Shivika os Thread : #1 up page 1

1017333 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
Even thought my exams are shitting me these days, I just
Couldn't resist to write something!.
PS - I don't want to sound rude but I can take out
time from my busy exam schedule and spend much time writing
this, I at least request you guys to post some detailed or meaningful
comments rather than "awesome", " continue soon", " interesting. I'm waiting ",
" I like it" and the worst I ever got was "Nice!!!". This not only goes
for me but for all the writers out there who spend their precious
time writing. At least we deserve some recognition. I'm not ranting
or saying I'm favoring someone by writing but I wanted to say that
please guys feedback us on the content. Whatever you liked and
what you hated. Trust me your criticism means a lot to us.
Love you all. And here it goes :)


Audacious


Many days have passed in that cheque incident.
Anima has managed to get herself together.
She now owns a place at a more decent
Location than that of the chall


All thanks to her hard work in the
Past three months.
Anika now has forgotten about Shivaay
Singh Oberoi and focused on
Making her and sahil's financial condition
A little better.



She still has that cheque, never been touched.
She still curses him but now is totally
Indifferent to his matter.


The past three months have made her life
A paradox.

Peaceful days yet violent nights.
Security yet restlessness.



This timespan has solved the biggest problem
Of her life, doesn't matter if only temporarily - MONEY.


Finally she was able to pay sahil's school fees,
Buy a house and have sahil's custody ---- all she ever
Wanted in life.


Now she could live blissfully because finally she
Had her life sorted out.


But these three months came down heavily on
Her emotionally. She had been experiencing a
Mild mental trauma since last three months.



Doctor says it was due to her anxiousness for making
Sahil's life as normal as possible.


That boy never fails to amaze her, just 7 years
Old and that too differently abled, he is so full of life
That he even makes youngsters who fuss about
Little problems, cry in shame.


Just how much love a child of 7 has for life in his life.
Many people who are in his condition lose the jest
To live and want to die willingly just like Jojo Moyes'
Character " William " in her beautiful book 'Me before you'



Though Anika loved that book from her core but the thing
She hated about it was the reluctance of William
To give in to love and life. Hell if he was real he
Could draw some Inspiration from her dear brother.


Sometimes a crazy thought passes her. Maybe whatever
Madness she's experiencing could be due to that Audacious
Man. At that thought her heart and her conscious
Agreed unanimously but her mind dismissed it.




Something about him . . . was so so livid but at the
Same time strikingly intriguing that would
Make her delirious every time she thought
About him.



Though she was happy that he was out of her life
And she hasn't seen his face from the last 3 months
But sometimes her intrigue would ride her lividness
And she thought what he must be upto these days?



Maybe he's plotting to break her all over again?
Planning to make her life hell?
These thoughts ran a chill through her spine
And she gulped the lump of fear.


But the very next moment she thought that she wasn't
That much important to him.


Although the whole world thought she
was indifferent to him but she wasn't.


God knows why his mere presence would
Pull her defenses up and affected her so much.
Now she agrees that thisad mental trauma of
Her's was caused by him only.


Sometimes she would think that this
Man has split personality syndrome.
He was so loving with his family.


But who cares, he's now
forever out of my life . . . forever.



At that moment she was brought back
From her 'Decoding Shivaay' world by
The constant ringing of her phone.

What time was it ?

She was so engrossed in her thoughts that
She lost track of everything after she laid
In bed . . . last night.



Glancing at the wall, she saw the clock
Strikes 9 AM. . . well now you know
What delirium that man has caused.
She wasn't able to sleep the whole
Night.



Pushing these thoughts aside ,
She nevertheless picked the phone up.


' Hi! Pinku!' she muttered lazily.

'Oh no I'm her dadi'


Anika sat up straight on her bed.

'Namaste Dadiji'

'Namaste beta. I'm so embarrassed to ask this,
but I want a favour from you. Billu I mean Shivaay
Is getting married and I want you to be his wedding
Planner. Beta I know he has done all the wrongs to
you and I want to make up for it.


'But dadi how can I work there.
I have my canteen, who's gonna
look after and I'm worried about the expenses'


'We are obviously going to pay you beta.
Its a job and I know you have a little brother
and you're worried about his safety, so you
can ask him to come with you. And think this
as an apology from our side for our Billu's deeds.



Anika sighed defeated, 'Okay dadi as you say'


And thinking he was out
of your life, was a bad bad idea Anika *sigh*.



A/N : I'm finally done *sigh*
I hope you guys like it.
And I couldn't resist mentioning me before you.
If guys have time, please read this book. It's amazing.

Xoxo

PS: I'll post other one shots soon and
Its not mandatory that they'll follow the story
Of the preceding one shot.

Created

Last reply

Replies

9

Views

2.5k

Users

7

Likes

24

Frequent Posters

1017333 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
INDEX

#1 Audacious : Page 1
#2
Edited by ananya925 - 9 years ago
priyanvs thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
hi anaaya happy friendship day ... and abt updated it is awesome i mean it is different from others stories i have read and all the best for ur exams and study well dear and i like the way u describe abt anika thoughts was good

shail_j15 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Hello...happy friendship day... Yaar you can make it as FF...os was amazing...do write more...
1017333 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: priyanvs


hi anaaya happy friendship day ... and abt updated it is awesome i mean it is different from others stories i have read and all the best for ur exams and study well dear and i like the way u describe abt anika thoughts was good



Aww! Priyanka happy friendship day.
And thank you so much yaar ;)
I hope I perform well , only two
Are left.
And your thoughts means a lot to me.
Take care :)
1017333 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: shail_j15

Hello...happy friendship day... Yaar you can make it as FF...os was amazing...do write more...



Aww! Thanks and happy friendship day.
And thank you so much for this lovely comment.
Sanavi thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Nice concept.
Anika here in denial nd confused why she is thinking about tht audacious man.
Nw she'll be planning the marriage, why is life so unfair.
Ab toh use roz dekhna padega.

Do continue soon.

P.s. Happy friendship day
iamred thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Hey, baby girl!
First of all,
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY! *kisses*
Now back to this One Shot thread!
I am so glad you are writing again, it is such a reliever from all the stress!
Plus, it was super good!
When Anika is involved, the first thought that comes to mind is Shivaay. But I am so glad you decided to hint at her feelings and admiration for Sahil too!
That was beautiful!
Hahahaha!
Poor woman, trying to get rid of Shivaay Singh Oberoi?
Sorry lady, that is so not happening!
The man will haunt her even in death! *shuts up* Bad comment, damn!
I won't say it is interesting, since you practically forbade it!
*laughs*
It was pretty captivating though!
Good luck for the exams!

Much love!
Blessed be!

XOXO
~Red
PenguinBaby thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Aww Anika misses him😆
That was a really nice concept, so simple yet so real. She's a strong girl, forgetting her past and moving on, yet agreeing to help in the marriage of that audacious man! It shows how kind-hearted and forgiving she is, even to a man like Shivaay, who almost destroyed her life!

Great one Ananya! Waiting for the others, plz do PM me if possible!

-Sanu
---Angel--- thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
I loved your OS dear!❤️
The way you described Anika's thoughts was wonderful!
You are a brilliant writer!
I have read Jojo Moyes Me before you and I agree it's a fantastic book. I just loved how you made the connection between William and Sahil.
Being a writer myself I know what you mean about comments and how they can sometimes just make your day...
By the way I also loved your AnShi SS One Night it's amazing!
I have also been to the BD forum because I loved the show and read some of your work there it is also fabulous.
Do write another story soon dear!
PS.All the best for your exams😃
(You can call me Angel)


Edited by ...Angels... - 9 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".