ULTIMO ADIOS...An OmRu/ShivIka/SvetKara Series (Shivika updated)

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Heyya all missed me...am back with a fiction on Omru nd Shivika...and the voldemort couple(name credits to adi🤣)... my main reasons for watching this show ...this will be my last fiction as i've recently got job nd now will be preparing for competetive exams too...it pains me to tell dat i cant irritate u guys further but heyy dont be happy am gonna come frequently to see if anyone is plotting aganist my baby(yes dis is hinted to u ami)...

[DIV]I wanna dedicate my last fiction /series to NIMMI aka Banjaran...you girl are my inspiration consider this my tribute to ANGEL...

First up will be Omru to all O and baby dewanis cant mention any single name but love u guys

<font color="#ff0066">OmRu : My Batman</font>

''O..." He rolled his eyes looks like his little brother is back to his favourite past time ..irritating his elder brother .When his brother spoke for the first time in his fourth year his family was elated dadi organised a function too that day ...But in the midst of all this only he wasn't happy well it wasn't Rudra's fault that baby boy was hurdled that day with each of the family member wanting him to say their respective names ...That adorable goofball first said ''bhaiii'' addresing Shivaay ofcourse then He said ''Dadh'' referring to dadi following dat night He said ''ma'' ...But when his turn came He simply looked at me and tried touching my hair ...after a few days their dad returned from a meeting Rudra was confused for dadi and dad so to address both of them he stuck with ''Dadh''...But His turn never came his brother never addresed him ...After a month on a rainy day when i just returned from school Rudra came to my room before i could question him what he wants he flung himself on me and shouted ''O'...He kept on saying dat word i detached myself from him and asked what happened but He kept on repeating that word ...As i was an inteligent kid i understood that He couldnt spell my name so called me O ...But to this day he stuck to that name and only in dire circumstances switches to Bhaiyya

"O ...Where are you lost ''...he snapped of his thoughts to see his brother's face close to his face

''what the hell...Rudra what are u doing''

'' O ...mein kabse aapko bhula raha hoon but aapho ki...where you fantasizing about your sculptors😉"

''what no ...what do you want" with this guy around he has to take deep breathes

''Uhh...O i want ur help ...only you can help me ...ok listen i challenged a guy in college that guy said he's gonna do hundred push ups while i have to " Talk about physics " ...huhh is it a girl or a human to talk about "...He was laughing at the faces his baby brother was making ...He saw his cute pout and stopped his laughing streak ...

" But based on your knowledge you know nothing about physics apart from the name itself" There was a cute nod ..." Hmm so ask Shivaay help na ...wait a second why arent you asking shivaay's help he'll get that kid outta that college ...isn't dat how you deal with challenges " He was always against dis way of dealing Rudra's problems by Shivaay but then again whom will Shivaay listen when it comes to Rudra ...None

" O that's why I don't want to tell bhaiyya I wanna deal with this guy " to this declaration his all senses went in alert ...is dis my baby brother Rudra or some ghost

" Sooo you want to learn physics " There wasn't a single subject which interested Rudra apart from biology that too his " definition" of biology .

" O challenge is tom mein aaj hee itna sab ...O I have to talk more than 20 mins ...what will I talk O" That whining voice started and kept on saying things like I don't wanna loose etcc...A part of him wanted this brat to loose but this was the first time he came for help regarding his college issues
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" How about TBBT ...yess Rudra its perfect you don't have to read you just have to see and mug up" ...His idea was met with a confused look from his brother

" OK listen there's an English show named big bang theory in that there's a guy who talks about physics all you have to do is see those videos phir ratta marna its just like movie dialogues you'll get them" ...His brother was listening with rapt attention then suddenly he leapt on me

" English show...O does it have females ...you see these shows Haan aahan..." He pushed that brat away what's with him and leaping on me as if am a teddy bear

" Shut up ...I know these from riddima ...ya females are there I guess ..." riddima did mention some girl names and besides which show will work without females ...Nyet right

" O aap laajawab ho voh videos muje dho na " After downloading the videos his little bro asked my lappy which I refused dreading the suggestion videos

" O ur my Batman " he raised his eyebrows at dat particular name calling

" Your brain is super O Superman has powers but Batman's main power is brain just like you and Batman has black veil You have black hair...haiiiyaa... logic" with that he left the room .

And your our PIXIE rudra ...carrying the pixie dust of happiness and sprinkling them wherever you go...His heart bubbled with joy reminiscing the childhood of his brother



Pheww its done ...itna long is first time for me ...how's it guys is it up to the mark ...the pixie dust thing is inspired from the larger than life fiction of nimmi ...credits to u girl ...

voldemort couple will be up by today night ...shivIka will try today evng

do mention if you'll liked it or not eggs and tamatrs for my third post plzz
[DIV]The guy I mentioned who knows about physics in the show the big bang theory is Sheldon cooper ...his dialogues regarding physics are famous and accurate although they are difficult to learn but if mugged up its not difficult to remember we do not knows baby's level of knowledge in education I just hoped he can at least mug up

The guy who challenged baby is romi bf who's but of a stud and a macho man too


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Res for ShivIka ...to the best couple of IB according to me ..to all my friends at the ShivIka AT i maybe kaput almost always in d AT but whenever i come u guys make me feel special😳


He looked at his surroundings ...the cool breeze making the trees sway a little ...dis wasn't a beautiful sight seeing place ...it was just a long curvy road which in actuality was the nearest route to his home ...nevertheless he found himself stopping at dis place from the past few days ...he needed to analyse the recent events in his life ...the chain of events which made his head spin ...after some nail biting dramas finally dat gayatri woman was behind the bars ...And dat very day his mom insisted , nagged him to select a date for the wedding ...Then the sudden entry of his business rival siddharth rana ...with the business propositions and his wedding preparations he felt like he couldn't breathe ...If his brothers and "her " werent there he would have totally gone mad .


Yes ...his brothers and "her " in a single sentence was itself a big achievement for him ...for he the Shivaay Singh Oberoi would never in hell care for anyone almost as same his brothers ...but he was doing that same thing ...when dis thought came to him few days back he was startled angry disgusted dat he could even think like dat ...but now he made peace with this fact ...he could take on the whole word but how can he fight with himself ...their fights which first consisted insulting each other later on turned into light hearted banters ...After every fight of theirs he found himself checking Google to get the meanings of d words she used ...His brothers say "she affects u shivaay " ...

Ya right it was very easy to say those 4 words but did they know dat her every action , smile , weird face, weirder words, her child-like innocence, her hell cat attitude, her wavy untamed hair , her tears everything was affecting in ways he could net express ...at times he felt very aggravated with her and at some insane times he never wanted to let her go ...She messed him up so hard he even dreamt of her ...well in his defence in the dream they were just fighting but still dat night turned into a sleepless one ...It wasn't like he forgot the reality dat he's betrothed and dat his thoughts were going haywire but he chose not to understand all of dis huge mess ...A vibration sound pulled him outta his thoughts ...he checked his cell to see Om's missed calls ...Uh oh so he's late again ...

He entered the mansion and reached the hall when he heard a jingling sound he turned around and gasped ... he could hear his dadi complementing Anika dat she was looking beautiful and dat she should wear dis in tomorrow's function...She was standing there in a long traditional dress ...a slight blush on her face ...she looked like a ...what does rudra say ...An Angel . As his eyes again roamed on her form he felt his cheeks turn slight red ...he abruptly turned his head mentally cursing himself ...he heard his dadi call " billu" but he didn't dare to stop and quickened his steps .

He reached his room and plonked on his bed too tired to even freshen up ...his eyes were burning up...yet his mind kept replaying what happened few minutes ago...A smile on his face was the last thing he could register .

" Shivaay baby are u going to wear a suit or a kurtha ...how about Indian wear kurtha it'll suit you baby ..." . Before he could answer his fiancee his mom beat him to it.

" Oh my mata ...kurtha lalchi ...na na ...kahi woh lalchi girgayi tho ..." . He rolled his eyes at dat told them both dat he's gonna wear a suit and shooed them off citing he still had some work to be done.

As the evening commenced he found himself desparetly trying to spot for his brothers but they seemed to vanish . The guests began to pour in and few of his business delegates came up to wish him ...he could see tia with her friends in selfie mode ... He spotted " her" in dat pink long dress of hers moving from one place to other . Dis function was in actuality a puja organized by dadi to thank gods for keeping them safe ...A pandit made them sit near a kundali ...he saw his brothers approaching before he could call them his mom gestured them to sit and be quiet . After the chanting started he looked bored ...he chuckled when he saw tia teaching his mom about spirituality ...

Rudra's chuckle made him look at what his brothers were doing ...Om anika robin were laughing at rudra's imitations ...phat the whack is his brother in law staring at anika . He glared at them but they weren't even paying attention to them . The whole puja he kept sending daggers at them but except Om none bothered to look at him or the puja . After the whole chanting and tying threads ordeal he went to confront his brothers ...he saw anika slip and robin helping her stand ...rudra made awww sounds in the background . He felt like breaking something to control his rage so he went to his room .


Her hand in another man's arm ...dat was the image constantly playing in his mind ...he was the one actually getting married so why should he be affected dis way ... Then the imagination of his brain started ...she smiling with other man , she blushing, she in the arms of other man...he broke a glass by smashing it hardly .

Finally the realisation sunk into him ...he wanted to be the one holding her , he wanted her smile , he wanted her in his arms ... he wanted a future with her ...but can he ... no no ...what about the marriage deal ...dis deal can take his family name to higher levels ...his grandfather's dream ...his brothers future ...although Om was settled dat guy has serious emotional problems and rudra was a baby ...could he risk all dis for his selfish reasons ...he didn't even know if anika even likes him or not...few days back he heard her telling his dadi how she wants a peaceful normal life for her bro and herself. .. ..Can he give her dat...

He finally couldn't contain anymore and let the tears spill his face as he sunk near his bed


voila its finished thanku for ur love guys ...its continuation is a Omru \ shivIka part as I promised a two shot ...
Edited by Messi2 - 9 years ago
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Res for TheyWhoMusntBeNamed😈...our craziest wildest fantasy please read it on our own risk...

The shivIka part was twice deleted so am just pissed off right now ...it will be up by tom



Passion : Hatred Or Lust


The below mentioned fiction is 9 years back when Om was in his early twenties . At that time Rudra was going to school while Shivaay was at Cambridge ( mentioned by tej) ... .As of now shivaay is in his early thirties proved by the kundali scene ( credit preeta ) so Om should be few months less than him. Criticism is welcome but pls keep it in constructive manner . Some of the scenes are taken from the crazy ideas in kunal AT ( love u guys) . Enjoy the ride.

The cool breeze touched his face as he once again looked at his surroundings . He felt his specks go blurry due to the salty mist he wiped it away with his shirt . He didn't have any problem with his eyesight but shivaay persisted him to use them as reading glasses . His brother's POV was dat he read way too much . He remembered the reactions of his family seeing him in specks but what stood out to him was the reaction and its aftermath of a certain someone . A light blush formed on his cheeks and he instantly lowered his head ...

" Om ...what's wrong with you ...your health is just fine now and u insisting to meet at beach in dis hour " . A fair complexed girl came to his view she might have ran her way here dat explained the huffing . He raised his hand to cup her cheek but it was immediately swatted away ...So it was lioness mode ...

" Well u were very busy with ur works and u promised to meet me ...and heyy dat isn't a way to greet the birthday boy " . Only he knew how much he craved her today how he wanted to spend dis day with her .

" oh Mr baby boy I didn't forget it ...but we could have met somewhere I don't understand ur obsession with beaches ...there's salty mist sticky sand and woww its drizzling too ...Dats why no gift for you " He looked as she huffed and went to sit on a bench ...the faces she made minutes ago brought a huge smile on his face .

He sat beside her and kept his hand around her ...quickly he held her other hand knowing too well dat she's gonna use it to again swat his hand away ...she gazed at him for few minutes and leaned into his chest ...He never could explain the feelings he felt for her but he never felt like questioning them...

" I love the beach cause of its depth and its calmness ...it looks so serene yet its deadly too a huge power force yet knows its boundaries...its just unique " .

" Umm so just like you ..." . That reply raised his eyebrows...

" Why thank you but still it isn't a gift " Her mere presence was more than enough for him but she might have forgot to get him anything as her hands were empty so he wanted to rile her up .

" what makes u say dat you I - know - it all ..." saying dat she rose from her leaning position to sit and slightly lowered her top along side her hand...

Woahh he turned his head away ...dis girl did the most crazy things he ever knew and every time dis quality of hers surprised him to no end .

" Om look here ...its okay look here ...Ommm" He looked at her only to see dat she was standing very close to him before he could say anything she turned around ...His lips parted with a gasp ...as if in a spell his hand raised to touch her back ...he trailed his fingers on his name imprinted on her as "Om " .

" Why did u...was it painful ..."

" huhh... no it wasn't am ur lioness remember ...I didn't know wat to get u and out of the blue dis idea struck " . He lent down and kissed his name... he wanted to pour all of the warmth he felt in his heart by her gesture ...so he trailed a streak of kisses all along her back ...She turned around abruptly and held his face ...

" Happy birthday ...Tiger " she whispered and crashed her lips on him ...after a while of tongue play they released each other for a quick breath .

" Am jealous of your hair its a crime for a guy to have such a soft hair ..." he chuckled at her words she repeated dis at least twice a month ...

" Are u ready for your real gift ..." A naughty smile played on her lips and before he could ask wat it was she dragged him to her car ...she made him sit inside the back seat ...at his questioning look she gave him dat same naughty grin and suddenly kept her hand on his thigh ...his eyebrows touched his head at dis ...the last thing he could register in his head was her closing the car door

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After these many years finally he knew what he felt for her ...at dat time it was plain attraction and now it was pure hatred . How he wished he could erase away few years in his life everytime his baby brother asked him to make a wish it was dis one he made ... Even drugs couldn't make him forget her or her words dat fateful night...when he saw His girl in the arms of HIS father ...

" If ur father doesn't have a problem when he knows about the two of us then why should you have any problem"



Phewww over I really don't know wat I wrote farh amekha sani am really sorry guys if it isn't up to the mark

my assumption is dat if these two shared a PST svet might have twisted words saying tej knows about them and is still with her dat will explain his immense hatred and the drug abuse too...

Edited by Messi2 - 9 years ago
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Amazing...swetkara...something thrilling nd diff...
Waiting...pls update soon...nd pls pm me...
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Way to go Girl !! Am waiting for this
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OmRu is updated haven't proof read so bear with me
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u r going to write on SuetKAra😲
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Originally posted by: Sonikins

u r going to write on SuetKAra😲



errr yeah I mean its d last am gonna write so plz bear with me

For now Omru is up
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Originally posted by: Messi2



errr yeah I mean its d last am gonna write so plz bear with me

For now Omru is up


Lol its k i m shivika fan but some people might get hurt so thats y asking😳
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Soni its OK re dis isn't to instigate anyone its only cause dat I won't be writing anymore ...first only Omru and shivIka were on my mind but I love... kara too so in my last one I wanted to write on them

I hope all can understand this

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