Shivika OS.....BAS ITNA HAI TUMSE KEHNA..(.chapter updated - pg 2 )

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Posted: 9 years ago
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A small boy was talking to a man...
B: Shiv...
S: hmmm???
B: meri na ek friend hai...
S: haa toh hai...
B: meri bahut achi friend hai...girlfriend jaisi friend hai...

Shiv chuckles

B: its complicated

S: its simple...n turned towards him...LOVE...

B: LOVE???

B: aap ne bhi kiya tha?? LOVE...

S: tha??? Kiya hai...aur humesha karta rahunga...n smiled...

So here is the glimpse...hope u liked it...n update will be soon...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am so intrigued...
I can't wait to read the story!
Update Soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Angels...

I am so intrigued...

I can't wait to read the story!
Update Soon😃

Thank u
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cant wait to read the story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Luv dat vid song 2 da core!update soonish ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A small boy was talking to a man...
B: Shiv...
S: hmmm??
B: meri na ek friend hai...
S: han toh hai...
B: meri bahut achi friend hai...girlfriend jaisi friend hai...
Shiv chuckles...
B: its complicated...
S: its simple... ( n turned towards him )...LOVE...
B: LOVE???
Shiv nodded...
B: aap ne bhi kiya tha??LOVE...
S: tha??...kiya hai aur humesha karta rahunga...

FLASHBACK :

A girl was standing silently infront of a boy who wss literally insulting her infront of the cafe in which they have come for a date.

Actually girl was 15 minutes late as she was stuck up in traffic...but the boy was literally yelling at her for wasting his precious time...

Boy: can't u see how late u r???
Girl: i m really sorry ( crying)
Boy: what sorry haa?? Tumhari wajah se apna important kaam chodke aaya hu...aur tum itni careless kaise ho sakti ho...

The girl was silent...she didn't had any choice as that boy was her would be fiancee. And she belongs to an orthodox family where their parents had taught not to counter question ur fiance.

The boy was going to talk more wen shiv came n interrupted them. He had enough...he had come to drop her to the cafe .

Shiv: bas kar dude...she said sorry then why r u stretching the matter?
Boy: oh wow...now who the hell r u to talk in between us??
Shiv: her gud friend...who will help her in need..who will defend her wen she is not at fault...u know how r traffic these day...so she was stuck...thats it...no need to create seen over here...
Boy: now u will tell me how to behave wid my fiancee..

Shiv calmly took him to the corner n whisper in his ear: tujhe yaad dilaau ki tu ek mahine phele kahaan dikha tha?? Ek pub me ladki k saath makeout kar raha tha...aur maine tujhe pakda tha...aur main apni friend ko bata bhi sakta hun...n if u dont wanna do this then get lost from here...

The boy got scared n left the place...

The girl whi was standing silently was on verge of breakdown...before shiv can go ti her...she had left the place. Shiv got worried so he followed her...the girl was crying n walking on deserted road...shiv was really worried as he couldn't see her crying...at last he caught hold of her shoulder n said...

Shiv: kya hua itna roh kyun rahi ho??
Girl: woh..woh...usne aisa kyun kahaa...ki meri wajah se uska kaam incomplete rehgaya...kya main uske liye important nahi hun ?
Shiv: ye toh hona hi tha na mishti...tuhi use jhel rahi hai...he is not worth it...but tu meri baat maanti hi nahi hai...
Girl: tum kehte ho ki use chod do...par itna aashaan nahi...hamari family judi hui hai..

Shiv sighed...convincing her was difficult...n to make her understand was more difficult.

Shiv: toh phir sab destiny par chod do...believe me sab kuch thik hojayega...ok? ( he assured her)

The girl nodded silently n smiled a little...she turned n starting walking back home...he was just staring at her...he has longing in his eyes...but for whom?? He knew the answer but had no choice to explain it...

Main rahoon ya na rahoon
Tum mujh mein kahin baaki rehna
Mujhe neend aaye jo aakhiri
Tum khwabon mein aate rehna

Bas itna hai tumse kehna (x4)

Main rahoon ya na rahoon
Tum mujhme kahin baaki rehna


PRESENT :

Shiv: Meri story bhi kuch tere jaisi hi thi...COMPLICATED ... ( n sighed )

B: COMPLICATED???

Shivaay nodded again drowning in memories...


Kisi roz baarish jo aaye
Samajh lena boondon mein main hoon
Subah dhoop tumko sataaye
Samajh lena kirno mein main hoon (x2)

Kuch kahun ya na kahun
Tum mujhko sada sunte rehna

A girl was dancing in the rain...enjoying her to the fullest...there was a boy who was admiring her from distance ...she look so beautiful...after sometimes the girl drag him in rain...n both were fully drenched...they were enjoying themselves...suddenly the girl hugs him out of nowhere...she find peace in his embrace...he wraps his hand around her waist...


Girl: thank u shiv...tumne mere liya usko data...

Shiv: are mishti thanks kyun bol rahi ho...tera dost hun itna toh kar hi sakta hun na...

The girl broke the hug n looked at shiv longingly...the girl was trying to find some answer by looking into his eyes...but he was master in hiding...he immediately broke their eyelock n said...

Shiv : ghar chale...parents wait kar rehonge...

Shiv was sitting in balcony in his house

Shiv's pov

Hazaar baar socha, keh doon
ki friend nahi meri girlfriend hai tu
Par sapne toot jaane ka darr
Kabhi dil se gaya hi nahi


Kya kehta ki jabse tumhe dekha hai i had fallen for u...fallen in love wid my friend...but darta tha agar maine tumhe bata diya aur tum dur chali gayi toh...aisa main nahi chahta tha...

Hawaaon mein lipta hua main
Guzar jaaunga tumko chhu ke
Agar mann ho to rok lena
Thehar jaaunga in labon pe (x2)

Main dikhu ya na dikhu
Tum mujhko mehsoos karna

Bas itna hai tumse kehna (x4)

Hmm..

Bas itna hai tumse kehna (x4)

Main rahun ya na rahun
Tum mujh mein kahin baaki rehna..



Just then a voice interrupted their talk:...Shiv...

Boy : yes mom...

V: kahaan ho tum beta??

Just than a girl came towards them slowly keeping her right hand on her 7 month baby bump...

S: are mishti...tum yaha kyun aai...mujhe miss kar rahi thi...

The girl playfully hit his shoulder...n turned toward her son...n said: shiv aap jaake apna homework khatam karo...

S: offo mom ...aap bhi kitna tension leti ho...shiv bhulna mat abhi story baaki hai..

Then girl said: shiv maine kitni baar bola hai dont call him shiv infront of me...call him dad...

S: sorry mom...n dad remember our story is still left...

The girl came n sat beside him n said: Mr Shivaay Singh Oberoi...kuch toh sharam karo...2 bachho k baap banne waale ho aur tumhari naughtiness khatam hi nahi hoti...

Shivaay: Mrs Anika Shivaay Singh oberoi...aap hai hi itni irrestible ki control hi nahi hota...

Anika blushed a bit n said : kya shiv tum bhi...

Shivaay: ohooo my wife is blushing...kya baat hai..

Anika: thank u for coming in my life ...thanks for making me fall in love wid u...thanks for bringing my cute little children in my life...thanks for everything...(she said wid happy tears in her eyes)

Shivaay : ( kissing her forhead ) thank u toh mujhe kehna chaihye jo tum meri life mei aai...aur rahi baat love ki toh maine kuch nahi kiya...sab destiny ne kiya...agar destiny ko manjoor nahi hota toh hum kabhi dost nahi bante...nahi hame pyaar hota...

Anika: yaa i agree..n smiled...tumne kaha tha na sab destiny par chod do...aur ab dekho...hamre pyaar ki ek nahi balki do nishaani hone waali hai...( caressing her baby bump )

Shivaay : sahi kaha ( kissing her baby bump )

Thats wen shiv entered again: shiv

Shivika looked at him

Anika: shiv phir se... ( glaring at him)

S: sorry mom...dad mujhe apni story jarror sunana...OK???

Shivaay: ok...champ...

Anika: ( confused ) kaunsi story??

Shivaay: whispering in her ear...hamari story..

Anika blushed n smiled...

An trio left from there...towards their life...to welcome the upcoming guest.


Hope liked my story...plz do comment..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS
Wow anshi have son & going to be parents again
Awe shiv call his dad shiv so cute

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It was seriously cute..actually got confused a bit in between Shiv nd Shiv...😆..
Anyways it was really nice...
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awesome👏👏luved it ki my shiv had a happy ending wid dis song😆😳
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It was so cute!
I loved it so much.
At first I had gotten a bit confused between Shiv and Shiv😆
It's amazing!

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