.

taj - tum dono batien karo hum aate hai .

they left omvi

om - so aap london mai rehti thi.

dh - hmm

om - india first time ayi hai

dh - nahi

om mv ajeeb ladki hai sirf ha ya nahi bol rahi hai

om - aapne kuch lengi.waiter

n he take fruit juice n give it to dharvi

dh mv ohh no ab mujhe ye fruit juice peena hoga. i hate you mr kashyap kaha fasa diya mujhe aisa lag raha hai koi serial chal raha hai.

om - hope you are comfortable her

dh - ji.ap or guest ko attend kar sakte hai. i am ok.

om - ok. plz be comfortable n enjoy party.

he leave

om mv thank god usne kaha jaiye warna mai use kaise jhelta. ajeeb ladki hai.or mr oberai mujhe uske sath fasa gaye.

dh mv thank goodness wo gaya .pak gayi thi mai of being goody goody . uff ..n she ask waiter to bring some vodka..


she mix it in fruit juice n drink.

tbc...


precap :

tej - om tumhe dharvi se shadi karni hogi.

om - apko aisa q laga ki mai apki bat manunga mr oberai

tej - ye documents dekh lo fir apna jawab dena.

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ana - dekho dharvi agar oberai khandan mai kisi k bhi samne tumhari sachchai aayi to tum janti ho mai kya kar sakta hu.

dh - aap ye thik nahi kar rahe

ana - ohh don't teach me.or get ready for marriage

n omvi helpless face
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarletBeauty

awesome part...loved it a lot... Adaa suits the character, good choice...

waiting for the next update...


thanks
glad u like it
its updated
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Amazing update...thnx 4 pm n continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Hi...it's really nice...can u PM...please...

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