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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice.
Do continue please 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazmeen

When RU updating it hun


sorry dear... very sorry ..i will be updating in these twodays..been really busy
But , frankly i feel very happy that thrx someone who is really interstd in reading my next part...u even revisited this and replied asking for d nxt part..this definitely boosted up my confidence dat my writing cn be liked too...
thaank you very much dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read both parts in one go, and I loved them!
Please update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3

The first part was from somu's pov, second from rudy's pov . This part is going to be from third person's POV Personal thoughts will be in brackets.

Next morning when Rudra was about to leave Oberoi M , he heard his brother O calling him . "kya baat hain O ?"

"dekho Rudra, kal tere wajah se Soumya ko chot lagi .aur ooper se tumne usse acchi se baat nahi ki"

"haan toh ?" (O ko uss ladki se itna pyar kyun muje samajh nahi aati)

"toh, Mr.Dumbell Oberoi aaj tum usse apni saath le jaana college chodne"

"no ways O !! mein uss Sumo ko handle nahi karsakta . mere bike bhi uska weight ko accept karhi nahin sakta"

"Shut up Rudra . chup chap drop karo usse. same college hain na , itna toh u can do. infact, u hav to . agar aaj tumne mana kiya na, i will make sure that u drop her evryday"

Suddenly Soumya, who was standing there silently spoke up saying "its okay bade baal wale bhaiyya, i can go really . Thank you , par mein khud chali jaungi"

"ok then bye Sumo" came the reply from our dear Rudy and was about to leave when one look frm Om made him change his mind He had to.

"ney ney Sumo, agar O ithna kehrahein toh, tik hain . aajao, i will drop u. par hum car mein jayenge"

They reach college with their usual bickering in the journey - Rudra asking about Romi and teasing Soumya about her weight.

" hey sumo . i just got a brilliant idea . while coming back from college, ask romi to drop you . isi bahaane , i can meet her at our house"

"uffo Mr.Duffer Oberoi, i can come back by my own . it was Om bhaiyya who forced you to drop me, not me remember ? main khud aajaungi.bye."and before he says something soumya went towards her class.the day went by with their respective schedules. during the lunch break, rudra saw soumya being helped by romi to climb stairs bear the canteen.

(yar ye sumo itna over acting kyun kar rahin hain . waise bhi, ye bhi tik hn . i can talk to romi. chal rudy, show loving angle in you.). he immediately calls up his driver and informs him to drop Soumya and her friend safely at oberoi mansion in the evening.

"hi soumya , arey ye kya ? tum mujhe bula leti , main help kar deta . anyways, romi tum kitni acchi ho . by the way , soumya i am so sorry , i know i said i would drop you home along with me . but mujhe ek zaroori kaam se jaana hain abhi, so Romi could you please drop her home ? i have told the driver ki tum dono ko humare ghar pe chodne keliye and later when i come back i shall drop you"

"ek minute rudra. firstly i never askd you to drop me back . aur dusre baath, dont you dare trouble my friend deciding like this. aur tum kon hote ho aise decide karke order dene wale ?"

"i know you did nt ask . but i insist that you get home safely . patha hain romi, jab isko chot lagi woh bhi mere wajah se mujhe kitna bura laga ? sirf main hi jantha hoon mujhe kitna dard hua tha!!" (rudra wiped tears which both, romi amd soumya know that are fake)

"bas karo ye acting duffer. chalo romi, hum chalte hain . hum samosa kate hain . chalo."

(jab dekho iss sumo ko khaane ke baare mein hi baath karna hain . jao jao sumo . i am watching you , kisi na kisi din i will see your end...)

in the evening when rudra reached oberoi mansion, he could hear soumya laughing loudly . (arey wah , lagtha hain romi ayi hain sumo ko drop karne. jaake driver se poochta hoon)

"ramu kaka, kya sumo ..i mean soumya wapas aagayi ?"

"haan beta . uske friend bhi"

"thik hain kaka , thank you mere kehne pain un dono ko drop karne keliya"

"par beta suno..."

but rudra just left the place before Ramu kaka could finish his sentence and gav a very stylish entry into the mansion..

"hello soumya aur Ro..SHAURYA???"A complete silence for 30seconds and then..."tum yahan kya kar rahen hon shaurya ? aur sumo, how can you bring this guy to our house ? and by the way , i asked u come with romi right ?"

"hi Rudra singh oberoi . kaise ho ?? i know you anyways won't ask me , main hi keh deta hoon . I am fine thank you . aur haan how can you call our cutie as Sumo ?? that's not good okay !! and romi ko kisi music class attend karna tha , so i dropped her . what's the big deal ?"

"oy Mr.Over Concern !! agar ithna chintha hain, toh meri gaadi mein kyun aaye ho ? you could drop her in your car right ??" (iss ladka ki dimaag mein koi logic wale baath hi nahin)

"FYI rudra, we came in our car only . see there , outside ..."and then rudra noticed the nice shiny black lamborgini outside their house. "dekho Shaurya, jo bhi ho . i dont want you in my house . just go okay ?"

"enough rudra . how can you say like that ? he came just to help me !! aur tum aise kyun behave kar rahen ho ? kya dushmani hain usse ?? guests se koi aise baath karta hain kya ?"

"hello Sumo . you need not defend him this much . aur waise bhi shayad tum bhool rahin ho ki tum ek guest ho humare ghar mein aur tum aisa kisi aur doosre guest ko bina bataye kaise lasakthe ho?"

"RUDRA !!" shouted dadi "sorry kaho rudra"

"its ok dadi. he is right actually. thank you rudra for reminding me that i am jus a guest here . its my mistake that i brought another guest that too without your permission. and dont worry i am going to stay here for just few more days . i will stay in my limits." Saying this , soumya then turned to Shaurya

"sorry shaurya . thank you for dropping me . we shall talk tomorrow at college . bye . and sorry once again ki meri wajah se tume ithna sab kuch sunna pada"

"hey somu . its ok .. i think it's better if i leave now . take care . i will call you . bye " with this shaurya left the oberoi mansion and soumya took off to her room (sorry , Rudra's room)

"rudra , tumhe aaj kal ho kya gaya hain ?? bohut galat ki hain tumne aaj .. jaa , jaa ke maafi mango soumya se. kya yehi sanskar di hain humne tujhe ? aur waise bhi woh bechari bas chaar hi din yahan rehne wali thi. kya rudra . tumpe shivaay ka bura asar ho raha hain shayad . uska gussa, uska jaldbaazi , rudely baath karna ..."

"KYAAA ... sumo is leaving in 4 days ?"



so what will rudra do next ?who is shaurya ?jaanne keliye like dabaayiye aur comment kijiye.

i did not proof read it . so plz forgive for any mistakes.

Edited by fundy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
This is amazing!!!
All the parts...
Totally into characters!
I m loving it sooo much
But why Rudy boy being so rude to sumo?
Loved it!
Has he misinterpreted the idiom char din wala to the original stay??
Loved it
Cont ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

This is amazing!!!

All the parts...
Totally into characters!
I m loving it sooo much
But why Rudy boy being so rude to sumo?
Loved it!
Has he misinterpreted the idiom char din wala to the original stay??
Loved it
Cont ASAP



thank you so much dear🤗
it really means a lot to me .
i knw rudy is being very rude , bt he'll come around eventually.
i shall try to update it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: foreverlazy

Read both parts in one go, and I loved them!

Please update soon!



thanq so much ... i hope u'll like this third one too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

thankuuu
will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Amazing story..
Loveee it..
Pleasee update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Amazing story..
Loveee it..
Pleasee update soon..


thank you dear . will try to update soon

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