One Shot:How He Knew..(Rumya) Completed-19th Oct

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Mast. Ekdum mast. U have captured both of them so well.

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swaram

@swaram

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Oh that was both a cute and intense one shot. Loved how Rudra felt guilty and was restless till he met her. I guess we will have to wait and see if they explore this side of Rudra in the show, all possessive and angry. We have seen his caring and sensitive side, was nice to see his serious side when it came to matters of his heart. Great story telling!👍🏼

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

thank you dear for completing this today🤗

it was really awesome⭐️⭐️
loved this😃
Rudra was too good and what with threatening Soumya to get his way😆... he was fun😆
soumya throwing a few fists was too cute😳 and that kiss was awww❤️
haha and the reaction from the friends' was epic😆

i sincerely wish you write more (ahem... romantic)RumYa in future😆
take care😊

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@-happilyunknown

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Oh my i was gone for one day and i come back to see a RUMYA OS from you🤗 I am seriously shipping this couple and now you have just made me even more of a fangirl than i ever was.

The other side of Rudy that you showed..The one which showed that he is after all an Oberoi was so so hard hitting. I literally went :O when he said all those things. But what can a guy do when situations get as desperate as this. And the kiss awwh <3❤️

Thank you for always being an amazing writer❤️ Waiting for more from you <3

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

awesome..very well written..👏

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Awesome

OMG! Rudra in his brother and father mode was a treat to read. He knows how to manipulate and turn tables in his favor.

Do write more on rudra and soumya.

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Awesome!! this was pure perfection. Oh I want to read more about this pair from you! Rudra's innocence was so well brought out here and Soumya's circumspection!

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

I am a big fan of everything you write and this os was no exception!

Rudra and soumya are both characters who are cute but can be intense too ...I want such a scene to be there in the actual serial in the future!!

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Ally

@Allyson

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Why do you torture us by calling things a one shot and then not giving us the satisfaction of reading the end? This is the worst form of torture.

I love this. I love how you write Rudra. Jaisa bhi hai, he has heart.

Please update this soon.

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Navin

@napstermonster

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Allyson
Why do you torture us by calling things a one shot and then not giving us the satisfaction of reading the end? This is the worst form of torture.
I love this. I love how you write Rudra. Jaisa bhi hai, he has heart.

Please update this soon.

Hi! Umm, its actually complete, this one! Part 1 and 2 are all there is. It is a one shot as it is one story, but I posted in two parts because of the long length--its easier to post anything over 3000 words in parts on india forums or it messes with the formatting. Anyways, this one is complete, so I hope you found it non torturous..😆

Edited by napstermonster - 8 years ago

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