Anahita-Priyanka-Ranveer SS: Ankahee *teaser for ch3-pg4*

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Posted: 8 years ago
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My first PriVeer story.. Please read it and comment on it..PMs will be sent later on..

P.S:

* Anahita and Ranveer are childhood friends. Anahita loves him dearly but Ranveer loves Priyanka Singh Oberoi,who was a batch junior in their college in London.

** Anahita,Ranveer and Priyanka are from rich backgrounds.

*** Anahita is an orphan here.. She was brought up by Rahat Bi,her Daijaan.

**** This story is totally fictional and is not like the PriVeer track in the show. Ranveer is a positive guy here and also a police officer like in the show.

***** Omkara is 3 years senior of Anahita and she considers him as her elder brother and guide and confidant.

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Prologue:

"I am really sorry,Anahita.. But.. I dont love you.." Ranveer replied.

"Meri feelings ka kya,Ranveer? Tumhare liye mere dil mein jo pyaar hai.. Uska kya? Mere dil ka kya jo tumse be intehaan pyaar karta hai?" Anahita asked teary eyed.

"Yeh sab infatuation hai.. Waqt chalte chala jayega.. Please samjha karo.." Ranveer tried to make her understand.

"Kyun kiya tumne aisa,Ranveer? Mere dil ko torke tumhe kya mila? Life mein pehli kisi se sacche dil se aur puri imaandari se pyaar kiya.. Tumse pyaar kiya.. Aisa silah milega tumse pyaar karne ke badle.. Usse toh accha hota ki main mar jau.." Anahita broke down in tears.

It pained Ranveer to see his best friend in this state because of him.. But he loved Priyanka and he cannot be disloyal to her.

"I am really sorry,Anahita.. Tumhe mujhse bhi accha koi milega future mein.. God bless you!" Ranveer replied and left the place forever.

Anahita kept on crying in that position for her heartbreak. She just couldnt digest the pain..

3 years later: London.

Ms.Martha comes inside a large office cabin with the cordless phone in her hand. She cleared her voice and handed the phone to the owner.

"Hello.. Who is this?"

"Ana.. Bacche.. Kaisi hai tu?" a voice came up from that side.

"Om bhaiya.. Kaise hai aap? Ghar mein sab kaise hai? Sabko mera Pranaam boliyega." Anahita replied with a smile.

"Zaroor boldunga.. Pehle yeh bol.. Wahaan pe sab kaisa chal raha hai? Tera business aur baki sab?" Om asked.

"Sab accha chal raha hai,Bhagwan ke lakh lakh shukr se.. Thori der pehle hi do do takeovers karke aayi hu.. Aap batao?" Anahita replied.

"Very Good.. Anyways.. Tujhe yahaan.. India mein aana parega.. Meri chhoti behen ki shaadi hai.. Issi mahine ke anth mein.. Saare gharwale tujhe yahaan pe chahte hai.. Please aaja.. tu aayegi na?" Om asked.

"Maine kabhi aapki koi bhi baat taali hai,Bhaiya? Zaroor aaungi.. Main tickets aur flight details confirm karke aapko bhejdungi raat ko.. Bhaiya.. Main aapse baad mein baat karti hu.. Ek important meeting keliye jaana hai.. Thik hai.. Bye bhaiya.." Anahita replied and cut the call.

Precap: Anahita arrives in India.

Index:

prologue: pg1
ch1: pg2
ch2 : pg3
teaser for ch3 : pg4
Edited by Annika_Ishqbaaz - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yay! So excited to see a PriVeer story! Will be back soon ...
Till then...
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OK, so Anahita has an unrequited love for Ranveer. But is Priyanka getting married to Ranveer or someone else? If she is marrying someone else, he would be feeling the same hurt that the OC felt on being rejected. But maybe Anahita will develop something more for O, who I am guessing is not her actual brother. In that case, we shall see Anahita and Ranveer understanding each other and helping each other woo their respective loves.
But all that is beside the point. Loved the beginning!
Edited by twerping - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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great awesome prologue, so looks like we are gonna get a love square of sorts with anihta, ranveer,priyanka and om. very exciting to see how things unfold and see how they end up with one another.

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Edited by bila_a - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bila_a

res, cant wait to read


The usual suspects are here! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Woww
So I'm back on India Forums
Just for Priveer ❤️
Loved the Prologue
Hopefully Prinku is getting married to ACP only
Waiting for the story to unfold soon 😳
Update soonish and plz pm me
Love Kriti:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: KRITII

Woww

So I'm back on India Forums
Just for Priveer❤️
Loved the Prologue
Hopefully Prinku is getting married to ACP only
Waiting for the story to unfold soon😳
Update soonish and plz pm me
Love Kriti:)



thank you..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: twerping

Yay! So excited to see a PriVeer story! Will be back soon ...

Till then...
Res
Unres
OK, so Anahita has an unrequited love for Ranveer. But is Priyanka getting married to Ranveer or someone else? If she is marrying someone else, he would be feeling the same hurt that the OC felt on being rejected. But maybe Anahita will develop something more for O, who I am guessing is not her actual brother. In that case, we shall see Anahita and Ranveer understanding each other and helping each other woo their respective loves.
But all that is beside the point. Loved the beginning!



thanks for ur comment.. story will unfold really soonish.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good Good Dear! Ranveer Loves Priyanka but she's unaware of this... hope they'll meet soon.Update soon
Edited by Arshi- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ah a story on PreVeer nice prologue😊 pm me when u update plz😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arshi-

Good Good Dear! Ranveer Loves Priyanka but she's unaware of this... hope they'll meet soon.Update soon


Ranveer n Priyanka loves each other but Priyanka doesnt know about Anahita.

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