AnShi OS--maan bhi jao--ft Oberoi family

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hiii to all my dear frnds
i know that i hv pending ss dear...
but i m here again with an OS
actually i was bored...and this came into my mind
so ended up writing it ...i really don't know whether it is good or bad
plzzz bear with me...do hv a look
no proof reading

so here we go...

MAAN BHI JAO

ShivIka and OmRuPri were in shivaay's room. Tension was clearly visible on there faces. Shivaay was moving back and forth and AniOmRuPri were standing. And anika suddenly said

Anika-"billu ji ab bataiye kya Karen"and shivaay stopped and looked at anika

Shivaay-"sooch toh raha hun"

Rudra-"aap adhe ghantey se aise hi chakkar kaat rahe Ho"

Om-"pyaar karne se pehle toh socha nahi ab toh kuch soocho"

Priyanka-"haan Bhaiya"

Shivaay-"soch toh raha hun yaar"

Rudra-"socho Bhaiya choti maa ko apke aur Anika di ke rishtey ke liye kaise manana hai"

Om-"nahin toh tum dono Ki gadi aage nahi bhadegi"

Priyanka-"haan Bhaiya, sab maan gye hai bas choti maa nahi maan rahin" and shivaay was listening to them silently

Anika-"billu ji kuch kijiye...nahi toh Ho gyi hamari shaadi"

Shivaay-"hamari shaadi toh hogi, aur mom bhi manne gi"

AniOmRuPri-"par kaise??"

Shivaay-"pata nahi..par manana padega"

Rudra-"ok toh Thik hai, choti maa manao mission on" and extended his hand and all kept their hand on his

ShiAniOmRuPri-"yes" and took their hands back

Rudra-"jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya" and shivaay glared at him and rudra ran out from the room

Om-"pyaar kiya koi chori nahi" and with that OmPri went out of the room and now Shivika was left alone and he thought to have some quality time with his lady love. But his lady love was having some other plan. She came close to him and shivaay smiled

Anika-"chup chup ke aanhe bharna kya" and ran from his room and shivaye smiled

Shivaay-"this girl" and suddenly he remembered about the mission

Shivaay(to himself)-"focus shivaay...tujhe mom ko manana hai" and went out of the room and found AniOmRuPri standing at some distance in the hall and also saw his mom sitting and signalled them thumbs up which means mission ON. Shivaay went to his mom

Shivaay-"mom maan jayiye na"

Pinky-"nahi" and stood up to go

Om-"maan bhi jayiye na"

Pinky-"nahi" and took few more step and rudra came in front of her

Rudra-"ladka aur ladki razi, phir bhi naa mane mummy ye zid naa chode ye dil ko tode"

Om-"kyu hone naa de banne naa de anika ko dulhan" and pinky stood there listening to their little changed song. Anika came to her

Anika-"maan bhi jayiye naa"

Priyanka-"haan maan bhi jayiye naa"

Pinky-"achha batao main kyu maanu"

Shivaay-"anika achhi ladki hai"

Om-"khana achha banati hai..sabka khayal rakhti hai"

Rudra-"sundar bhi hai"

Priyanka-"Vo perfect hai"and in the mean time dadi,tejvi,shakti also came there and saw the drama going on

Dadi-"aur sabse badi baat" and ShiAniOmRuPri and pinky turned in the direction of the voice

Dadi-"Ki Vo billu se bahut pyaar karti hai...kya sirf ye wajah kaafi nahi hai"

And now all in unison except anika

ShiOmRuPri,dadi,tejvi,shakti-"maan bhi jao" and Anika was looking with pleading eyes towards pinky. Pinky looked at every one and then smiled

Pinky-"thik hai...maan gyi main" and ShiAniOmRuPri ran and hugged pinky and after sometime they broke the hug

Shivaay-"thank you mom"

Pinky-"aaya bada thank yousss bolne wala" and hit him on his shoulder

Rudra-"iska matlab billu Ki shaadi hogi...billu ka sehra sajega..billu ghodi chadhega.."

And all broke into a great laugh.


thnx for reading it...hope u like it

and if not than thnx fr bearing it dear

do hit like and comment...


THANK YOU😊

Edited by angel_writer - 9 years ago

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SRKian thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was so cute ❤️ Hope we gt sth like dis in show 2 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww this was so sweet dear
I LOVED the way they all convinced Pinky❤️
As always I LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally,Oh My Maata maan gayi. Yay!!.
Manane ka tareeka was really unique and cute..
highlight was Rudra ka Billu Rap.. ahahah!!
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SRKian

It was so cute ❤️ Hope we gt sth like dis in show 2 😆


thnq fr such a comment
glad u loved it dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: skm27395

Ohy mata😉Awww😊


glad u loved it
thnx dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Angels...

Aww this was so sweet dear

I LOVED the way they all convinced Pinky❤️
As always I LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!


thnx dear fr such a comment
glad u loved it dear
thnq😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz

Finally,Oh My Maata maan gayi. Yay!!.
Manane ka tareeka was really unique and cute..
highlight was Rudra ka Billu Rap.. ahahah!!
thanks for the pm.


glad u loved it dear
and thnx fr such a comment
thnq

and u r wlcm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awwe such a cute os
would have loved to hear Shakti ,Tej and Jhanvi's opinion on Anika especially Tej's opinion😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hailaaa.. 😆 ...maan gyi..
Shivaay should give party to all...they had so much of contribution.. 😆
Cutee oss! 😉
Edited by xerxes12 - 9 years ago

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