ShivIka Drabble: Regret (Based on Precap)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys! I was feeling a little bit inspired by the precap so I typed up something on my phone...I've written this in like 5 minutes, its probably crappy, please don't hate :')
It's about how Shivaay feels after he finds out Anika heard everything!
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Shit. He didn't even have to turn to know she was there. He felt it, the same electricity that crackled through him every time she was in his vicinity. He stood, rooted to the spot, unable to meet her eyes. And when he finally did muster up the courage to gaze into those light brown eyes, stomach twisting within him, he felt stabbed, as though a thousand knives hit him at once. He saw the hurt of course, the hurt in her eyes was in itself a kick to his squirming gut, but he was hit a hundred times harder by the disappointment- she had come to expect better of him...and he had let her down. He only saw it for a few seconds though, before her face turned into an uncharacteristically blank mask. She sailed past him, head held high, calling out to the servants to hang up the cloth, Rudra already at her heels apologizing on his behalf. Om followed too, not before shooting him a look of severe disgust. She didn't acknowledge their apologies, merely smiling at Rudra bitterly and ruffling his hair, before leaving the room, his brothers in tow. It was different this time, he realized. She hadn't retaliated, hadn't spit flaming fire at him like she usually did with equally cruel accusations.

He was suddenly unable to speak, with a parched throat and a stomach swooping with dread and was overcome with the sudden urge to kick himself, hard.

Shit. Shit. Shit. He had really messed up.

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You can check out my other OS here (It's quite similar to the current track, angsty shaadi:)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishqbaaaz/4711229/shivika-os-ae-dil-hai-mushkil

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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow, this was fantastic👏👏
you should write more often😃
take care
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very well written :) You shuld think of writing an OS or SS :)

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fabulous dear
loved it very much
plzz do write more

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I really hope this comes true 😭 and he does feel guilty 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was a really good short snippet! You really should make it into a FF, that would be treat for us!
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Now his life is really ShiTia!
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Even I want Anika not to react in front of Shivay...shivay should himself feel guilty
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow. I hope Shivaay feels half of this guilt today too!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautifully written and seeing the scene again after reading your words made an altogether different impact...

SPOT ON...👏

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