1MDT SS SHIVIKA : UNNAMED:par16pg 19 update :14/11/2016 - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

105

Views

36.1k

Users

16

Likes

436

Frequent Posters

strangerthings thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#51
nicely written n well portayed emotions.. shivaay must be feeling frustrated as no one got his opinion.. plj continue soon..
strangerthings thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ISensedYou

I think its tia or pinky who is behind anikas decision

seems like that
SAKIVIAM thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#53
no buddy
next update is coming soon.

I expect atleast some lines for review plz
floral thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#54
awesome updates dear
loved i very much
i really hope shivika reunites soon
plzzz do continue soon
SAKIVIAM thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#55
PART 7

After few minutes Om calls back again and in conference.

Ru "Bhayya soumya chalee gayee,"(did she leave.)

Om "Hum ek hee flight mey jaana hain woj akeley kaisey jaa saktee hain."(We have to go by same flight how can she go alone.)

J "Tum bhee Soumya sey mafee mang rahen hon?"

Ru "Han Anika dee ney mujhey help larney key liyen maa liyan who help karegi."(Anika dee told she will help me.)

Om "So hum topic pey aaye.Hum yahan hain kee Shivay sey milney key baad aur daadi sey milney kee pehley kyaa huan."(So lets come to the topicwhat happened after meeting shivay and before meeting daadi.)

Ru "Soumya kahan hain abh."(Where is Soumya now.)

Om "Flight ek ghanta lae hain who ladies counter mey wait kar rahen hain."(Flight is delayed by an hour she is waiting near ladies hall.)

Daadi "Kyaa huan uss raat ko fir."(What happened that night.)

Ru interrupted in middle "Ussney Aapko dekha tho nahen naa."(She didn't see you right.)

Om "Who mujhey kaisey dekhegee Shivay ussko drop karney gayan thaa aur main ghar mey thaa ,Waisey mujhey dekhney sey kyaa farq padatha hain."(How can she Shivay went to drop her and I was home that night ,even if she see mee how would it affect .)

Ru "Main Soumya kee baath kar rahan hun."(I am speaking of Soumya.)

Om "Duffer stick to the topic,waisey who pehley sey hee yahen thee mujhsey pehley bhee mainey ussey dekha waiting hall jaathey huenn ussney nahen."(She was hear ahead of me I came late and saw her going to waitng hall mshe didn't see me."

Ru "Bhayya aap kuch samjhey ."(Did you understand something.)

OM "Kyaa?"

Ru "Hum sooch rahen they kee uss beech mey kyaa huan ,"(we were thinking what happened in between.)

J "But what if jho bhee that bahuth pehley sey hee thaa but uss samay nahen huan hon."(What if it was always present and was not there only for that time.)

Ru "Mom aisee kyaa ho saktee hain."(What could be that.)

J "Mujhey nahen patha?"(I don't know)

Daadi "Jho bhee hon who abh bhee hain issliyen abhe bhee Anika rukh rahen hain abhee bhee ussey dar rahen hain."(What ever it is it is there even now,that is stopping anika even now scaring her.)

J "Hum Anika key baarey mey kyaa jaanthey hain."(What do we know about Anika.)

Ru "Saloni Event co. mey event manager hain ,5% shares usskey naam pey hain,ek bhaai hain,aur hard working hain."

Ru "Bahuth friendly hain kabheee bhee doosrey ke bura nahen chaahthee hain,Always helps others"

Ru "Sahil key parents marney key baad ussko young age sey hee kaam karkey kamaana pada for Sahil,Sahil sey bahuth connected hain."

J "Yeh sabh main jaanthee hun aur kuch hain ."

Daadi "Sahil usska aslee bhaai nahen hain,Anika ko Sahil key parents ney adopt kiyya hain."(Sahil is not her real brother,she was adopted by Sahil's parents.)

J "She was an orphan."

Daadi "Orphanage mey bhee rehchukee hain."(she stayed in orphanage too.)

J "Matlab who apnee parents key saath bhee thee ,unkon kuch huan usskey baad ussey orphanage mey daala gayya hain."(She used to live with her parents then got to shift to orphanage ."

Daadi "Mainey kabhee poocha nahen but han sach hain."(I never asked but it could be true.)

J "Aur ?"

Ru "Mainey kabhee suna hain who humesha apna naam Anika hee bathaathee hain surname kabhee bhee nahen bathaaya kissey ko patha bhee nahen hain." (I heard she never tells her surname she always uses Anika as sole no surname.)

J "Shaayad ussko patha nahen hoga?"

Om "Then she could have used surname of her adopted,"

J "Who incidentally avoid kar rahen hain.Aur kuch."

J "Who Shivay sey pehley kasiey thee."(How was she with Shivay.)

Om "Straight forward,ussko jho lagtha tha who kardethee thee kissey sey darthee nahen."(She is straight forward what ever she feels she keeps on doing.)

Ru "Jho baathey hum bhee bhayya sey na kehpathey who kehdetee thee."

Om "Ussko kissey cheez ka darr he nahen hain."(She isn't scared of anything.)

Daadi "Andhera ."(Darkness.)

Ru "Kyaa Andhera daadi ?"

Daadi "Ussko andhera sey darr hain ." (she is scared of darkness)

Ru "Sabko darr lagtha hain .Ussmey nayan kyaa hain."(everyone does.what is new in it.)

Daadi "who usskey pass bhee nahen jaathee wussko bahuth darr hain andhera sey."(She had more very much.)

Om "Daadi are you sure about this ,particularly."

Daadi "Han ,hummesha usska koi cheez mey chaand hotha hain."(and some how she keeps moon near by.)

Om "Got it."

Ru "Bhayya kyaa huan?"(What happened?"

Om "DARR ."(fear )

J "Kyaa huan om?"(what happened om)

Om "Andhera,Darkness arts mey bahuth complex cheezon ko explain karney mey use karthey hain."(Darkness represents darkest and deepest truths in arts)

Om "Anika ka zindagee bhe aisa hee hain .hum kuch nahen jaanthey hai usskey baarey mey lekin jitna bhee jaantha hain there was nothing posoitive in it."(We know nothing about anika as much we know there is nothing positive.)

Om "Usska parents sey door hona pada ,I guess they are no more ,fir jabh orphanage mey join kliyya gayan thaa fir Sahil key parents ney ussey adopt kiyya they are no more."(Ussney apna surname hee chod diyya ,who ever hold that name are no more.issliyen kissey ka naam rakhna nahen chaahthee thee issliyen bass Anika aur kuch nahe,")

Om "Usskey life mey almost kabhee khushiya thee hee nahen."(There was never any happiness in her life.)

Om "She lived her whole life in constant fear chotey chotey cheezon mey apney khushiyan dhoondthey huen."(searching for happiness in small small things.)

Om "Ru tumhey yaad hain jab hum pyaar key baarey mey discuss kar rahen they ,she wanted some one to love her. But ussey bharosa nahen hain usskey kismet mey pyaar hain."(Ru do you remember when we were speaking of love she wanted some one to love her but she was sure love is not written in her fate.)

Everyone shocked as OM was speaking out .

Om "Who darr thee mom usskey zindagee mey hummesha darr thaa every moment of her life was in fear."

Om "Jho bhee ussey bharosa de sakey they ,un sabko who kho chukee hain."(She lost everyone who gave her hope.)

J "Fear of fear."

Om "Jabh bhee ussko darr door hethey jaa rahan thaa who kisey na kissey ko kho rahen thee."(she was loosing some one when ever she was loosing fear.)

Daadi "Aur Shivay."

Every one got silent and were in tears.

Ru "Jabh bhee who bhayya key saath thee ussey koi darr nahen thee siva bhayya ka."(when ever she was with bro she didn't had any fear except of him.)

J "Issliyen door bhagee jaa rahna hain aur Shivaay ko bhee door bhej rahen hain."(She is running aways and sending him as far as possible.)

Ru " Aur kissey ko yeh baath nahen patha."(No one knows it)

J "Kitna pyaar kar rahen hogee who Shivay sey jho ussney yeh kadam uthaaya,uss raath bhee yahen huan when Shivay left fear took her down."

Daadi "Abh bhee hain ussey thodrahen hain andhar sey."(She is scared now also.)

J "Its surprise who bhee zinda kaisey hain. Koi aur hotha tho marr hee jaatha."(I don't know how she is alive,anyone else would have been dead,)

Om "Sahil ,d=bass usskey future key wajah sey.)

Ru "Anika dee key saath hee aisa kyon huan."(Why did it happen to her only.)

Daadi "Sabkey rehtey huen bhee who hummesah akelee he thee, apney khushiyon sey ladthey huen unko door bhejtey huen."(She was always anone fighting woth her happiness to send it far.)

J "Humey sabsey pehley Anika ka dill mey yeh darr mitaana hoga."(we have to remove this fear)

Om "Momusski zindagee key har pall mey darr hee hain hum usey mita nahen saktey."(every second in her life is fear we can't remove it)

Daadi "Hum sey nahen hoga .(we can't do it)"

Soumya "Ek insaan hain ."(There is one man)

Daadi "Soumya tum.Tum kabh aaye" (When did you come ,)

Soumya "Jabh Anika dee ka baath ho rahan thaa ."(When talks were going on on her)

Soumya "Bass badey bhayya aur kissey sey nahen hoga."(only big bro can no one else can)

Ru "Who sahee keh rahen hain uss samay bhee Bhayya par bharosa hee ussko darr sey aagey legaya and everything happened."(She is telling right ,then also trust on him made her to go beyond fear.)

Soumya "Tho hum bhayya ko batha saktey hain naa."(We can tell it to him na.)

Daadi "Nahen kehsaktey ,hum kehbhee nahen paayengey kehengey bhee tho vishwaas nahen karega."(We can't even if we tell he won't believe.)

Soumya "Koun kahega tho bhayya manega."(If who tells he will believe)

Daadi " Anika."

Daadi "Billon ki dil kee ghaav ka marham Anika key pass hain,Aur Anika ka billu key pass."(Medicine for Billu's wounds are with Anika and Anika's with Billu.)

J "Aur eh chaahiyen tho doosra Khulna hoga usskey liyen bhee doosra ka khulna hogsa."(For one to unlock we need another key and for that to open we need the first key)

Daadi "Abh yeh ladaayi unlogon ko ek doosrey key liyen ladna hoga ,yeh ISQHBAAAZI unko doosrey key liyen karna hee hoga."(They have to fight this battle for other ,they have to to win this love battle together.)

SAKIVIAM thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#56
I am expecting replies from you on updates.
I you didn't give it indicates I failed as a writer to get involved in story.
Sorry for my failure
rinku95 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#57
excellent
how did somya come?
continue soon
Tharunisa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Hey great updates yaar, u updated 2 to 3 chapters in a day... Really liked u made jhanvi also into the conference call... Looks like soumya spotted om, interesting rudra s gonna get from her for tricking her today come...
N thanks for explaining how rudra came into business along with shivaay without showing any tantrums... It's logical...
Now looking forward for more😊
ArhiIPKKND thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Interesting angle u r proposing here...so shivaay has to get rid of her fear of fear...if he stops to listen that is...i want to c how this unravels...
strangerthings thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#60
the fear of fear... that was an interesting update. both shivaay and anika are wounded and both of them need each other to heal .. equals on every front they need to do it bcoj no one else could do it for them they both have to trust on each other.. anika's past is really a mystery n whatever has happened in her life has taken away her hope n dreams... she needs someone to start hoping n dreaming again .. that someone being shivaay.. only if they would have handled things maturely things would have been better.. very beautiful n insight ful update.. u threw the light on their characters very apt.. continue soon please

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".