The Masquerade (AnShi/ShivIka FF)- Epilogue UPDATED (Pg 130){COMPLETE}

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@---Angel---

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Even though it's short, it is brilliant👏

You can see the different layers of Shivaay's character in this chapter.

He is a person, who uses lies, to contradict his heart and emotions; when he thinks their wrong. Moreover, it just shows how different the brothers are. Om hates lies; whilst Shivaay uses them to console himself. Nevertheless their bonding is still so strong❤️ As usual my cutie pie is learning from his Anika didi😆 Rudra is just to cute! I love how this chapter focuses on the OBros and their personalities!

I am still feeling bad for Anika😭. I hope she teaches Shivaay a lesson, in her style😉

Do update soon dear!

Thanks for the pm🤗

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Jishka

@Asad08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Awesome short but brilliant! Love shivaay has so many layers to his character and also how omkara is concerned about Anika!! Only one request plz make them longer!!!! Thanks for the pm and continue soon

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Anjum.

@Anjum.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

I just read all 3 chapters in one go and I LOVE IT! I hate Shivaay right now, but I love Annika's bond with the younger Obros. Your writing is amazing! Everything flows so nicely! I'm eagerly awaiting the next part!

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Cookieg

@Cookieg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Another awesome chapter
Shivaay liar...lovebug gonna bite u soon
Anika must make him pay..bigtime

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

hi dear
ur on a roll today😉... double update😃. thank you😃

loved both parts⭐️
when will shivaay learn to stop being so mean? good that anika gave it back to him
om and ru are such sweethearts😳
i burst out laughing at shivaay's thoughts of om being a threat😆😆
haha he's in denial and envious of anika's sweet bonding with his brothers, secretly wishing he could be a part of it😆
eagerly waiting for the next part

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

OMG i really want to whack Shivaay across the head 😆.. He lied 😲😆.. Jhoota Singh Oberoi.. haha.. I hope Om finds out the truth though... Shivaay bhi na ..

Awesomeee... continue soon, thanks for the PM 😳

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Hmmm...liar...come on om u r not believing this nonsense...annika is much more than that...bag n beads indeed ...only om can get thru to him...if he finds out d truth that is...it is going to b so good when shivaay realises d truth...cant wait