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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is amazing. You've written it so well
I loved shivkara conversation
Continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Nice story..seems interesting. I wonder who Ganga is.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
K love you work. I always wanna see Om drug addiction past and u have written on it. It is so great to read it. shivay is helping him thats great. I always love ShivKara bonding. Thank God he is not jerk here atleast🤔
But being shivika fan can i ask u a question, Are u going to show shivika scenes as well because they are married right?
Sorry if this question has annoyed u, i know it is Om FF and i love it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The Family Reunion..

The flight journey was perhaps the longest one in his life, atleast in Om's perspective. He was waiting with anticipation to meet his brothers. Hifi with his older brother Shivaay and tease him non-stop about him and Anika. Hug his Dumbell brother to death and ruffle his hair like anything. And from what he had been hearing from Shivaay, Rudra had managed to make it upto Sowmya and they both were best friends now. He laughed lightly at the the memory of Rudra coming to them with a wet face. He closed his eyes slowly and allowed the memories to engulf him. A girl running around his studio and giving him a kangan to keep. A girl and a guy having ice-cream together and her dancing. And then a man screaming, letting all the anger out. Om woke up with a start. He was sweating and breathing heavily. Those memories haunted him. Any memory of Ishaana brought only anger. He drank water and laid back. Only an hour left and then his brothers would be there. And they would never let him get back to those memories. The flight landed and Om got down. He completed all the formalities, got his luggage checked and moved towards the exit where he knew his brothers would be standing. And man he was right.. Who could ignore those over-enthusiastic hands waving highly in the air and the owner of those hands jumping in happiness. Om chuckled.. No matter how much did Rudra grow, his antics would never change. He would remain the kid forever. Beside Rudra was a guy who trying to control him down. Poor Shivaay, Om thought. How did he even handle Rudra for these two years. Brave Man he is. He raced towards them. Rudra literally jumped into those waiting arms of Om and hugged him tightly, trying to wrap his legs around Om's waist but failing miserably.

Rudra : O !!!! O !! O !! You are back atlast.. I missed you a lot. Shivaay Bhaiyya is no fun.

Shivaay : O hello.. Excuse me.

Rudra : Aur nahi tho kya. You dnt play pranks like me and O do. And O, if you are going the next time, take Bhaiyaa along with you. He doesn't even know how to fling a slingshot.

Om laughed. Rudra and Shivaay were poles apart. One was always up and about playing and messy while the other preferred to be clean. Shivaay pulled Rudra and Om apart.

Shivaay : Bas Rudra. You can hug him later when we get home.

Om (mockingly) : Thanku Shivaay. I thought I was going to die due to the lack of air. And Rudra, people would think we are not brothers but gays.

Rudra : Ewww O.. Chee..

Om and Shivaay laughed while Rudra mock-frowned but joined the other two. Om stopped laughing and turned to Shivaay.

Om : Shivaay.. How is...

Shivaay : Fine. Infact both are fine and are waiting to see you.

Om : How did you know I was going to ask about them ?

Shivaay : Om. Tu mera Bhai hai. I always know you. Ab chalo. You don't want to keep them waiting.

The OBros went home in the car talking about the past two years. Rudra spoke about how many girls had asked him on a date while Om and Shivaay rolled their eyes. Leave it to Rudra to handle girls. He handled them better than anyone else. They reached the Oberoi Mansion where the entire family was waiting outside. Dadi was holding a thaali to welcome her middle grandson. Om stood infront of her. Dadi toolk aarthi of him with tears in her eyes. Om smiled.

Dadi : Om. Aur kabhi bhi apni Dadi ko chodke mat jaana.

Om : Dadi. Ab mei aa gaya hu na. Aapko chodke kahi nahi jaaunga.

He hugged his Dadi with all the love. He turned to see his other family members standing there. His mother had tears in her eyes and she was supported by his father. Om chuckled inwardly. He had never liked his father. But in the past two years, he had grown to respect him a bit since he had taken care of the family and his mother very well.

Pinky : O My Maata !! Om.. Welcomes back. Ab isko yahi khada karenge ya phir andhar leke jaayenge aur kuch khilaayenge bhi ??

All the teary faces broke into smiles and he was led inside. As he entered inside, he was greeted by the sight of Anika's smiling face. She had laid the table with all of Om's favourite food.

Anika : Welcome Om. Kaise ho ?

Om : Mei theek hu Anika. Tum kaise ho ?

Anika : I am good Om.

Over the years since Shivaay and Anika got married, Om had become her best friend. There were times when Shivaay had screamed at her. It was to Om that she went to and it was him that comforted her in every way possible. All of a sudden, Om felt his pants being pulled. He looked down and saw the cutest sight ever. Two kids were looking up at him with wide half-toothed smiled and pulling his pants. His heart filled with love for them. His nephew and niece. He sat down on the carpeted floor and pulled them closer.

Om : Awww... Meri muchkins.. Ansh aur Shivika. How are you both ?

Ansh : Chaachu !!!

Shivika : Chachu.

Om : Haan muchkins. Chachu hai yaha. Ab mere babies kaise hai ?? Did you miss me ?

Anika : Poocho mat. Jabse boli ki tum aane waale ho, tabse done have given me sleepless nights. Apparantly, they were excited to meet their Uncle Om.

Om : Hmmhmm.. Ab Uncle Om is here. Ab he is going to do something to his two muchkins.

Ansh : Vo kya hai Uncle Om ?

Om : Vo ye hai..

And he started tickling both of them as they both laughed and squealed in delight. Such a delight in which only kids can squeal. Shivaay looked with full of love at his kids and brother. His family was now complete and he fell content. He caught Anika's eyes and knew that she understood his thoughts. He smiled back at her.

Rudra : Muchkins.. Come to Rudy now.

Shivika : Nahi. Hume Omu Chachu khelna hai

Rudra : Haww !! What about Rudy the favourite buddy ?

Ansh : Old ho gaya.

Rudra pouted and was hit behind the head by a laughing Shivaay. Pinky went towards her grandkids and held them.

Pinky : Chalo Ansh aur Shivika. Lunch karna hai tum dono ko.

Shivika : But Dadi. Hume khelna hai.

Pinky : Haan Shivika. Khaate khaate khelte hai. Mei hu na khelne keliye.

Ansh : But aap tho old hog aye Dadi. Aap kaise khel sakte.

Hearing this, Shakti burst out laughing. He was almost on the floor, holding his stomach. Jhaanvi was trying to stifle her smile but failing miserable while Dadi and Tej were laughing lightly. Rudra laughed loudly while Shivaay held a face like he didn't know whether to laugh or be angry at his kids. Anika's face mirrored Shivaay's. Om's face held a look of comical admiration for his nephew and niece. Never had anyone eer dared to comment on Pinky's age. Pinky's mouth formed an O as she looked at her grandkids.

Pinky : O My Maata !! ANsh. Ruk bataati hu.

She started chasing him around while Ansh ran away from his grandmother's grasp. There was another round of laughter at this sight until Anika caught Ansh and chided him for calling his grandmother old. It was lunch time. Imagine a luncheon with Dadi, Two sets of parents, three brother, a wife and two boisterous kids. As expected, the kids were adamant on playing with Om who was enjoying his Italian pasta. Shivaay and Anika ended up getting food on their clothes trying to feed both of them.

Om : Ok kids. Uncle Om will play with you but only if you both finish ur lunch.

Shivika : But Chachu. The food is yucky.

Ansh : Haan and not tasty.

Om : Haan but it is good for health. Ye khaaoge tho strong badhoge. Aur jab strong badhoge tho monsters ko fight karoge.

Ansh : Kya hum Rudy ki tarah strong ban sakte hai ?

Rudra put on an important face and puffed his chest out. He had a kind of superior aura around him. Om rolled his eyes. His little brother had been spoiling them rotten.

Om : Nahi.

Shivika : Nahi ? But kyu ? Rudy is very strong na

Om : Shivika and Ansh. Tumhaare Rudy Chachu sirf dekhne ma strong hai. Baaaki kuch bhi nahi.

Rudra (whining) : O !!! My izzat is at stake.

Om : Chup nautankibaaz. You have been spoiling them.

Ansh and Shivika had decided that they didn't want to be like Rudra anymore earning Om Rudra's wrath and swearing of revenge later. Om pulled his tongue out at Rudra and smiled as Rudra turned his face away pretending he didn't know the long-haired guy. Om smiled. He was happy. He was back with his family. And to complete his family, two cute kids. He was at bliss. He had come to India, the place that gave him life. He wanted to visit his Art Gallery and then his rehab centre. And he would do it that evening..

NOTE..

Ansh and Shivika - Shivaay and Anika's kids.

Ansh is a boy and Shivika is a girl. They were born after Om left for Paris. They are twins and two years old. And yes.. Rudra has spoiled them rotten 😆 And regarding the kids and shivaay-Anika, an OS will be coming up. But patience is a virtue my dear friends. So do wait 😛

Phew !!! Yeah. U guessed it right.. I did not proof-read 😆 Please do LIKE and COMMENT 😳 Ur likes and comments mean a lot and help me improve 😊

P.S. OmRu fans !! How was the airport moment ?? Specially included 4 u guys 😆

Edited by AngelicTomboy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
too good😛pm me if u can when u update😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
My goodness...this was fantastic.
I just found this out and read it at one go. I loved how you portrayed Om's heartbreak and Shivaay was so stunned when he realized the reality. Om crying on his brother's shoulders was such a poignant scene. I loved it.
And then Shivaay took the reins in hand and sent him to Paris. Good decision and it is quite admirable as he grew more mature in these two years.
Rudra as usual was the delight to my senses but this time Ansh and Shivika gave him close competition.
I absolutely adored it.

And I request a PM next time you update.
Plzzz!!!!!!!!!!

Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Beautiful First part. You described everything very nicely.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Wow.. Baby you wrote so amazingly.. Every word.. Every para.. Mesmerizing... I really want this to happen in our show.. Ishana brutally broke Om's heart.. Awww my baby.. I can't see him like this.. First Ridhima then Ishana.. These girls! So, Om went to Paris.. Wow.. Finally he concentrated on his Painting skill by making an art exhibition. Awww Anika and Shivay had twins.. So cute.. Now Let's see what's going to happen next.
Edited by .Poorva. - 9 years ago
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Thanks for writing such a beautiful story..
Edited by .Poorva. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Tomorrow will unres it. Pakka wala

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